Date: 07/16/12 07:10 am Title: Chapter 1
I'm not a fan of BoTom either but I really liked this story! It was really cool
Author's Response: Oh that's awesome, thank you so much! Very glad to have gotten into your liking with this, especially as it's something that's not usually my cup of tea either :)
Date: 08/10/10 02:57 pm Title: Chapter 1
The story is great! but I didnt quite get why Tom was sad? :S
-hugs-
Author's Response: I'm really happy to hear you liked it :) There was no particular reason for Tom being sad, I guess he usually is the "rock" out of the twins and he too sometimes needs the days when he can just cuddle with Bill and say nothing.
Date: 06/06/09 12:13 pm Title: Chapter 1
oh, this is just lovely, very well written. very sweet but very hot at the same time. :)
Author's Response: Thank you - sweet and hot, that's just so twins :)
Date: 04/14/09 04:31 pm Title: Chapter 1
Hallo!
I have to say I loved this a lot. Bottom!Tom is not an everyday thing for me, but your story makes everything very plausible and real. Dominant!Bill in a lot of stories is different than how you interpreted him to be. I LOVED the soft, quiet loving that still managed to be passionate and sexy, while just making me feel warm and fuzzy inside. It's got its angst and its subtle fluff and its smut and everything a good twincest fic really needs. I didn't find any mechanical errors. Really enjoyed this! Keep writing!
-BRE
Author's Response: Oh, thank you so much for this review, it made me so happy! As I'm not greatly eager on bottom Tom either and sometimes get lured to the dark side, I too leave reviews with something not quite being my cup of tea but still liking it, so it means especially much to know someone does that to me as well. I didn't really want to have this dominating Bill, I feel that in order for me to write it this way, it should be more of a loving act than about control. Or who knows, maybe one day I'll get completely crazy and write this whipping spanking bondage fic with dominatrix Bill :D
Date: 04/13/09 07:58 pm Title: Chapter 1
I liked it. It was pretty good.
Author's Response: Thanks, I'm glad you liked :)
Date: 04/10/09 10:03 pm Title: Chapter 1
awwww how sweet. i love it when Bill plays big brother for Tom sometimes
Author's Response: Thank you :) I too warm to the idea that Tom can't always be the strong one, that he too needs some tender loving care sometimes - and when he does, Bill is there and Tom isn't too proud to ask.
Date: 04/10/09 12:32 am Title: Chapter 1
Love te idea. Really well thought out and written. The position you had them starting in was really weird though; I didn't like it.
Author's Response: I'm happy to hear you liked this, thanks :) The position I thought would be intimate at first, on their sides, but I agree that it might have not come out exactly like I planned. Luckily they switched shortly ;)
Date: 04/09/09 11:31 pm Title: Chapter 1
very sweet and sexy and real -- tom's gotta be vulnerable too sometimes, and it just makes him so delicious ;)
Author's Response: Yes it does, he's one yummy boy :) He acts up so much to the public eye, but I have a feeling he's quite different in reality. And Bill knows who he really is, like he sees him in the worst moments and loves him anyway.
Date: 04/09/09 09:57 pm Title: Chapter 1
i could feel how sad bill was that he couldnt be with tom, this was wonderful
Author's Response: Thank you so much for a lovely review :) Yes, when Tom is sad, Bill is devastated - and vice versa.
Date: 04/09/09 03:09 pm Title: Chapter 1
Aww, this was so fluffy and cute, with sexy and hot; my favourite kind of one-shot :) I liked how Bill was there and didn't need to say anything to know that Tom was upset, and how we could just ~feel~ their twin-bond going on all the way through. :)
Author's Response: Such a beautiful review, describing the twins I see :) Saying that you felt their twin bond is like the ultimate compliment on this for me.
Date: 04/09/09 01:45 pm Title: Chapter 1
I thought that was fantastic! Really, really good job. I loved the whole thing!
Author's Response: You just made me a very happy person, thanks :)
Date: 04/09/09 01:20 pm Title: Chapter 1
I absolutely love the idea of Tom sometimes needing the kind of satisfaction only giving up control can give. And who else to provide it for him than Bill. Also, it somehow balances out their relationship in my eyes, because both of them give and receive and this way they are each other's equals and that's how I normally see the twins - neither especially dominant, more like complementing each other.
And about the story: beautiful. I especially liked the phone call, where neither said anything only a choked I love you in the end. Love.
Author's Response: You know what? You should start writing the summaries for my stories. You leave these reviews that make me so happy, always saying exactly what I wished to show in a few sentences. I always get so happy when I see you've reviewed :) rnI see the twins that way too, behind their public personas that are so stereotyped. In a loving relationship, be it sexual or not, it's not about who's in control or who has more power. It's about the love between these two people, and you go all lengths for the people you love. I can't imagine a thing the twins wouldn't do for each other. rnThe phone call was my favourite part too; it came to me when I was at work, having a cigarette, and I had this fic building up in my mind the whole day. I'm glad you liked it.
Date: 04/09/09 12:59 pm Title: Chapter 1
I think you really summed up the connection between two people in a long term relationship when they instinctively know what the other needs. Beautiful!
Author's Response: That is such a compliment, it's exactly what I wished to show - glad you liked, and thank you so much for taking the time to leave such a lovely review :)
Date: 04/09/09 12:57 pm Title: Chapter 1
I don't like Tom on bottom either usually, but this good. I enjoyed reading it :)
Author's Response: I'm the same, but with a few stories, I've been so enchanted with, I've left the similar reviews - so yours means very much to me :)
Date: 04/09/09 12:21 pm Title: Chapter 1
Simply Wonderful!
Author's Response: :) Thank you so much!
Date: 04/09/09 11:23 am Title: Chapter 1
What a beautiful bottom!Tom story. It felt really natural and right. I love how gentle Bill is even as he is the one taking control. This left me feeling warm and fuzzy this morning--thanks!
Author's Response: Yay, that's how I hoped it would feel, thank you again so much :) It seems natural to me that Bill (and Tom, too) would be gentle with each other, no matter how kinky it might get, but there's always the sweet love there too. Like with these two, the sex really isn't about controlling or who's the top dog, but about something entirely else.