Date: 05/02/13 12:43 am Title: Chapter 1
Fantastically hot!!
Date: 07/09/09 02:30 pm Title: Chapter 1
Wow, this is fantastic. I usually don't do Georg/Tom, but this is written so wonderfully, its impossible to resist. I love nervous Tom and protective Bill, it seems so very them. My favorite line: “Not to ruin it for you Tom, but you still are a teenager." XD
Author's Response: Thank you so much! <3 I am glad that you gave Torg a chance and that you enjoyed it. Hehehe that line amused me too much not to include it XD
Date: 05/31/09 11:04 am Title: Chapter 1
I loved it :D They be cutie-pies ^^ I just love Torg :D
xx Chi ^^
Author's Response: Torg warms the heart ;)rnrnThanks for reading!
Date: 04/15/09 03:42 am Title: Chapter 1
This was very well written. There were a couple of spelling errors but they can be easily overlooked I guess.
I liked how you expressed Tom's nervousness and his need to have everything perfect for Georg. You did a good job!
Author's Response: Thank you! I am glad that you enjoyed the story ^^
Date: 04/08/09 09:24 pm Title: Chapter 1
That was really good!
Author's Response: Thank you! :D
Date: 04/08/09 08:57 pm Title: Chapter 1
awww that was sooo cute
Author's Response: Thank you! I am glad that you enjoyed it ^^
Date: 04/08/09 06:52 am Title: Chapter 1
that was amazing.
no lie.
x]].
Author's Response: Thank you! :D
Date: 04/07/09 11:46 pm Title: Chapter 1
Mmmmmmm. Fuck!! TORG!!
And people wonder what's happened to my brain and why it doesn't work. It's cause stuff lime this has cause it to melt!! Mm mm mmmmm this was hawt stuff!! Those two would be a sexy couple!! Definitely.
Author's Response: Hahaha poor brain of yours. Oh yeah, sexy and hot couple indeed! *___* I am glad that you enjoyed it!
Date: 04/07/09 11:42 pm Title: Chapter 1
Aww, I loved this Tiorg (I guess?)! So cute and nicely written, this one will be on my read-again list =D
Author's Response: On a read-again list? WOW you made me blush! I am glad that you enjoyed it :D
Date: 04/07/09 11:41 pm Title: Chapter 1
Thia was cute and hot at the same time, I am starting to love this pairing and finding this story was a real treat.
Thank you for posting it. ^_^
Author's Response: You are welcome! I love me some Torg so I couldn't resist the prompt :) I am glad that you enjoyed it!
Date: 04/07/09 09:27 pm Title: Chapter 1
I will say it again here: this is exactly what I was hoping to see when I threw that prompt out there. I really hoped that someone would be able to deliver a story that was amusing and hot, and yet managed to make me feel almost as nervous as the boys in it. You did an incredible job, and I'm so very glad you chose to do it. Thank you. :D
Author's Response: Thank you once more!! I must confess that I get very anxious when I write something so it was great to know that the author of the prompt enjoyed it :D
Date: 04/07/09 09:19 pm Title: Chapter 1
That was wonderfully and brilliantly written@ It was so eloquent. Not to mention humorous, yet realistic. You took your time with it, and the fact that it's not just PWP, but actually goes in depth with their emotions--, and that it goes over their whole night and not just the sex-- is something that I thoroughly appreciate.
This is quality work, Velius. Tops!
Great job! *Runs off to see what else you've written*
Author's Response: wow thank you! rnrnI am glad that you enjoyed it ^^ I must confess that lately I've been getting bored with plain PWPs so that is why I decided to give some back story to the fic ;)rnrnI don't have many, but I hope you enjoy my other stories :D