Date: 02/21/11 02:34 pm Title: Chapter 1
Beautiful. Totally and completely beautiful.
Date: 01/11/11 12:09 pm Title: Chapter 1
aww... *warm fuzzies at the end*
Date: 11/21/10 09:39 am Title: Chapter 1
Phew, sorry it took so long. OK...
I really like this because Georg doesn't get as much love in this fandom as the twins do. Being are always constantly reffering to Gustav as the underdog and person who doesn't get much attention...therefore GAINING him more attention. But sometimes we forget about good 'ol Georg. Gotta love that guy right?
Well written, my friend :)
Date: 11/21/10 09:29 am Title: Chapter 1
That was great! Georg seems so nice. This whole thing was quite bittersweet. I enjoyed it alot, maybe just watch the spacings of the paragraphs but other than that tiny spec of nothingness - I liked it. Well done.
Date: 10/29/10 02:49 pm Title: Chapter 1
This is so cute !
Teddybear!Georg is adorable, really.
I wish I had one, lol.
Haha I so can imagine when he gets fed up with all the shit Bill and Tom pull ...
Love it ! Really you've done a good job, one wants nothing but to hug poor Georg baby after they've read you story.
GO GEORG ! YOUR HAIR ROCKS !
Sooo ... where was I ? Yes ... and I'm glad you haven't pushed the BillGeorg (or GeorgBill for that matter)too far, I'm a hopeless TomBill shipper so.
Anyways keep writing because you have a way to put words in Georg's mouth that's so realistic and touching. And even when he's crying, he doesn't look like a crybaby, it's just sad and beautiful so ... bravo !
Keep going !
Date: 10/29/10 01:55 pm Title: Chapter 1
haha poor Billa.... this is the first time I've read a fic in Georg's pov and i liked it. now if you excuse me, i do believe i have to take care of some Georg-haters *grabs pitchfork and angry mob*
Date: 07/25/10 11:49 am Title: Chapter 1
Again, I enjoyed this (: it's really good.
Date: 07/09/10 12:52 pm Title: Chapter 1
Unique and interestig read. You have a good grasp of Georg's attitude and personality. It sounds very much like him. The characterization of the rest of the members of the band are also realistic. Good job :)
--Jilly
Date: 07/08/10 06:26 am Title: Chapter 1
Aww that was cute =3
I cracked up at the whole spider thing. I totally see that happening ;] hehe silly Bill.
Date: 06/19/10 06:08 am Title: Chapter 1
THAT WAS BRILLIANTLY WRITTEN!
Favourite lines: " I thought the spider was gonna take me to its family! And they were gonna invite their relatives and friends! And the friends were gonna invite their families! And they were gonna eat me! And with my hair, and bones, and nails they'd build a fucking discotheque!" Cute and Funny; i can actually see Bill saying something liek that! xD
I prefer 3rd person storie, because i think that 1st person writers get carried away a bit with their characters, BUT THAT WAS AMAZING! I actually had to remind myself that it wasn't actually Georg who wrote this! xD
It may have taken you a year to write this, but you did it extremely well. It wasn't melodramatic and i could actually believe the stories that happened to Tokio Hotel. :)
I seriously couldn't pull my eyes away from the screen. I usually get bored while readin some stories, but you write so enthrallingly all the way through and i LOVED IT!
I like how you wrote the other band members too, really believable and their actions fit their personalities.
THE CROWD OUTSIDE THE HOTEL WERE SOO MEAN!! :O those btices, how could anybody hate Georg!?! Still, you wrote the reaction of him well. He cried, but he got over it, and i think that that's exactly what Georg would have done in real life. I can see Georg as bein dependent on only family and friends and someone who would get over negative criticism quickly.
If i ever meat Tokio Hotel (lol, tough chance, but, eh) I swear i will smile at Georg and say 'You play bass really well.'
I'm actually favouring this story, haha, not 'cause we met in the schrei box, but i honestly love and enjoyed this fic. It was SOOO intriguing, you're amazing at capturing and describing feelings. Continue writing because THF needs more Gen writers (Georg writers too), and emotional writers like you. <3
Date: 04/12/10 10:19 am Title: Chapter 1
The style in this is very natural. And your friend who told you to keep it a one-shot is right: don't make it longer.
However, I have to say that it takes a little getting used to, stylistically. What is it? A long drabble? It's too meandering to be an ordinary "linear" story. In that case, any awkwardness I felt reading it might just be because I don't really see fics of this type often. Wow, that was a hard review. Still, thanks for giving me something I don't encounter much.
Date: 03/29/10 01:36 pm Title: Chapter 1
Great story well letter thing this makes it sound like Georg and Bill have a bromance going on!
Date: 03/28/10 11:51 am Title: Chapter 1
That was really good! It was nice hearing something from Georg.
It'd be GREAT if you could do a Gustav like this. :D
Keep it up, Kaulitz! :)
Date: 10/17/09 06:49 am Title: Chapter 1
hehe i loved it! I don't normally read stuff like this but you've persuaded me to read more :D OMG i can imagine Bill screaming lol xx
Date: 10/09/09 07:55 am Title: Chapter 1
Well first gen fic that i liked as I told you like few minutes ago ^^
I loved it (: You got well deep into the character, and it didn't sound anything un-Georgish to me tttt :]
Nice work with the writing, I never read a Georg POV before but this one is great if you ask me ^^
Keep up the good work =3
Date: 09/19/09 08:52 am Title: Chapter 1
This was funny, and I think we need more stories from Georg's POV. I can picture Bill standing naked and screaming because of a spider, that would be epic.
Date: 09/15/09 12:43 pm Title: Chapter 1
I really like this Elin. You gotta do more of these. This is really good. Amazing job. I love how Bill is screaming while butt naked because he saw a spider. That made me laugh. Good work.
Date: 08/08/09 03:37 pm Title: Chapter 1
Awww :) hehehe, very cute darlin'. Loved how you made everyone interact with each other, even though it was from Georg's POV n_n
Date: 06/21/09 05:41 pm Title: Chapter 1
hey hey!
I liked It, you already have my opinion, I know it doesn't matter but you should do the same with our little friend Gustav (:
Date: 06/21/09 06:09 am Title: Chapter 1
This was really good! I love the humor mixed with the angst. Very realistic. Please write another one soon!