Date: 04/09/09 06:33 pm Title: Chapter 3
Protective Tom is just so adorable. And wise, dependable Gustav here...Georg would be doing so much worse without him. Another great chapter!
Author's Response: I love writing Tom protective - glad you enjoyed it!
Date: 04/09/09 06:07 pm Title: Chapter 3
This is a great story so far, I could feel the tension in this chapter and the end I felt bad for Bill and for Georg. I can't wait to see what happens next. So update soon I am so adding this to my favorites.
Author's Response: Thank you so much!
Date: 04/09/09 01:03 pm Title: Chapter 2
I love all the angst in this chapter! Poor Georg everyone's against him, he should tell Gustav what's up, not keep it to himself!
Awesome chapter can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: He should, but it's easier said than done - thank you again!
Date: 04/09/09 12:21 am Title: Chapter 2
Wow! So good!
Update soon? (: (:
Author's Response: Thank you!
Date: 04/08/09 08:08 pm Title: Chapter 2
I really like the way you let the intensity of Georg's emotions and inner conflict come across here. Georg (or technically, his public persona) seems to me so level-headed and laid-back, but in this situation his strong reactions still seem so "in-character," as it were =D, and the flashes of empathy and perceptiveness despite his inner turmoil also feels very "in-character" to me. And I love that even through Georg's perspective, the way the twins' interactions with each other are written is able to convey how strong and how loving their relationship is.
Author's Response: I really enjoyed getting into Georg's head on this so it meant a lot that you really found it convincing this way - thank you!
Date: 04/08/09 07:32 pm Title: Chapter 2
The character depictions are fantastic in this. I love it.
Author's Response: Thank you!
Date: 04/08/09 06:28 pm Title: Chapter 2
Huh, this is a different view point, and I like it. Update soon please!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Date: 04/08/09 04:55 pm Title: Chapter 2
I am loving this so far! I love all the drama and tension, and Georg's internal struggle. Can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Really thrilled you could get into the tension of it all!
Date: 04/08/09 04:07 pm Title: Chapter 1
You are killing me with this - the story is just so full of hurt, anger and confusion - I love it!
can't wait to read the next chapter
Author's Response: I'm really glad the emotion came across so well!
Date: 04/08/09 03:37 pm Title: Chapter 2
This is wonderful; it needs more reviews. It's so rare to see someone do the someone-finds-out plot line realistically.
*_*
Author's Response: This is rather belated, but I just wanted to say thank you so much for this; you have no idea how much I grinned to get a review like this from you.
Date: 04/08/09 03:11 pm Title: Chapter 2
I just wanna hug Geo, and tell him it's okay... Everyone was ganging up on him...Poor guy... Great chapter, I could feel die angst...
Author's Response: Thank you!
Date: 04/08/09 01:55 am Title: Chapter 1
I've read this on LJ actually; it is SO good. The conflict and tension within and between characters, even when silent, are so palpable and so raw. I think this subject--of the G's (at least one of them here) finding out about the twins' relationship--hasn't been done very often or at least this directly before. And the way it's been done in this fic is just truly amazing.
Author's Response: Thank you so very much ♥
Date: 04/07/09 08:18 pm Title: Chapter 1
read this LJ and have fallenin love with it ^_^
Author's Response: Thanks you <3
Date: 04/07/09 07:19 pm Title: Chapter 1
You know, I think as salt in the wound, Georg has a little thing for Bill... This is very good, and original ^^ Usu. if a character is disapproving of the twincest, you don't see their POV on it, and definitely not in a much depth and believability as you've written. Kudos!
Author's Response: Thank you ♥
Date: 04/07/09 03:34 pm Title: Chapter 1
You absolutely need to keep writing more and more. You write these boys so well.
Author's Response: ♥
Date: 04/07/09 03:04 pm Title: Chapter 1
I really like it so far, it'll be interesting to see how it plays out!!
Hope you'll update soon=)
Author's Response: Thank you ^^
Date: 04/07/09 02:30 pm Title: Chapter 1
shit 0.0
Bill and Tom has a litle problem... Gerog!
Like it give me more
Author's Response: Lol, just a little problem ^^