Date: 05/26/09 11:50 pm Title: Tom - Emotionless
No its good its perfect timing 4 the twins to open up about what they have gone through
ahhh xp can't wait to see toms reaction!!
Author's Response: *wipes brow* thanks. I was a bit unsure
Date: 05/26/09 11:33 pm Title: Tom - Emotionless
plz update sooon thx
Date: 05/26/09 11:33 pm Title: Tom - Emotionless
plz update sooon thx
Date: 05/26/09 11:32 pm Title: Tom - Emotionless
ROFL! "I don't wanna be Bubba's bitch!"
ROFL!
Tomi's dad is GAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAYYYYYYYYYY! ROFL ROFL ROFL
Author's Response: XD I loved the Bubba's bitch line too
Date: 05/26/09 11:30 pm Title: Tom - Emotionless
FEEDBACK: A huge resounding "GOOOOOOOD!"
Oh! I love this story! So much! The end there was fantastic, the whole inner dialogue that Tom had with himself. Wonderful.
I'm glad the boys are getting along a little better. I feel so bad for Tom, though, thinking all those years that Bill just didn't want to talk to him. That's sad.
I can't wait to see what Bll decides to do with his shattered tongue. That should prove to be interesting...
Please, please, PLEASE update soon!
kthxbai. *wink*
Author's Response: Yay! Thanks so much|! I feel bad for Tom too, but at least he's getting better. And I hope you like what I have in mind for the tongue thing. Looks cool in my mind, at least. . .
Date: 05/26/09 11:28 pm Title: Tom - Emotionless
I really liked this chapter, especially how you went from all serious to funny. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Author's Response: XD I'm glad to hear it. Thanks
Date: 05/26/09 11:26 pm Title: Tom - Emotionless
iadvbnkodsnvodk i freaking love it!!! i dont think you moved to fast i think it actaully fell together nicely :)
Author's Response: XD Thanks so much! I'm glad it worked
Date: 05/23/09 05:18 pm Title: Bill - One
omg i GET IT!! wow and tom didnt know that he was callin the wrong numbr or smthin?? lol update plzz
Author's Response: Hehe yup. Poor little Tomi!
Date: 05/22/09 07:07 am Title: Bill - I Heard You
oooh, That helped a lot;D thank you!
Date: 05/21/09 02:48 am Title: Bill - One
Omg. This chapter was definitely one of my faves. Oo. Intense!! :3
My lil' brother is dyslexic.
Date: 05/21/09 01:29 am Title: Bill - I Heard You
. >.< dont be sorry cuz I liked it i just had like issues. -drags you away from the corner-
Author's Response: *Huggles* ok then
Date: 05/21/09 12:14 am Title: Bill - One
Damn it I want more...please? *pouts*
Author's Response: Ok . . . next week XD
Date: 05/20/09 10:02 pm Title: Bill - One
XD geez so thats y tom never called the right place?! is it?! OMG! ><
omgomg! well even if its short is smthn n im loving it! really! poor Tomi...
Author's Response: *grins* YUP! It is!
Date: 05/20/09 09:08 pm Title: Bill - One
wow i loved it i feel bad for both o fhtem but bill being in that condition is so sad an i loved the ending of this chapter :) you know i noticed that bill was right here they do ignore him and i loved how you said thats why he is loud because then people wont forget him i think that is and awsome line because its as if he is araid for people to not remember him and forget him just like he thought tom did and so he has to stand out so that wouldnt ever happen to him again i cant wait or more im soo excited i love this story really theres something about this story that is really original and i think thats why i love it so much :) its great and toms character is actually just as heart breaking because you can see that he covers all the sadness and rejection he feels with anger and violence ots really sad when stu like that happens it happened to me and still is im trying to put it in the past but its hard i think thats another reasone why i love this story so much is because i can relate so well to it great job :) oh and hehe im sorry if you think my review is too long
Author's Response: I'm so glad you pointed out why Bill acts the way he does. You're the only one who did, and I'm so glad that part didn't go unnoticed. And NO! You're review was definately not too long. I didn't figure anyone would relate to this, it was just something I came up with. I'm so glad it did though. I feel bad for Tom too. It's sad all they wanted was each other, and both thought the other forgot about them. *huggles lots and lots* Thanks so much for reviewing, hun.
Date: 05/20/09 08:35 pm Title: Bill - One
ah! an explanation for no phone calls. but um, hello? were there no adults around to help them call? thanks for the updates, keep up the good work!!
Author's Response: Well, Bill had no idea what the number was, so no blaming him. And well, as for Tom . . .that'll come out next chapter
Date: 05/20/09 05:04 pm Title: Bill - One
I really like it, especially the last part. I was surprised that Tom said anything to Bill at all.
Jorg and Gordon dating?! XDD That's the first time I've encountered THAT one on this site! I like it, though, I'm not gonna lie. Their names alone just make it sound like a good couple. Gordon and Jorg. Jorg and Gordon. Nice ring to it. *nods*
Author's Response: I loved the idea of them dating too! I think I might make it show up a lot, just because it's so different. It does work so well, doesn't it?
Date: 05/20/09 04:52 pm Title: Bill - One
OMG! what happens after that?!
Author's Response: Well, the watermelon chased the elephant across the street and down the sidewalk. The elephant stopped, and the watermelon did too. Then the watermelon was set on fire, and the elephant never got chased again. The End. XD That's what happened.
Date: 05/20/09 03:13 pm Title: Bill - One
wait who is dsylexic, bill or tom?
Author's Response: Tomi boy is.
Date: 05/20/09 09:02 am Title: Bill - One
duh..... just cuz my english is no so far to explain my... indignation? dsylexic? ¬¬.....ok.
Date: 05/20/09 09:01 am Title: Bill - One
What? All I know about dyslexia is the spelling things backward part... Did he dial the wrong number or something? Poor twins...