Date: 04/16/09 12:13 am Title: Elevators
Wow! I just found this story tonight, and I read the entire story the whole way through. I really, REALLY like this! It's so intense, and so detailed, which really makes the story a good read. The plot is unique, which is very difficult to do on a site with this many people lol. I can't wait for more! You had me on the edge of my seat :) *tracking*
Author's Response: Haha. I try. I'll start chapter five tomorrow. And we'll probably get around to some secks then. Or really close. Whoo. Glad you like. -grins- ~Inari
Date: 04/09/09 02:12 am Title: Blood
oh!! interesting past flashback~ :D aww.. i do feel bad for Mr. Galloway's secretary D: well we shall see what happens to her later~~ :DD o00oh~ Andi is going to make another appearance~ keep up the good work!
Author's Response: Andi /will/ be making another appearance. It could end badly for him, though. Maybe. Haven't decided yet. And she'll be fine. She might make another appearance and actually get a name. ahaha. Heeeeeey. I need a beta and I don't like any of the people that are on the list. Would you like to do it? Go ahead and email me or something. ~Inari
Date: 04/07/09 09:42 am Title: Windows
I like this story so far!
You write very well, I enjoy reading your writing. And I like your Bill and Tom, the way you describe and tell about them.
And the plot is interesting, this story is very fascinating. I can't wait to see where this is going.
I wish I could write this review in my own lanquaqe, I could write it the way I would love to ;)
xx
Author's Response: Unfortunately, the only language I speak fluently is English. My first language. And I can kinda of flounder through German if you give me enough time. This is actually a trial run of a new writing style for me. It's really description-based and not dialogue-based like so many other stories. You can convey so much without using words. It's what I try to do as much as possible. ~Inari
Date: 04/07/09 01:28 am Title: Windows
I likey your banner!
And Andi in the next chapter is good cause I like Andi..
:DDD
I really, really like this! These are the types of fics I'm looking for!
Killer!Tom and Controlling!Bill.
I LOVE LOVE LOVE IT.
:DDD
More soon ,love?
Author's Response: Soon yes, I promise. And it's always better if there's a little blood. Banner took foreverrrrrrrrr and I need to fix it, but then I'd have to practically redo it and I don't wanna. Haha... ~Inari
Date: 04/07/09 01:00 am Title: Windows
*blushes* oh my.. thank you!! *glomps* ^.^ and now yay~~ for a new chapter soo quick!! :DDD aww... yay~ we get to see a more playful/sweeter side to Tom and Bill, too~ :DD oo0ooh~ Andi is coming up! i wonder what part he is playing in this fic~ :D thank you for such a quick update and a longer chapter~ :DDD i can't wait to see more~ :DD
Author's Response: Chapter three will probably be up within the next few days. Anywhere from tomorrow night to Thursday night. Depending on how fast I feel like typing. You'll also get to see little Bill and Tom next chapter, but don't tell. Shhhhhh. It'll be our secret, haha. ~Inari
Date: 04/06/09 10:07 pm Title: Mistakes
oo0ooh.. Tom waiting hand and foot for Bill. :33 that is cute but ah..killing people.. is a bit scary 0_0;; well that is me.. I think this is interesting~ :DD i can't wait to read some more :DD
Author's Response: Whoo. Yay, you're my first reviewer! -tackles- I already have the second chapter finished. It'll be put up with my banner I'm making. ahaha... It's all for Bill, in Tom's opinion.rnrn~Inari