Date: 05/01/09 02:35 pm Title: Rings
*Pops head in* I liked it.
Author's Response: Yay, thanks! ~Inari
Date: 05/01/09 12:38 pm Title: Rings
I'm not sure if I should write these here or send you an email but I'm not telling anything away because I'm just guessing so I will write here ;)
I think Bushido will be the bad guy of the story. He wants something from Bill, maybe it's just sex or something else too. There's something why Tom doesn't trust him and he will be jealouse too because of their relationship (what ever it is). I mean maybe there will be something else too than just the sex/somekind of relationship between Bill and Bushido. Like for example Bushido wants to use Bill for his own purposes. Or it's just the sex ;)
I don't know if there will be any fights or something between the twins but like we both wrote, Bushido will mix things up. Maybe he will come between the twins. And maybe in the end, Bill will realise his feelings for Tom. Maybe something (bad) will happen (to Tom), and after that he sees how he really cares. Well, at least I hope so ;)
That is what I have been thinking about the story. Like I wrote, I might be totally wrong. I really can't wait to see what will happen! ;)
xx
Author's Response: ...Aha. I don't mind you writing them here. Either way, they're reviews. And Bushido MIGHT be the bad guy, he might not be. Either way, you've given me a fair amount of ideas. Muaha. ~Inari
Date: 05/01/09 02:10 am Title: Rings
I really like this story. Favoriting ;D
Author's Response: Yay, thanks! ~Inari
Date: 05/01/09 01:25 am Title: Rings
I just wrote what I would like to happen ;) I have an idea what might come but we will see when the story goes on. I really can't wait!
I was so sure about the jealousy part. I thought about it after I posted my last review. Bushido will come and mix things up.
xx
Author's Response: I'd love to hear your ideas if you'd like to share them. Ahahaha. Though I really kind of have a vague plot happening. And Bushido WILL mix things up. He's not afraid of Tom, either. ~Inari
Date: 05/01/09 01:12 am Title: Rings
I'm still kind of confused about how each one views their relationship. It seems like there could be some differing levels of devotion. Tom leaving Bill with the G's? Tom wandering around without Bill? I'm actually more worried for Tom's protection at this point. That was a lovely chapter, by the way.
Author's Response: Well... let's just say that you SHOULD be worried about Tom's safety. He can pretty much protect himself, though. Tom knows that he could be killed and he loves Bill enough to know that and try and keep him from being hurt. Even if it hurts himself ~Inari
Date: 05/01/09 12:30 am Title: Rings
I read your respons to Anony. Like I wrote, I have been wondering about that too. I hope it will change, you know, that Bill would love Tom for real too and not just "using" him. Maybe Tom will get hurt and Bill will realise or something? ;)
Oh well, I just have to wait and see what will happen ;)
I'm not a big fan of Billshido so I have to say I'm a little bit afraid what will come... Well, at least it's just a side pairing ;)
But I liked it!
xx
Author's Response: ...Are you psychic?rnrnAnd Billshido is really a side pairing. Tom gets jealous.rnrnAnd I'm glad you liked it.rnrn~Inari
Date: 04/30/09 10:52 pm Title: Rings
i love this story!!! but i feel bad for tomi. he loves his billa so much. yet, billa just doesn't seem to be able to return that sentiment...
Author's Response: Bill loves Tom, but it isn't just the same as what Tom feels for Bill. Bill is (as much as it pains me to say this) kind of using Tom for his own means. The sex is easy to give and he doesn't care either way, so... -shrugs- ~Inari
Date: 04/29/09 02:25 am Title: Mistakes
Dude, I totally have a strong feeling that this story is going to get featured...Man... THIS STORY IS FUCKING ADDICTING TO READ!!!
Author's Response: OMG that would be AMAZING! I'd love for it to be featured! ~Inari
Date: 04/24/09 10:57 pm Title: Doors
this was a really good story. and im sorry i ddint reveiw earlier this week.
Author's Response: It's alright. I don't have anything better to do with my free time... Might as well wait for reviews. And thanks. ~inari
Date: 04/22/09 10:52 pm Title: Elevators
And I know what's coming next. Dun dun dun.
Author's Response: You know you've already read it, dearie.
Date: 04/22/09 09:40 pm Title: Blood
I love this story. It's dark, and very edgy, but I can see a shimmering gleam around those edges, reminding me there's still love to be found beneath all the hate and violence. Tom is such a great big brother, and a friend. Bill's got that business thing to a T. You've got this story in the bag, lady.
Author's Response: There's a silver lining... somewhere in there. Haha. Tom's there to serve Bill. It's all he cares about, really. Love makes people do strange things, that's for sure.
Date: 04/22/09 07:57 pm Title: Windows
I like how you describe Tom as a "protector and a weapon." That's some good imagery!
Author's Response: I do try, that's for sure. I'm more into putting the image into the reader's mind rather than telling them exactly what's going on. Thoughts are more important than words.
Date: 04/22/09 07:53 pm Title: Mistakes
It's a start. I'm sure I'll get it once I've had the middle! XD
Author's Response: I'm sure, Haha.
Date: 04/21/09 04:28 pm Title: Elevators
I will stick around, you can count on that.
xx
Author's Response: Haha. Good. I'm glad, thank you. ~Inari
Date: 04/19/09 02:13 am Title: Elevators
This story is AWESOME. It broke my awesome meter. That's how awesome it is. I can't wait for the next chapter, and Tom's "reward"
It's so awesome, I'm gonna pimp it on the next chapter of my story, Vicious. XD Because the two share some minor similarities. ^_^ And this story needs more love.
Author's Response: Oooh, YAY! Haha! Thank you so much. Whoohoo! It does need love, I agree. It also needs ego-stroking, which you are doing. -grins- rnrnI'll check out yours for you. Since I like to read stories anyways.rnrn~InarirnrnPS. Haha, I must be exhausted because instead of responding to this review I just sorta... reviewed my own story. -rubs forehead- Ugh.
Date: 04/16/09 07:37 pm Title: Elevators
Oh god! Love it!
Can't wait to read more... I love assissine twin fics....
Author's Response: Patience is a virtue, young grasshopper. Haha. ~Inari
Date: 04/16/09 07:07 pm Title: Mistakes
I love this so much!! I don't review often, but this story needs more of them! I love everything about the whole story so far; it's awesome. I really want to know what happens at the end of every chapter, so please hurry! :D
Author's Response: Thank for reviewing, then. And my poor fingers can only type so fast. I'm trying to hurry, I promise. But I'm trying to get ideas for other stories down on paper. And I have life going on as well. But I'm writing as fast as I can. ~Inari
Date: 04/16/09 04:52 am Title: Elevators
I LOVE IT!!! *faints*
So good that I found it!! Now I'm addicted!!
Author's Response: -fans gently- I'm glad. I try hard. ~Inari
Date: 04/16/09 02:27 am Title: Elevators
I'm interested in about their love for each other. Especially about Bill's, will it chance through the story or stay like it is now.
This is so interesting and I can't wait for more. I like the way you tell us more about them and their life.
So, G's came in. Can't wait for your next update!
xx
Author's Response: You'll just have to stick around to find out. I'm not spilling any secrets. And I'm typing as fast as I can, I promise. ~Inari
Date: 04/16/09 12:35 am Title: Elevators
That's what it looks like! Well, this is one of the weirdest and most unhealthy of twin relationships I have yet to see on this site. Right on for creativity!
Author's Response: I dunno if it's unhealthy... they seem pretty well off. It's the picture's fault, I'm telling you. Haha...