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Reviewer: jesseforever69 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/30/11 10:09 am Title: Chapter 19

this is a good story!
i cant wait tell u post the rest!

Reviewer: Sieren Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/16/10 11:26 pm Title: Chapter 19

thank you so much for the update!
cant wait for more

Author's Response: I'm trying! Between my mom yelling at me, writer's block, getting prepped for college, and bah! *flails* I'm tryin!!

Reviewer: thywillbedone Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06/14/10 03:52 pm Title: Chapter 19

SO GLAD YOU UPDATED! *FLAILS*

Awwww! I just about died at pretty much everything here and dammit, I wanna smack the G's sometimes, lol. I can't even imagine what being annoyed with the constant picture taking would be like without wanting to hurt someone!

Author's Response: I AM SO SORRY IT TOOK SO LONG! *FREAKING OUT*rnrnSchool killed meeee, sorry!!!! And college won't be much better, but I'm taking a creative writing major so that ought to help me out, I hope. Baah!rnrnI live with the constant picture taking. You learn to ignore it after a while. But there are moments (like right now) when you do want to kill something.

Reviewer: AprilBlue Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/28/09 08:21 pm Title: Chapter 18 Payback

(Evil laughter) Oh yes... Mariah is exactly like me... Poor Tomi! It's really good- but i swear, if you don't update soon i'll track you down and...um, sniff your hair? Ok, sorry about that, it's just it was so long between chapters! :)

Author's Response: Mariah is based off my twin.... I'm Lily in the story, just a fun fact there. (Not my real name though). And if you track me down to smell my hair... I will not be surprised. I live with Mariah. She pets my hair and smells it. Frequently. And so do my friends. -.- I'm working on the next chapter so I hope I get somewhere soon

Reviewer: thywillbedone Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 09/28/09 07:56 pm Title: Chapter 1 - Awaken

Oh god. I would shudder to think of them doing this to the boys in real life... *huggles you*

Author's Response: Lily's based off me and the one Mariah is based off of... Is so much worse than in this. I would know. I'm one of her prime targets. >.>

Reviewer: thywillbedone Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 09/28/09 07:13 pm Title: Chapter 18 Payback

Those girls are seriously bugging ME, never mind the boys. Ugh!

Author's Response: At least you aren't living with those girls every day. They're based off my twin and some friends, as well as me. They're a lot worse in reality, trust me. -.-

Reviewer: DaphneKaulitz Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/27/09 03:10 am Title: Chapter 18 Payback

you better keep writing,i love this story!i would really love for the twins to get more fluffy and possibly smutty towards each other...

Author's Response: I'm gonna keep writing! No worry there. And the twins are going to get there, I just need to set the stage. Which I happen to be doing.

Reviewer: anjelik Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/19/09 08:19 pm Title: Chapter 17 Murderous

hmmm... you could have her ask him (tom) how often he looks his brother up when he's not looking. hahaha... that'd be falarious! lol... hmmmm... more please.

Author's Response: There will be more, I haven't died. Just have school and writer's block. Hmmm, you know, I like that suggestion. You'll have to wait and see for what happens though. ;)

Reviewer: AprilBlue Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/26/09 04:50 am Title: Chapter 17 Murderous

Hehe Mariah is one creepy girl... Sort of like what i'd do if I met Bill...

Author's Response: XD Oh man, more people like my twin.... That sorta scares me.

Reviewer: Sieren Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/25/09 09:52 pm Title: Chapter 17 Murderous

Thanks for the update.

Author's Response: Welcome.

Reviewer: Sieren Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/14/09 05:28 pm Title: Chapter 16 Stress

Thanks for the update.
Oh and i am sorry, I have not been on Yahoo, my computer is not working and im useing moms and yahoo isnt on here

Author's Response: Welcome!rnIt's okay

Reviewer: thywillbedone Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 08/14/09 01:39 am Title: Chapter 16 Stress

UNTIL WHAT???

*whines* 

Write mooooooooooooooooooooooore! Is that incessant glaring and the hair rising on the back of your neck Tom glaring at Bill? *snickers* Please let it be him, because I would so enjoy that! Man, can someone please bitchslap this girl? Soon? She's giving ME a headache, never mind Bill!



Author's Response: O______________-rnrnEeeek!rnrnXD I'm writing! As for "that girl," that is exactly how my twin behaves. It's horrible. I'll sort out every little hair raising detail in 17.

Reviewer: AprilBlue Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/26/09 03:33 am Title: Chapter 14 Windup

Wow. This is the best story I have read in a LONG TIME. It's amazing!

Author's Response: O-o Umm, wow. Thanks

Reviewer: WhiteWolfHotel Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/23/09 09:07 pm Title: Chapter 14 Windup

LMFAO COSPLAY! lol anyway u are a fabulus writer so keep it up lol and update szooon

Author's Response: Yea, cosplay. 'Cuz I'm an anime nut. XD Thank you, I am working on Chapter 15 around three jobs.

Reviewer: Sieren Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/22/09 07:02 pm Title: Chapter 14 Windup

Thanks for the update. Sorry I havent been on yahoo in a while

Author's Response: You're welcome, and it's alright. I haven't been active much

Reviewer: AprilBlue Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/07/09 12:11 am Title: Chapter 13 Rekindle

Aaaahhh, good old twincesty love. I love it!

Author's Response: XD Yay!

Reviewer: violet_star77 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/06/09 11:50 am Title: Chapter 13 Rekindle

don't hide--just keep writing. bill isnt the tease, you are! i'm enjoying the story though. keep up the good work!

Author's Response: ^-^ Thank you!

Reviewer: violet_star77 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/06/09 02:23 am Title: Chapter 8 Shockwave

I love that Tom calls Bill, little billa, or little one. too cute!!

Author's Response: ^-^ I'm glad you love it. ^-^

Reviewer: DaphneKaulitz Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/03/09 03:34 pm Title: Chapter 13 Rekindle

awwwww yay

Author's Response: *grins* Satisfactory fix to the issue with the twins? ^-^

Reviewer: Katanasai Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/03/09 02:42 pm Title: Chapter 13 Rekindle

Not an angry person yet. :) Great chapter, keep them coming, please! My deepest sympathies on your writers' block. Horrid affliction!

Author's Response: Yey! I thinks I should get drawing the things I said I would too. xD I'm writing good now, maybe because I have an idea of where this thing is heading now. lol

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