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Reviewer: Luvs_Cherries Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/28/09 12:39 pm Title: Illusion-- Chapter one.

This is much better than I thought it would be!Are you going to finish it?

Reviewer: xVeroGore Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/09/09 07:56 am Title: Illusion-- Chapter one.

can't you write more?

Reviewer: xVeroGore Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/01/09 07:02 am Title: Illusion-- Chapter one.

cant you PLEASE whrite more?!

Reviewer: HyperActiveChick Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/05/09 09:35 pm Title: Illusion-- Chapter one.

ooooh this is sooooooooooooooo goood

Reviewer: toriboo Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06/02/09 05:17 pm Title: Illusion-- Chapter one.

That was AWESOME.....I don't know how you feel about this compliment but you write AMAZING smut.

I'm sure your future character development and chapters will be really good too!

Reviewer: foxypunx Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/11/09 10:32 am Title: Illusion-- Chapter one.

Ohlalala! Interesting! I hope you update soon!

Reviewer: sexytwin Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/08/09 12:47 am Title: Illusion-- Chapter one.

So good!... continue please!! I want more!

Reviewer: diesel3009 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/07/09 10:53 am Title: Illusion-- Chapter one.

excellent story

Reviewer: Lothirielwen Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/07/09 12:06 am Title: Illusion-- Chapter one.

Nice intro... nice dream, very nice dream...
Looking forward to reading more

Reviewer: katee Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/06/09 11:31 pm Title: Illusion-- Chapter one.

i think this is smexy!!!!! i love to read more. i thought this story would hav bad grammar, but it actually turns out to be enjoyable to read. i hope to read more soon!!!! =^.^=

Reviewer: gustavlover41 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/06/09 07:47 pm Title: Illusion-- Chapter one.

you should continue the story. Sounds like it will be awesome.

Reviewer: Mariesen Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/06/09 06:21 pm Title: Illusion-- Chapter one.

This is interesting.. I really liked this chapter n_n I'm gonna track this story, so you better update it XD

Reviewer: pandasarelovex Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/06/09 05:40 pm Title: Illusion-- Chapter one.

Thatwashot *coughcough* Update soon? :D

Reviewer: JumbieLuv Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/06/09 04:49 pm Title: Illusion-- Chapter one.

=D

Reviewer: boring_one_17 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/06/09 04:22 pm Title: Illusion-- Chapter one.

okay i LOVE this story! I'm a new member and this is the first fanfic i read, and I'm glad i was! PLEASE continue with this story!

Reviewer: tinkersowner123 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/06/09 04:07 pm Title: Illusion-- Chapter one.

that was awesome really hott i want more

Reviewer: Lazurline Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/06/09 03:52 pm Title: Illusion-- Chapter one.

"I'm not touching you."
Best line to say to a penis ever! I love this fic already, you must update...I'm going to track you too so you must! I love it. It was a little teasing, but it was great!

Reviewer: JaneFallen Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/06/09 03:40 pm Title: Illusion-- Chapter one.

Rawr! Bill is such a naughty boy!

Reviewer: PrivatePersonality Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/06/09 03:31 pm Title: Illusion-- Chapter one.

damn. that's a good start!!!!

Reviewer: PrivatePersonality Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/06/09 03:31 pm Title: Illusion-- Chapter one.

damn. that's a good start!!!!

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