Date: 01/28/13 08:44 pm Title: Chapter 2
interesting xD liked it :3
Author's Response: Hee, glad to hear :) Thanks for your comment
Date: 07/27/10 03:55 am Title: Chapter 3
loved it, it was so special.
Author's Response: Aww :) They really are.
Date: 04/09/09 12:23 am Title: Chapter 1
I really liked what you did with this, especially how you had Georg come to terms with what was happening between the twins. To often he just accepts it immediately, and I think what you had is more like how it would play out. I really enjoyed this.
Also, about the Mary Sue thing- I think all authors do this to some extent. I know I do, even when I try to avoid it.
Author's Response: Thank you so, so much for that lovely review! I was a bit unsure of whether it would feel realistic, but decided to go with it as the Georg inside me told me to ;) I think that for the closest friends and family, twins as a couple would be quite a natural thing. Sure, they'd be shocked at first and maybe have a bit of a yelling match, but in the end, it'd probably be such a self clarity and natural thing to accept.
Date: 04/08/09 08:32 pm Title: Chapter 3
wow your ending was unexpected from my point. I didn't think that Georg would watch them make love but the ending was totally funny and I didn't see that happening but when I look back I see that It was kind of a show for Georg to show what they mean to eachother. oh this who chapter keep me on my toes again your so good at that never predictable. I really that it was going to end with them separating with the beginning with them avoiding and pretending to move on or trying to move on and cope with thier new situation. really great story and love the ending I swear the best even the show too. so i think people see what they do but just brush it off in the story as their happy and not hurting anyone so why talk about what they do so not really denial but acceptance.
Author's Response: I hope it was a good kind of a surprise :) Writing this I didn't really even consider an ending with a breakup, to me, the twins just have to be together. And that is my view on things too; if you're not hurting anyone, if whatever you do is between two adults who both are in that voluntarily, because of love, it's not really my place to judge. rnrnIt's been great fun to read your reviews, they give a great insight.
Date: 04/08/09 02:54 pm Title: Chapter 1
wow i love the ending! kinky georg. but i'm really glad he was able to except the twins relationship.
great job!!
Author's Response: Georg is a secret twincester, I'm sure. Thanks for reviewing, I'm happy you liked :)
Date: 04/07/09 09:47 pm Title: Chapter 2
wow at least georg is showing some real emotions cuddos. you did well in this chapter with the little clues to the full out secret revealed. and what the twins said to georg was heartbreaking and lovingly truthful for there part hopefully he chooses the right thing for all of them. love this chapter nice acusation part and I love how the first time he found them in a compromising situation they had a great excuse I really thought they were caught there great part really keep me on my toes.
Author's Response: :) I'm glad this had you entertained and on your toes. I wonder though, if it was all just a denial that Georg didn't know before this - is it denial for everyone around them, or just such a clarity that no one even questions it. rnThanks for a lovely review, as always.
Date: 04/07/09 02:28 pm Title: Chapter 2
I like this. A lot!
Georg makes so much sense. The characterisation is absolutely perfect. And actually, this to me seems quite real and plausible. I can't wait for part three!
Author's Response: Oh wow, thanks for such a great review! I'm glad it seems realistic, and especially the point about charachterisation made me happy - I kinda struggled with Georg, I haven't been paying that much attention to him before this, so I felt quite insecure about it. And now I'm like such a fan of the Georg he is, in my mind :)
Date: 04/07/09 09:58 am Title: Chapter 2
got to read this in LJ.... love it so much!
Author's Response: So you won't have to worry about the cliffhanger now :) Glad you liked, and it makes me extra happy that you read this here again. Thanks for reviewing.
Date: 04/06/09 01:21 pm Title: Chapter 1
love what you got so far and to make Georg less perfect try to make him jealous of the little ways he see's Bill react arournd Tom, just like Tom did in this chapter. or resent Tom for he has Bill but doesn't know how to treat him like the special boy Georg thinks he is. or sad because Bill only see's him as a brother and make Georg a little mad as he witnesses how close the twins really are there all natural reactions when you like someone. well like how you show little clips of the boys life together and how they deal can't wait for more.
Author's Response: Nice ideas you've got there! This is actually finished already, you'll just have to wait and see if we thought alike :) I'm glad to hear you're liking this!
Date: 04/06/09 12:28 pm Title: Chapter 1
Reading this is like watching a train wreck. the signs are there, and you have this dread, but it's going to play out regardless.
I love it. *nods*
Author's Response: I get so star-struck and deliriously happy when you comment on my writing with something lovely like this. rnTo be perfectly honest, sometimes I feel like the real TH is destined to have this train wreck and I just hope they all make out of it alive.
Date: 04/06/09 10:22 am Title: Chapter 1
I love your explanation of how the legendary "Georg kiss" happened. Cute! And at the end, I liked Bill's comment that shows us Tom isn't a regular sort of brother to him....twincest foreshadowing, yay!!!
Author's Response: Yes, yay twincest indeed :) It's weird how this still is a twincest story, though when writing this I wanted to concentrate on Georg. How despite not visiting their relationship, it's still there, strongly.rnrnThanks for leaving this lovely comment.