Date: 11/24/09 02:26 am Title: Consummation... Almost
awweee... so sweet.
Author's Response: :) Thank you for reading and reviewing. I'm glad you 'awweee'd it. :D
Date: 11/23/09 05:14 pm Title: Consummation... Almost
aww so cute=] more plz=]
Author's Response: thank you for reading and reviewing!
Date: 11/23/09 02:17 pm Title: Consummation... Almost
great story
Author's Response: ty
Date: 11/22/09 04:33 pm Title: Consummation... Almost
Thanks for the new chapter. Can't wait for the next one
Author's Response: Your welcome, it was good to be working on this again. :) I'm working on the next chapter, right now!
Date: 11/22/09 04:06 pm Title: Consummation... Almost
love it! update!
Author's Response: Working on it! Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Date: 11/22/09 03:50 pm Title: Obsession
that's a cute and hot story,update soon:)
Author's Response: I will, thank you for reading and reviewing.
Date: 11/22/09 02:02 pm Title: Closer...
may i just say my dear suga sister tthat i am feeling oh so very loved and special right abut now??xXx
Author's Response: Of course you may, my awesome sugar sister! :D Told you we'd re-introduce the world to that word. XD
Date: 11/18/09 11:24 am Title: Closer...
I am truly in love with this story
Author's Response: Thank you :)
Date: 08/20/09 10:27 am Title: Closer...
interesting....... boTomming.... i usually don't like it, but I'm curious to see where it goes. Update soon!
Author's Response: There's always a surprise.... I'll update as soon as I can! Thanks for giving it a chance. :)
Date: 08/20/09 09:38 am Title: Closer...
WOOOOOOOAAAAAHHHH!!! xxx
Author's Response: Lol, I hope that's a good WOOOOOOAAAAAHHHH!!! Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 08/20/09 04:26 am Title: Closer...
I can't believe you ended it there. that's just not right. MORE!!!
Author's Response: Lol. Sorry, it was where the chapter had to stop! I'm writing more now. Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Date: 08/19/09 11:05 pm Title: Closer...
I'm on a dominant Bill kick right now, so I'm super excited by how this story is progressing!
Author's Response: Thanks! I'll keep writing!
Date: 08/19/09 06:51 pm Title: Closer...
plz update soon thx=]=]
Author's Response: I will try to! you're welcome :D
Date: 08/19/09 06:37 pm Title: Closer...
I love this story
Author's Response: Thank you for sticking around through my unfortunate hiatus. I'm glad you liked it!
Date: 08/19/09 06:16 pm Title: Closer...
OMG this is soooooo hot!
Author's Response: Thanks, glad you liked it! I worked hard on it. :)
Date: 08/03/09 01:33 pm Title: Progression
oh my..this is rly good=] plz update sooon thx=]=]
Author's Response: Thank you for reading and reviewing! I'm glad you think it's good, I'll be updating as soon as possible.
Date: 08/03/09 11:36 am Title: Progression
Yea!!!!! You got something written! Hooray!
Night has fallen again. This time, however, I stay in my own room. The entire day passed without a word spoken between us. I wonder if I disgusted you, if you really hate me now. – awh!
I lay sprawled across the bed, trying to figure out where I went wrong, when I hear the door open softly. I pretend to be asleep, hoping whoever it is will just leave. I can feel the pressure of waiting tears. - *grins* it’s Bill!
“You were drunk, Bill.” – I’m glad he didn’t do it and he turned him down cause he would have felt so guilty!
“We're brothers. As much as I want and need you, it's a dangerous path to follow.” – true *sigh* so sad.
I cautiously inhale. No alcohol scent, which means you aren't drunk. I can't use that as an excuse this time. – you need an excuse?
I barely have a chance to catch my breath before your lips are caressing mine. My heartbeat hurts, it's so strong. I can't keep from responding, not that I want to, really. I know there are many things we need to talk about, but all of them faded at first touch. – I’m really enjoying this writing style. Is it difficult to write like this? I’m not sure I could. I have to write the way I talk. BTW the details are lovely.
I hope you don't change your mind about me, about this. It would destroy me. – awh I bet it would!
As we kiss again, and my mind succumbs to your scent and presence, my last coherent thought is, ' I've gone and done it now, I've ruined you.' I somehow wonder if you'd see it the same way. – lol he’s not ruined. I wonder if Tom will ever not feel guilt about this. Will he try and set Bill up on dates? Will he try to fuck groupies to get Bill out of his system? Will he try and make Bill angry so he doesn’t have to feel like he’s ruining Bill? *sigh* some how until Tom comes to terms with this I think he’s going to try and mess it up. I can feel his guilt!
Author's Response: *great big sigh of relief* I was waiting on your review! I get in moods where writing in this style is easy. Normally, though, it's really hard for me to get it all to work out right. That's part of the reason it took me so long to update. :) Glad you like the details! You'll just have to wait and see what Tom's guilt causes him to do... Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Date: 08/03/09 05:14 am Title: Progression
interesting.... I'm curious to see how this will continue, please update more soon!
Author's Response: Thank you for taking the time to review, I'll update as soon as I can. :)
Date: 08/03/09 03:55 am Title: Progression
howdy!!
wooho0ooo your back! *glomps* where have you been?!? you were gone for so long i thought something terrible had happened liked youd forgotten about your writing and this dear little site!
but yay finally tomidoesnt seem likeas much of a creeper whos molesting bill i his sleep! excellent!!!
sorry kinda hyper havent slept so um yea! POTATO!!
bibibibibibi
xXx
Author's Response: Hello :) I'm still here... I think? I haven't forgotten my writing, I've just been searching for inspiration. Glad you liked it! Get some sleep!
Date: 05/06/09 01:44 pm Title: Developments
I have come to a decision, and I'm still not sure whether it's for the best, or not. – what will you say?
I try to readjust my pajama pants, but no matter what I do, my erection still tents the fabric. – oh my lol
I realize you hadn't been asleep, just relaxed. You sit up, all peace gone as your face twists into something I don't recognize. – What? What did his expression hold?
Your gaze sweeps over my body, hovering over my groin for several seconds before staring me directly in the eyes. - *giggles*
"Ah, Tomi." You whisper against my ear. "Did you really think I didn't know?" – well he didn’t but I did.
Now that I know you are drunk, I can smell the alcohol. I don't know how I missed it before, the scent saturates the entire room. I wonder when, and why, you started drinking. – why is Bill drunk?
"Bill..." I can't focus. I'm now pressed up against a part of you that isn't soft. You arch your back, shoving our groins together roughly. I gape at you, confused. I think about everything too fast. You're hard, and I'm hard. - *heart beats hard in chest*
You obviously want me- well, maybe not me, but someone- and I want you. – awh that’s kind of awful…do you think he doesn’t want you really? *sigh* well that sucks.
My conscience yells at me, saying you are drunk, and taking advantage of you is wrong. My obsession, on the other hand, is keeping me here, telling me this wouldn't be happening if you didn't have sexual feelings for me. – what about your gut? What does your gut say? Or is there too many others in your brain talking to you and telling conflicting information.
My hands rest on your hips. I stare down at your pale body as it writhes under me, and I make a decision that will haunt me in the morning. – oh *sighs* I hope that you don’t have to regret it for long.
I wonder how much you will remember tomorrow. – I’m not sure either?!
Most importantly, will you remember my rejection? – rejection? What? They didn’t he actually said no? O_O really? Wow!
Oh I thought it was finished?! neat I get more of it *flutter claps* horray!
Author's Response: lol. I'm trying to work out the next chapter still. Writers' block is tussling with me over it. Thanks for reviewing, and I'm glad I could surprise you. ^_^