Date: 04/28/09 10:07 pm Title: Chapter 5
this story is so good! i love Bill's goofy moments
Author's Response: Thank you!!! =D there will be more goofy moments from Bill!!! LOL
Date: 04/28/09 04:12 am Title: Chapter 5
I'm definitely into this one, and would greatly appreciate an update.
The only thing I take issue with are the minor spelling and grammatical errors, but that could be caused by my anal-retentive qualities as a writer and human being in general.
Keep it up, and I look forward to seeing some more of this fic soon!
Author's Response: okay I'm glad this fanfic has caught your attention, I'll be sure to update quickly sometime this week, and I'm sorry about the grammatical and spelling errors (if you tell me where they are I'll be sure to go back and edit them, I tend to be anal about stuff like that too lol), and thank you, once again, for taking the time to review. :D I hope this story keeps you interested!!! :)
Date: 04/28/09 03:57 am Title: Chapter 1
This isn't meant to be offensive to any other authors, not even in the slightest, but I must say this: This is the first fic I've actually wanted to continue reading past the first chapter.
Thank you for that; I'm going back to read more.
xo,
- t.
Author's Response: WOW...I'm actually speechless lol THANK YOU for reading AND taking the time to review. I really appreciate it! =D
Date: 04/27/09 08:17 pm Title: Chapter 5
This is both hilarious and sweet, write more soon!!!
Author's Response: Thank you for your review!!! updates will be soon sometime later on this week! =D
Date: 04/27/09 04:40 pm Title: Chapter 5
more please!! I really like what you have so far:D
Author's Response: lol okay more will be up soon...I'll write faster than ever before!!!!!! :D
Date: 04/27/09 04:11 pm Title: Chapter 5
lol she finds gossip therapeutic! lol so do most my friends. nice choice in words. love that chapter
Author's Response: LOL yea I kinda based her off of myself cuz I do find gossip therapeutic. and THANK YOU for reviewing!!!!! :D
Date: 04/27/09 02:41 pm Title: Chapter 5
love your story!!
Author's Response: *doing my happy dance* YAY!!!!!!! I'm glad you love it!!!! and thank you for the review :D
Date: 04/27/09 01:30 pm Title: Chapter 5
Loved the chapter I have the feeling things are only gonna get better from now on...
Author's Response: Thanks!!! and yea things will get better.....maybe :P lol
Date: 04/22/09 12:01 am Title: Chapter 4
Bill is such a wonderful person =)
The end was funny. She's standing there all confused about the suitcases and then Tom walks in with two more. She must've been freaking out, lol. I love this story.
Author's Response: Yes Bill is such a wonderful person =D I'm glad you liked the end, and yes, she was freaking out (you'll see in the next chap how she reacts). I thank you for your reviews (all four...so far, hope you leave more as the story goes on :P) you're AWESOME for taking the time to review. I appreciate it!!!! =D
Date: 04/21/09 11:55 pm Title: Chapter 3
The part with Bill and the candy cracked me up! Love it!
Author's Response: LOL yea...I cracked up laughing while writing it...glad somebody enjoyed reading it as much as I did writing it!
Date: 04/21/09 11:47 pm Title: Chapter 2
This was really good. And I liked how Tom kissed her. It adds some suspense. Very nice!
Author's Response: LMAO Tom + kissing always = suspense...and major drooling, well at least for me...maybe I'm just weird and over dramatic like that! =D thanks for the review!!!
Date: 04/21/09 11:42 pm Title: Chapter 1
*GASP*
I honestly didn't see that coming. Awesome first chapter! I'm gonna read more ^_^
Author's Response: LOL @ your reaction. Thank you!!! I'm glad you like it...I also see you're a new member to this site, Welcome!!!! =D
Date: 04/19/09 05:14 pm Title: Chapter 4
OH LOL. This'll be real funny
Author's Response: LOL...yup :D
Date: 04/19/09 11:33 am Title: Chapter 4
great:D just simply great.. keep on writing!
Author's Response: WOW...thank you so much. I really appreciate it....and I will keep writing! :D
Date: 04/19/09 05:41 am Title: Chapter 4
This is a great story for it being your first fanfic! I can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: Awww thank you!!! =D
Date: 04/19/09 01:51 am Title: Chapter 4
I absolublety loved the chapter, things like this can only occur to the twins, only they will think is ok to mve in without being invited to do so. Great one =)
Author's Response: LOL Thanks!!! :D
Date: 04/19/09 01:45 am Title: Chapter 4
they most definitely are lol awesome update
Author's Response: LMAO Thank you!!! =D
Date: 04/13/09 10:42 pm Title: Chapter 3
i liked it:)
Author's Response: I'm soooooo glad!!!! :D
Date: 04/13/09 08:22 pm Title: Chapter 3
Honestly, no it doesn't suck balls, is quite good actually, but I'm sure the next one will be even better. Looking forward to it =)
Author's Response: Awww thank you so much!!! You made me feel much better :D
Date: 04/13/09 05:51 pm Title: Chapter 3
Next chapter please?
Author's Response: Soon!! :D