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Reviewer: Yuuki_Kyo Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/01/10 03:09 pm Title: Teaser-Untitled.

i DEMAND THE REST!!!
XD
lol
jokes
XD

Reviewer: Mein_9_leben Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/29/07 10:32 am Title: Teaser-Untitled.

WOOP!! WOOP!!! u godda rite some more! it sounds as if this could go on to be great things.....
WOOP!! WOOP!!

Reviewer: onemorefanfortheroad Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/22/07 07:12 am Title: Teaser-Untitled.

ooh shiny you have great sense of description i like how the fantasy/flashback of (i'm assuming it's of bill) is slipped in in a similar way to how people normally go off in a little bit of a tangent when they're not thinking of anything in particular like day dreaming,
I'm sorry if that didn't make sense hoping to see a finished product in the near future! is this a oneshot or a series?

Reviewer: deepshadows87 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/22/07 06:35 am Title: Teaser-Untitled.

Well... i honestly liked the way you described everything... i would love to read more :D

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