Date: 04/22/09 09:10 am Title: One o'clock, two o'clock, three o'clock
WTF?
What happened? Did Bill leave? What...?
PLEASE I WANNA KNOW MORE. Did they do IT?
OMG!
I'm so in love with this fic. I want MORE. And I want it to last forever, cuz it's SOOO good!!! x3
Author's Response: Humm, Bill did leave but not for long, maybe he's just afraid of Tom (yeah, right) but he'll come back. You'll see. Really? Writing this is like so much fun, maybe I'll write yet another chapter as an epilogue after finishing next chapter.
Date: 04/22/09 06:23 am Title: One o'clock, two o'clock, three o'clock
LMAO...
How I wish there was THE scene - if you know what I mean beahahaha!! *wiggles eyebrows*
And Tom didn't want him to leave!! Aawwee..XDXD
Gosh, the last chapter is next, right? how I wish there's more!XD
Author's Response: I wish that too, believe me, it's just that....well, let's just say I'm no good at writing pwp. Tom is... well, Tom is Tom and I like him. Maybe I'll write yet another chapter, as an epilogue since I'm having so much fun while writing this. Thanks for the feedback!
Date: 04/22/09 12:19 am Title: One o'clock, two o'clock, three o'clock
hahahahahahaha xD Tom got him some BILL!!! LMAO! *does a happy dance* I love this story...so funny and cute =D
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm really glad (and kind of relieved, why not?) that people are actually enjoying this. So, thank u for reviewing!
Date: 04/21/09 10:25 pm Title: One o'clock, two o'clock, three o'clock
Awww, Gus you jerk, don't throw away Tomi's things!! LOL
Where did Billa go?
Author's Response: Oh, you'll see! Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 04/21/09 08:56 pm Title: One o'clock, two o'clock, three o'clock
OH MAH GAWD!
"I am here"
That's freaking amazing.
And this 'relationship' is so creepy and weird its amazing! So anti-cliche! Good job
Author's Response: Thanks! I'll be updating the last chapter in a two days time or so. Thank u so much for your nice reviews! You're awesome and I'm glad that you think this is anti-cliche.
Date: 04/21/09 07:50 pm Title: One o'clock, two o'clock, three o'clock
damn...i hope tom gets the note
Author's Response: Humm, well, we'll see about that. ^^ Bad Gustav, bad!
Date: 04/21/09 06:58 pm Title: One o'clock, two o'clock, three o'clock
Damn this cliffhanger! *stabs*
Author's Response: I'm becoming addicted to cliffhangers, it's serious, people! Just kidding, I bet ya didn't even believe me, yeah, well...thanks for reviewing!
Date: 04/21/09 06:50 pm Title: One o'clock, two o'clock, three o'clock
NOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!! BAD GUSTAV!!! >:(
Author's Response: Yeah, bad, bad Gustav! Thanks for reviewing so much!
Date: 04/21/09 06:46 pm Title: One o'clock, two o'clock, three o'clock
NOOO!! YOU CAN'T LEAVE US HANGING LIKE THAT!!! T^T ooooh I wanna read the ending but I don't!! I don't want it to end!!! Oh the humanity! I bet I know what went on in that room ;) Can't wait for the next chapter! Ooh! I'm excited! ^^v
Author's Response: Yeah, my granny (god, i wuv this woman) is always saying "think the worst and you won't be disappointed", I'm glad to see most people are actually that devious. I'll be updating in a two days time or so, maybe earlier. Thanks for the awesome feedback
Date: 04/21/09 06:37 pm Title: One o'clock, two o'clock, three o'clock
oh god and you had to leave hanging like that didn't you????i'm so curious as to what happened in the bedroom now???
tomi is sucht a funny guy.
he was counting things when bill had him pressed back against the wall???LOL
i laughed so hard when tom started giggling, man i would've loved to be there*sighs*
he jsut never fails to make me laugh.
like you said, he thinks the weirdest things in situations that for other person would be very important, but he just ignores them???!!!LOL
your way of writting is just so incredibly good, i really love it=D
you gives so much info on what their thinking, most of the other stories describe the character's action instead but this story is as if we were inside the character's head and i LOVE THAT=DDD
Thanks for the update, it was really good.
except that i'm not gonna be able to sleep cause i'm gonna be thinking what happedned in that room????
oh one more thing..the note..omg
what i got is that tom ask the question and bill fianlly answered it but silly gusti had to throw the paper away and now tom won't know his stalker is bill..wait thats a good thing right????
Author's Response: I do the giggling thing myself, I just wanted someone else to do it too. It had to be Tom, obviously. I like to think this is kind of introspective, but I'm sure my English teacher would totally look down on me for saying that. Humm, Tom is naive but not that naive, you'll see what I mean. Bill's gonna make sure he knows who the stalker is.
Date: 04/21/09 06:04 pm Title: One o'clock, two o'clock, three o'clock
Yay!!! I so happy!
Author's Response: Aww, thank u! (you can say so much in very few words, I'm just happy that you're happy)
Date: 04/20/09 01:25 am Title: A little less, a little more
Have i told u i love the way u write?
really! its just so carefree yet you can feel this is well writen, that u put a lot into it but its at the same time comfortable to write! the way u chat with the reader while writing its just extremly hilarious! really!
now we are getting into it! Bill is takin some action and Tom... keeps been himself XD
lovely storie
-G
Author's Response: Well, yeah, he keeps being himself! Weird, huh? Thanks so much for being so kind! I'm really having no trouble at all when it comes to writing, I'm yet to find why. I'm glad you think this is hilarious, and if u must know I looooveee chatting. Thanks so much for the feedback!
Date: 04/19/09 09:45 pm Title: A little less, a little more
LOL tom is just so funny.
who in their right mind thinks about mint when they're being pressed back agaisnt a wall by bill kaulitz????tom is so silly but i love him!!!!
i like how he doses off in the randomest situations!!LOL
i also love his way of thinking.
Author's Response: Yeah, he just thinks weird stuff in random situations, like u said. He thinks too much, maybe he shouldn't but, oh, well, he just can't help it! Thanks so much for the awesome feedback!
Date: 04/19/09 05:39 pm Title: A little less, a little more
hahahahahaha xD NICE!!! loved it :D
Author's Response: Aww, thank u!
Date: 04/19/09 05:23 pm Title: A little less, a little more
OOHHHHHH PLPLPlPlpLpLPLZPLZPLZPLZPZLPZL UPDATE SOOONNNN I LUVZ THIZ=] THX
Author's Response: I will update soon. Thanks for the feedback!
Date: 04/19/09 03:39 pm Title: A little less, a little more
I love your story. It's so amazing. You have defined Tom's character amazingly. Bill's awesome too. Your story is just cool.
Author's Response: Aww, you're so nice! I'm glad you think Tom and Bill are good characters. That's funny, 'cause I'm so not cool, in fact, I'm kind of lame. Thanks for the feedback!
Date: 04/19/09 12:32 pm Title: A little less, a little more
lovely :]
Author's Response: Thank u!
Date: 04/19/09 11:55 am Title: A little less, a little more
uh oh!! what a cliffhanger, haha.
can't wait for an update xD
Author's Response: Well, yeah, I like cliffhangers. Thanks so much for reviewing!
Date: 04/19/09 10:41 am Title: A little less, a little more
Oh. My. Wow.
That scene was super hot.
Can't wait for the next chapter. That was a major cliff!!!
Author's Response: Wow indeed. Thanks for the feedback so much! (I'll update soon, I will)
Date: 04/19/09 07:44 am Title: A little less, a little more
Oh! C'mon! You can't end in such place! That's absolutely not fair!
And I've grown to love that fic! I don't want it to end soon. :(
Plz update soon!! :)
Author's Response: I'll update soon, don't worry. I don't want it to end soon either, but I don't want it to be such a long fic it kind of loses its meaning. I'll sort it out. Thanks for the feedback!