Date: 04/02/09 03:01 am Title: An Engagement
*sits down and waits for the new chapter.* you have my attention M'dear.
Date: 04/01/09 11:42 pm Title: An Engagement
Oh my goodness, this is so great! I really love it. It's so unique. Never have I read anything like this.
I like how you've characterized them:
Tom is strong, and determined, yet so helpless now, but fighting still.
And Bill is haughty and seemingly selfish. It's a bit hard to like him when he's having one of his moods lol, but at the same time, it's easy to like him.
I like how you've done that. It's very impressive, and I can't wait for more!
P.S. I have to say, I'm lovin' the name of chapter 3... it made me laugh, simply because today, my friend, who happens to be a huge horse afficionado, was telling me about how she'd love to buy a stallion. XD
Date: 04/01/09 11:08 pm Title: An Engagement
Wee! Smutty chapters are good. Titles sounds good too. This chapter was great. Liked seeing Tom fight like that.
Date: 04/01/09 11:07 pm Title: An Engagement
It's awesome!! Definitely amazing!! I like your writing, and descriptions...and I knew it!! I knew you have seen it!! :D
Do you like yaoi?? Because I'm a yaoi freak I must say!! XD
Please update soon!!
I hope to read the smutty chapter as soon as possible...btw in the scene of Tom fighting the Hochs I could picture Tom as Bucephalus!! XD
Date: 04/01/09 11:02 pm Title: Oblivious
Reviews equal sex. That's awesome XD
This is really interesting so far! I can't wait to read more
Date: 04/01/09 08:39 pm Title: An Engagement
Wow, nobody's ever chapter notes talked to me before, cool. The collar thing actually sounds kinda...gross. Anyway, can't wait for the next chapter.
Date: 04/01/09 08:09 pm Title: An Engagement
*3* OHMYGOD I LOVE this story. It's so original =] How rank is based on how you look~ And clashing Bill and Tom together? Yum~
Please update, soon, love. I'd love to read the next chapter ;)
Date: 04/01/09 07:16 pm Title: An Engagement
OMFG I love this story it is absolutely amazing. I'm addicted. Completely addicted. I love the discriptions you give of the slave costumes and that Bill simply wants someone full of life but doesn't seem to know the consiquenses. Oh this is just amazing.
Date: 04/01/09 02:36 pm Title: Oblivious
This is so good, I'm looking forward too much more, hope you have time to update soon.
Date: 03/31/09 09:40 pm Title: Oblivious
Wow, you better continue this b/c this was an amazing chapter! Your writing is really good, the plot line is exactly what I love, and your characterizations are good so far. You're doing a fantastic job particularly if this is your fist story. That's unbelievable!
Update soon b/c I'm totally hooked!
Date: 03/31/09 08:57 pm Title: Oblivious
This universe you've created is sooo interesting! What's up with the pet collar? Is it like, implanted in the skin or something? I need more of a mental picture on that one.
Date: 03/31/09 07:00 pm Title: Oblivious
VERY well done. I love dystopian fics, and this just got me hooked. Don't wait long to update, kay honey?
Date: 03/31/09 04:27 pm Title: Oblivious
Wow, this is really interesting! I've never read anything like this, but I really like it! I hope that you update soon, and that you don't ever drop this story :)
I can't wait for more :D
Date: 03/31/09 03:20 pm Title: Oblivious
I love the plot you've set up for this. It seems really promising. I like Bill's character a lot, too. I hope you update soon!
Date: 03/31/09 02:59 pm Title: Oblivious
This story has a great start and it's a very original idea. I needed a good read and this one did just that... no a great read and it was super fantastic amazing (wow I need my beta for reviews XD) amazing work.
Date: 03/31/09 02:15 pm Title: Oblivious
This is Cool!! I want to know more!! More!!!
:D
By any chance...have you watched an anime called Ai No Kusabi?
Update soon please!!
Date: 03/31/09 01:10 pm Title: Oblivious
Well, sex for you! That was a very good first chapter! I really am liking your writing style (and the long chapter!)!! I'm hoping to see more soon...maybe? Please? Very good! :D