Date: 11/06/10 03:28 pm Title: Stripped
Loved this! I think my favourite line was this, though:
"Part of that constant animosity was the unfortunate fact that although the twins were distinctly male, they were gifted with a prettiness that most girls were jealous of. It delighted Bill, who decided to stop fighting it and played it up. Tom on the other hand was devastated, and did everything he could to downplay it, but the more macho his behavior the more he called attention to the fact that he was just really, really pretty".
Because everyone always talks about how Bill is so pretty, and I do think he is more beautiful than Tom, even without the make up, there's a sort of grace to him that Tom lacks - but still, they are twins with the same face.
Date: 09/17/10 06:28 pm Title: Stripped
Awwww again!!! Gustav XD
Date: 06/01/10 12:04 pm Title: Stripped
aww I LOVE IT!
i think your amazing and very talented writer..i adore all the stories you write..this one was just cute and adorable and just perfect.. i think you potray their relationship brilliantely..i loved the gustav pov and my fave bit was when bill opened the coke lid and when gustav called tom but bill answered..that was too cute for words..
*hugs you and runs away*
Date: 09/02/09 05:56 am Title: Stripped
Awesome series! I enjoyed each one. Just, your tenses keep changing and it ruins the story a bit. I'd recommend reading through the story once more before posting it or getting a beta person or something. Otherwise, these stories rule.
Author's Response: LOL, yes, I do need to go back and beta my old stuff. This was one of the first stories I submitted to the site, during the lawless times of unmoderated submissions.
Date: 09/21/08 10:44 pm Title: Stripped
Aww, I love them. So cute.
Date: 05/05/08 02:40 pm Title: Stripped
A is for adoration, as has been with each of the A fics. I would love nothing more than to fall asleep on the sounds of the twins laughter and quiet whispers. I very much liked how this portrayed the twins so in sync with each other, so sweet.
Date: 05/02/08 05:29 pm Title: Stripped
that was awesome.
this could be the best i've seen.
Date: 04/08/08 09:53 am Title: Stripped
I'm a new fan so I don't know Tokio Hotel or the Kaulitzs very well. But I gotta say, from what I know about the twins, your stories seem to portray them very well - as though they're narrated from their very own lives. I am also amazed by your characterisation of Gustav and Georg. It's very them.
I don't know what else to say except that I really adore your writings.
Date: 03/28/08 03:14 pm Title: Stripped
very good loved it
ly
x
Date: 03/14/08 10:55 pm Title: Stripped
oh man Loved it^^
I loved the part about Tom and saying he is pretty the mostXD whahah
well he can't help it he really is a very pretty boy^^
Date: 02/19/08 11:47 am Title: Stripped
I'm just a tad bit in love with this fic.
Just a tad.
I love how put into perspective this is.
Especially with it being in Gusti's point of view.
This is amazing.
Date: 12/29/07 08:49 pm Title: Stripped
He knew from experience it took nothing for Bill to turn ‘on’, but only Tom could turn him completely off.
I loved it all, absolutely, but this would have to be my favorite line. Wonderfully done! :)
Author's Response: Thank you! I appreciate your review greatly!
Date: 12/24/07 07:07 pm Title: Stripped
Sooo good. And I think you are completely right. They are more alike than they want people to think. Especially Tom. I think the media and management have him play up his "player" personality. I think he's exactly as Bill says: Very sweet and gentle.
Great job!
Author's Response: :D Gracias Rashida, you know your opinion means so much to me. :D
Date: 12/23/07 01:28 pm Title: Stripped
WOWS. I love how you incorporated stuff from the DVD. And who doesn't love it when anyone writes about In Die Nacht? But I liked the feel of this. Nice that it was from Gustav's point of view because it made the observations seem more real.
Lovely as always. ;]
Author's Response: :D thank you, and thank you for your review!
Date: 12/23/07 03:15 am Title: Stripped
guh. 'In Die Nacht' owns. i love all that stuff about the early days, & the little things the twins do. n'aww.
Author's Response: lol thank you Nicola!
Date: 12/22/07 03:23 pm Title: Stripped
Yay another lovely twin story! Seeing them through the eyes of Gustav is always awesome in fics, and this was no exception.
Author's Response: :D Thank you, and thank you for your review!
Date: 12/22/07 02:07 pm Title: Stripped
I suspect a bit of twincest happened in your mind while writing this ;)
anyways this was awesome, you don't stop, I see
The boy couldn’t dance to save his life - that was funny lol
Straangely I'm starting to love to read the twins relationship by the others eyes -it gives you a most realistic point of view
Author's Response: lol no, no twincest in this universe. Thank you Lipa, and thank you for your review!
Date: 12/22/07 05:11 am Title: Stripped
You know I love these stories, I was so pleased when I saw you'd written another one! This is cute and I liked how it was from Gustav's perspective. Well done!
Author's Response: *Blushes* Thank you, and thank you for your review!