Date: 04/10/09 04:28 pm Title: Chapter 5
woah. What the fuck. That was awesome. A nice way to end a sick relationship
Date: 04/10/09 04:27 pm Title: Chapter 5
This is the first time I read this story, and I have such mixed emotions over it. I think you wrote it very well though, and I was wondering, when Is the last chapter?
Date: 04/06/09 06:56 pm Title: Chapter 4
Still loving it! But it'd be REALLY helpful to put the flashback in italics.
Date: 04/06/09 05:41 pm Title: Chapter 1
That banner is awful!
Date: 04/06/09 03:40 pm Title: Chapter 4
I can't imagine anyone getting pleasure from doing what Tom is doing in this story.
But I know there are types of people that do. =[ So sad.
Date: 04/03/09 03:20 pm Title: Chapter 3
wow defintely the most graphic rape scene I have ever read. the things Tom did to Bill made me cringe throughout the whole chapter. I swear you keep getting better. you really do well with sadistic Tom in your stories. I so feel sorry for everything that happens to bill throughout your story he's defintely has no self-worth after his ordeal. and love your flashbacks in your story it really shows us how things have escalated to the point of no return. and want to see more swear you are making me scared in a way by how you can come up with all this. the best angst, abuse, character development, plot I have ever seen on hear and you don't get enough respect by the readers. people should defintely read your stories more often.
Date: 04/03/09 02:59 pm Title: Chapter 2
I love how you twist everything that's gone on in their life and turned it into this self distructive relationship. using real things makes it so much more. I just love how you mind works. you do evil in a whole new way.
Date: 04/03/09 02:30 pm Title: Chapter 1
wow love your dark angry mean selfish tom. your analysis in the beginning was perfect introduction to your story. love how you make their relationship at the party so vivid with how their relationship has developed over the years. and you discribed tom behavior and thoughts very graphic and realistically disturbing well and sadistic. wow just wow I can see how this is going to be a grusome but riveting story.
Date: 04/01/09 07:19 pm Title: Chapter 3
if i were bill i would kill tom ha ha ha ha .i love it write more
Date: 03/31/09 11:23 pm Title: Chapter 3
Wow. I can't help but love tom in this story. He's just to evil to not like him. Plus I love bill getting tortured. You write really well and I can't wait for the next chapter
Date: 03/31/09 08:20 pm Title: Chapter 1
hehe this was weird but i do love a rough Tom =] keep it coming
Date: 03/31/09 08:18 pm Title: Chapter 3
okay well...the baby outfit was really fucking weird, but i'm still reading lol. more!
Date: 03/31/09 01:50 pm Title: Chapter 1
Ouch..heavy stuff. I like it. I hope you continue soon. *__*
Date: 03/30/09 07:10 pm Title: Chapter 1
I like it! Continue!
Author's Response: I will! :)