Date: 03/30/09 04:30 am Title: The Truth Hurts
wow! first off i find the whole ride me thing really really hot =] but i feel really bad for bill he wants to stop and can't find a way in telling tom without hurting him i can see how he wants to keep tom happy but at what price? his own happiness? damn dude bill is kind of s.o.l (shit out of luck)
Author's Response: I'm really easy to predict because I hate to give the characters anything but a happy ending, so they'll be in a much better place in the end. Thanks for the review! :D
Date: 03/29/09 10:55 am Title: The Truth Hurts
are you gonna add another chapter. its really good. i want more.
Author's Response: I probably will really soon! Thank you for the review!
Date: 03/29/09 12:04 am Title: The Truth Hurts
I absolutely adore this concept! I like how you wrote this in a straight-forward yet imaginative manner. I also like how this ended...but another chapter or sequel would definately be interesting to read!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I really appreciate your feedback! I'll post more in the next few days!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I really appreciate your feedback! I'll post more in the next few days!