Date: 05/20/09 10:18 am Title: The Catalyst
aww,finally bill realised that he loves tomi
Author's Response: Yay!! Bout time, huh?
Date: 05/19/09 04:31 pm Title: The Catalyst
Hell Yeah! pleasssssseeeeeee. Happy ending fot billa and tomi.
Author's Response: They certainly deserve it. Thanks for the review!
Date: 05/19/09 03:05 pm Title: The Catalyst
I have read this from the beginning to end and have to admit ... (dun dun dun haha) I EFFIN LOVED IT!!!!! I love the take on Tom .. his emotional side. It was refreshing. I am seriously looking forward to the next chapter and possible epilogue!!
Rachael
Author's Response: I'm so glad to hear that! Thank you for the encouragement!
Date: 05/19/09 02:10 pm Title: The Catalyst
I realy like this story, and I surely want the sexy epilogue, please ;D
Author's Response: I only need 36 more reviews, then the epilogue is ON. LOL. I hope I get to write it for you guys.
Date: 05/19/09 01:33 pm Title: The Catalyst
omg! This is truly amazing! Please update soon, cause its like, one of my fave stories on this so far(:
-Emmii
xxxxxx
Author's Response: OOMMGG!! Thank you sooooo much!!!!!!!!
Date: 05/19/09 11:56 am Title: The Catalyst
I love this *___*
Author's Response: Thanks! I love that you love this!
Date: 05/19/09 11:08 am Title: The Catalyst
Epilogue Oh yes i definitly want it... How could this story not have a epilogue.
Please, please, please
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing, then, because I reeeeeally want to write that kinky enthusiastic twin time scene..... :D
Date: 05/19/09 10:11 am Title: The Catalyst
you need to write an epilogue! I mean, the story is SUPER COOL!!!!
Author's Response: Thanks! I might be tearing up. But no guarantees. :D
Date: 05/19/09 09:38 am Title: The Catalyst
Oh! and please, please write the super hot sex scene! You definitely deserve 75+ reviews -- this story rocks! ^^
Author's Response: Thank you! *hug*
Date: 05/19/09 09:33 am Title: The Catalyst
Aha! I knew it! Bill, you idiot *shakes head* And poor Tomi, whoring himself out to random groupies -- it's just so tragic! Neway, I'm glad this is going to end happy ^^ (it is, right?)
Author's Response: I'm a huge fan of Happily Ever After. ;D
Date: 05/19/09 08:38 am Title: The Catalyst
OhMyGosh!
This was so awesome.
Bill has feelings for Tom now, awh.
Author's Response: Yeah, it's a relief to be able to stop writing around that. I'm glad it's finally out so I don't have to constantly reread everything to make sure I'm holding true to the storyline. Thanks for the review!
Date: 05/19/09 07:53 am Title: The Catalyst
while Tom took countless women to a private bathroom for happy hour all night. I’d done it a few times in the last month or so, but now I was just too exhausted. Well then shouldn't Bill feel just as bad? If he's done the same thing?
I was jealous that Tom was sleeping with girls, because that meant that he was getting over me, if he hadn’t already. is it so hard to see that Tom is doing it to keep his mind from drifting to Bill? And in last chapter, the part where Tom said he actually liked the girl disturbed me, I mean, he said he was madly in love with Bill, those feelings doesn't go away over night. And he had only known the girl some hours, had I been in Tom shoes I would have just kicked the girl out and not bothered to see if she was okay or anything else, just use her to get over my sickly obsession with my brother, not start to like her at the same time as I was madly in love. (and btw, adding the Tom/OFC would be a good idea now)
_
That's just my comments about this chapter, things that confused me and that I think could have been cleared up or even changed to make it better. But I think it's good, I am enjoying reading it, despite those things bothering me a bit xD
I really hope you'll update soon :)
Author's Response: You misunderstood. In the part where he says that he'd done it a few times, he didn't mean slink off to the bathroom with a woman, he meant that he'd stayed alone at his booth a few times. Thanks for the review!
Date: 05/19/09 07:52 am Title: The Catalyst
Oh the angst! I really love Bill in this. He's conflicted and confused, but he's not overly so...it's all very realistic. So even though this chapter broke my heart (it really, really did) I still loved it!
Author's Response: Awwwww. I'm sorry it broke your heart! Here's some tape. And it'll get happier soon.
Date: 05/19/09 02:12 am Title: The Catalyst
oh please let them get back together??? i love them this way!! Imma review this a few times to do my share
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you like it!
Date: 05/14/09 04:53 pm Title: The Future
HELL YEAA!! Delicious!! Licks lips.
Author's Response: LOL. You're awesome!
Date: 05/06/09 04:58 am Title: The Future
ohh poor tom and bill are broken apart.... stupid tomi. poor billa... -sigh- please upload sooon i neeeeed too know what happnes to bill and tom lol. xxx
Author's Response: I will, promise. I have two whole days to do nothing, so I'll definitely be writing!! <3
Date: 05/05/09 10:48 am Title: The Future
omg, first of all...Thank you! *hugs melissaRM19* i didn't know i was the first one. lol
second, i can't wait what's gonna happen next!
lastly, poor tom, so screwed up D:
Author's Response: Yeah, poor Tomi... He's so messed up in the head right now. But don't worry. Things will start looking up for him sometime soon!
Date: 05/04/09 09:30 pm Title: The Future
eee! this just gets better and better ^^ I love poor, angsty Tom and this whole fic seems to be going in the exact direction i so hoped it would go -- yous a thousand kinds of awesome! :D
Author's Response: I'm glad I'm making you happy! Your review made me happy!
Date: 05/04/09 04:49 pm Title: The Future
Bills is jealous i know it! tell me im right, tell me Bill is so jealous he want to cut the girl in pieces
Author's Response: Well.................
Date: 05/04/09 01:13 pm Title: The Future
Tom, Tom, Tom...*shakes head*
It seems like he's going from one extreme to another. I really am addicted to this fic and I can't wait to see what drama unfolds next!
Author's Response: Thanks for reading it! It makes my day every time someone reviews, and hearing that someone is addicted to my story makes me happy. At least its not, like drugs, or something..... That's my new slogan... "Stay sober, read fanfiction!" XD