Reviews For Beyond the World, To the End of Time
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Reviewer: Risu-chan Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/13/09 05:47 pm Title: Partie Deux
Date: 04/13/09 05:47 pm Title: Partie Deux
I really liked this chapter. I wish it was longer though.
Reviewer: kristina Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/28/09 06:26 am Title: Partie Un
Date: 03/28/09 06:26 am Title: Partie Un
I love this, update soon:D wonder what Tom is going to say now:)
Reviewer: ilovetomkaulitzzz Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/27/09 10:40 pm Title: Partie Un
Date: 03/27/09 10:40 pm Title: Partie Un
you kinda rushed it.
Author's Response: Sorry, I forgot to explain...rnThe reason why I went through so quickly was because there are going to be some 'flashback'-type things during the story. I didn't do this by accident, I'm just trying to get through the 'main' points first, and gradually go through everything else in between.
Reviewer: tokiofate24 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/27/09 10:38 pm Title: Partie Un
Date: 03/27/09 10:38 pm Title: Partie Un
Loved it update soon!
Author's Response: Thanks, I'll try and update as soon as I possibly can! (:
Reviewer: Risu-chan Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/27/09 10:38 pm Title: Partie Un
Date: 03/27/09 10:38 pm Title: Partie Un
I feel as though you rushed the first chapter so much.
But I liked it.
Author's Response: Don't worry, the bits I skipped through the first chapter will be shown as 'flashbacks' in chapters to come.
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