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Reviewer: i_is_anonymous Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/12/09 09:38 am Title: Culture Shock

he noticed something strange about the tables: All of them were either large enough to accommodate at least twenty people or more, or small enough for just two. – awh so cute!!!

the eldest Kri present does the ordering. It's just easier that way. Oh, wait, you don't know what a Kri is, do you?” – what I don’t remember that? *looks around confused*

“Wait. All the Tresian names I've heard so far have these high-pitched vowels. But Bill's name doesn't. Does that make a difference when speaking?”
“You pronounce it differently in Tresian. It's more like, 'Bee-ll'. But he likes the English pronunciation. - *grins* so cute!!!!!!

he's good with languages. He speaks Rashi fluently, and is fairly adept at Hakkai and Freyer. – I wonder if Tom will learn these languages from Bill?

“He likes his forehead touched. And his belly, but not when he's sitting down.” - *grins*

Kyrs informed Tom that they were soaked in antibacterial fluid, and then proceeded to assure him that it was harmless on the digestive system. – they’re going to eat with their hands?

He held it up to Tom, who reached to take it. Bill frowned and pulled away until Tom put his hand down, confused. Bill tried again, now pressing the food to Tom's lips. Tom glanced at Kyrs for help. She giggled. – Bill and Tom are going to get so frustrated between the language barrier and the cultural difference *shakes head* I can’t wait. I bet some of it’s going to be very funny!

The pastry-ball burst in his mouth, and apparently was filled with some sort of sweet, tangy sauce that left a pleasant prickling feeling on his tongue after he swallowed. – weird and cool!

“The first meal is exciting for a new couple, because it's the first time they feed someone other than themselves. It's a very good bonding experience.” – awh so cute!

Tom felt a sick, guilty feeling, realizing this really was their first meal; he had completely forgotten to feed Bill all day. – lol he’s not a puppy!

He didn't eat a lot himself, in fact, he often didn't realize he was hungry until food was available, and it hadn't even crossed his mind to wonder if Bill was hungry. – I’m on the same page over here. I forget to eat all the time!

“Good choice,” Kyrs approved. “That's one of his favorites, and you instinctively chose it. I knew you two were meant to be together.” – Tom doesn’t! Tom still doesn’t believe that they are!

He held the red thing out to Bill apprehensively, who delicately wrapped his lips around it and pulled it from between Tom's fingers. Tom felt a tingle of arousal at the oddly erotic sensation of Bill's lips sliding along his fingertips, and blushed. This was not happening, he was not getting turned on by this. - *grins* More!!!! More!!!!!!

After a moment's observation, he realized Bill was doing the same. Curious, he pointed to one of the ones Bill hadn't given him to try, gesturing that he wanted Bill to pick that one next. Bill looked surprised, and a little unsure, but obediently picked it up. He held it out to Tom, who curiously bit into it.
He instantly regretted it. Whatever it was , it was bitter and slimy on the inside. He choked and made a face while Bill made apologetic motions and Kyrs laughed. – awh *shakes head* silly boy!

“We operate as a single being with our mates, functioning as one entity. Something as simple as knowing what the other likes to eat is trivial compared to what a well-bonded pair can do. It's possible that your bond might not be as strong because of you not being Tresian... But that doesn't seem to be a problem yet, so I wouldn't worry about it.” Kyrs smiled. – I don’t think that Tom was worried about that only about the fact that he’s now mated to a guy! A guy who doesn’t speak English. lol

“Are you guys moving somewhere?” – ah ha ha *cracks up*

“There he goes. He probably wants to get dressed up for you. You might want to sit down, this could take a while...”
And take a while it did. Tom was still waiting two hours later when Bill finally returned from wherever it was he had been. – oy!!!

What shocked him was what he hadn't before realized about Bill: Bill was utterly, breathtakingly beautiful. – awh!!! So cute!!!!!

Ok I never ask for this but…OMG more bitte I love this story its so fucking fluffy!!!! *waves hands around* when ever you get around to it but sooner rather then later and after SMRM blah blah blah then this one for sure!!!!!!!

Reviewer: Tears_of_trees Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/12/09 08:30 am Title: Culture Shock

omg, BILL!!! I love this Bill n_n

This was not happening, he was not getting turned on by this.

Hehehe, that is my favorite line :) hands down. I laugh at Tom's 'pain' hahahaha! lol yeah... I love how Bill is still a fashion whore. Lol, poor Tom...

Bill seemed ecstatic, and threw his arms around Tom, snuggling into him and chittering excitedly.

Awwww :) I just get the cutest mental images from this. It's so great :) *squeeze* But the problem is I keep thinking Bill as smaller...damn ewoks...at least I don't think of him as overly furry....

Reviewer: vzmisha4 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/12/09 05:35 am Title: Culture Shock

Really nice =) I hope the girlfriend wouldn't bother them much

Reviewer: FairyCelt Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/12/09 04:04 am Title: Culture Shock

I adore how cute Bill's character is in this...he just makes me smile! Loved this chapter!

Reviewer: Todo se fuga Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/12/09 03:56 am Title: Culture Shock

Hi!
I'm really enjoying this whole Tresian instruction. Alien-Bill! What a cuttie!
Oh, my, the clothes' boxes thing was absolutely hilarious! Though it couldn't have been other way. I simply can't imagine a non-fashionable Bill.
Love it!
Looking forward to read what's next.

Reviewer: vexx13 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/12/09 03:37 am Title: Culture Shock

This is the cutest story I have ever read. It fills me up with so many warm fuzzies that I costantly have to stop reading and go do something else to calm my heart. Then, of course, I come back and read the chapter over and over again ;). Update soon! I'll be going crazy until then. :)

Reviewer: JaneFallen Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/12/09 02:50 am Title: Culture Shock

LOL You lazy! This story makes me smile with every word. Bill is so adorable, and Tom is so clueless its amazing!!!

Reviewer: Emeycia Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/12/09 02:42 am Title: Culture Shock

ADORABLE! :B
Sure it didn't take Tom too long to realize how gorgeous Bill is ;))

Reviewer: dannspringich Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/12/09 02:08 am Title: Culture Shock

Love it, still. Can't wait for more xD

Reviewer: toms muso girl Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/12/09 01:55 am Title: Culture Shock

awwww bill is adorable i just want to hug him lol

Reviewer: SimplyMe Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/12/09 01:11 am Title: Culture Shock

-giggleclapgiddydance- This it to freaking CUTE!!!!!!! OMG you neeeeed to update ASAP!! Hahaha..

Reviewer: fyredancer Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/12/09 12:48 am Title: A Lifetime Commitment

Oh god, I forgot Tom has a girlfriend! Well. That's certainly going to make things interesting.

Reviewer: schlampe Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/12/09 12:44 am Title: Culture Shock

You mentioned me in this....
*Swallows back tears.* No one ever talks about me... or dedicates anything to me. D:
You just made my night with this chapter of the absolutely stupid and cute looking Bill. XD

I love this so much!

Author's Response: LOL, my face hurts from smiling. I'm glad it made you so happy! You have no IDEA how much I smile when I read that review. XD I laugh and laugh and laugh.

Reviewer: pandasarelovex Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/12/09 12:41 am Title: Culture Shock

This story is so cute O_O

Reviewer: fyredancer Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/12/09 12:40 am Title: Culture Shock

Oh, yay, an update for this!! *pounces on it happily*

Tresian Bill is so damned adorable. And that is all.

I really like Tom's discoveries of Tresian culture and how firmly his coffin is nailed shut--er, I mean, regarding his new arrangements! Somehow I think Tom's not quite done fighting the hook as far as his relationship with Bill is concerned, but admitting that Bill is beautiful is a GREAT first step, Tomi.

Augh, since there's no more, I think I'll have to go and re-read it from the beginning. =)

Reviewer: Billa_Loves_Skittles Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/12/09 12:38 am Title: Culture Shock

yay!! -clapshands- i love this bubbly cheerfull bill!!! he's so sweet and cute and and just AWWWWWW.... :D naw really this story always makes me smile and laugh, and poor tom's been truck hard, he just doesn't know it yet, lol! thank you so much for the update!

Reviewer: psychobunny13 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 07/12/09 12:30 am Title: Culture Shock

Oh, Bill's all cute! Like a bunny.

Reviewer: LoveGaneva Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/12/09 12:25 am Title: Culture Shock

This is such an adorable story!

Reviewer: parallelheartz Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/11/09 11:59 pm Title: Culture Shock

*grins* awww. this was definitely cute. i liked the chapter, but you knew i would xD ^^

Author's Response: LOL, no I didn't. I'm always scared you're going to rip me apart for SOMETHING... XD I'm paranoid like that. XD

Reviewer: IzzyKaulitz Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/11/09 11:57 pm Title: Culture Shock

Izzy loves youuuu!

You know my thoughts.

Author's Response: LOL, what were your thoughts that I knew? XD

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