Date: 03/14/15 12:35 am Title: Beautiful Butterfly.
Wow...this story is my type (what's?!). And lovely writer,please update soon. Kiss and hug :).
Date: 07/04/10 07:04 am Title: Beautiful Butterfly.
oh wow, poor Bill! This is really interesting to read, i like your style very much :)
Date: 07/14/09 11:30 pm Title: Beautiful Butterfly.
Alright, well, the last one was slightly disturbing... This one was deeply disturbing..... But I like it! Now I'm inspired to go work on Cirque de Disturbia and that story idea about a schizophrenic I was thinking of writing. And I can't believe I spelled schizophrenic right... o.O
Anyways, keep writing, don't fall off the deep end, and I'll message u if I have any ideas for you that I don't use in my own stories!
Author's Response: Haha thank you so much and yes message me if you have ideas-- its always nice to hear other people's ideas for once :)
Date: 03/31/09 03:52 pm Title: Beautiful Butterfly.
laura is amerzinggggggg
Author's Response: I know. Tell me about it ;)
Date: 03/29/09 06:16 pm Title: Beautiful Butterfly.
Um wow.... dang....
talk about well crap now I can't remember the name of it, but it's a condition where the kidnappie falls for the kidnapper or something like that. Vagely remember reading about it is psychology....
Love it, can't wait to read more
Author's Response: Thank you for your review. I think what you are referring to is the Stockholm Syndrome. rnI didn't actually know it existed until after writing this story. rnI'm glad you enjoyed reading it!
Date: 03/28/09 11:44 am Title: Beautiful Butterfly.
wow that wasn't what i expected to sequel "photography" but i definitely liked it!!!
i love tom's way of loving bill, he just doesn't know any other way of showing it=D
i really wish you didn't separate them, that'b be just.....not good, i mean bill is liking him back right?? or at least if you have the thought of killing one, kill both of them...shit that sounded very psychotic!!!i want them to be together=DDD
anyway i REALLY like your stories and i'm can't wait 'till fairground!!!!
Author's Response: Thank you for your review!rnThe way Tom shows Bill his love is very unique. Some people think that Tom is creepy whereas others think he is just over-protective. I think that Tom has pure love and he only wants the best for Bill. Although he can show 'stalkerness' tendencies. rnrnANNNDDD...Don't you worry, they will not get separated!
Date: 03/27/09 04:51 pm Title: Beautiful Butterfly.
love that love love love!!
:)
Author's Response: Haha.rnThank you!
Date: 03/27/09 04:00 pm Title: Beautiful Butterfly.
This story is so creepy but so good. I just want Bill to run and run away from Tom, and Im so scared that he will start liking him. Can't wait for the next story.
Author's Response: Thank you for your review!rnHaha Bill won't be going anywhere!
Date: 03/27/09 05:11 am Title: Beautiful Butterfly.
"pulls Bill into a tight hug"
"wacks Tom in the head with his camera"
That monster has no soul.
He is a mean MEAN person.
i wish something happens to him so that Bill can leave that hellhole.
I HATE TOM!
Author's Response: Aha, what a reaction. rnI didn't know my stories could provoke such emotions! rnThank you for taking the time to read, and I do hope you like what is coming.rnTom is a nice person, honestly!
Date: 03/27/09 02:15 am Title: Beautiful Butterfly.
..Wow. This is really good. I can't wait for Fairground!
Out of curiosity, how many parts are there to this?
Oh, and just so you know, since all of these stories are related, you might want to put them in a "Series". :)
Absolutely love it :)
Author's Response: I'm not really too sure how many parts there will be to this. rnI think maybe 'fairground' will be the last one.rnI have lots of revision to do this Easter. rnBut then after that I wanted to write a chaptered story.rnOh and I was going to put them into a series tonight/tomorrow. rnrnI'm glad you like this story so far!
Date: 03/27/09 12:01 am Title: Beautiful Butterfly.
man this is way great..
I was writing a psycho!Bill series haha..
psycho!Tomi.. or DomiTomi..whichever goes..
Author's Response: Thank you for you review.rnWriting pshyco!anyone is fun because it's so OOC.rn
Date: 03/26/09 11:41 pm Title: Beautiful Butterfly.
D: oh noes!! Bill has already developed Stockholm syndrome.. *hugs him* oh no.. what is tom going to do next?? D:
Author's Response: Indeed he has.rnYou may be surprised at what Tom does next.
Date: 03/26/09 09:57 pm Title: Beautiful Butterfly.
Ugh, this is so creepy, but it's totally got me wraped up in it! I wish Tom wasn't so totally psycho, then I'd say there was a chance for a relationship but sadly under these circomstances there can only be a brainwashed bill (sad), or an unhappy Tom, unless he lets him go... then I guess things could change.
Author's Response: Haha thanks. rnTom isn't totally psycho. rnHis heart is in the right place.rnI hope you will like what's to come.
Date: 03/26/09 08:43 pm Title: Beautiful Butterfly.
wownessssssss
Author's Response: Haha, thank you!
Date: 03/26/09 07:10 pm Title: Beautiful Butterfly.
Ooh again with the shiver. I really like the mind games.. it's quite interesting to read. I'm really into this and Hope to read Fairground soon :) You're pretty damned amazing.
Author's Response: Aha, thanks. rnI, also like mind games... it makes horror seem that bit more fun.rnFairground will be up soon.
Date: 03/26/09 06:38 pm Title: Beautiful Butterfly.
I really loved "Photography", and this is the perfect sequel to it! I love the style this is written in. It really makes the whole thing flow easily...not to mention it's so unique! Can't wait for "Fairground"!
Author's Response: Thank you for you review!rnI am glad you enjoyed the story.
Date: 03/26/09 06:34 pm Title: Beautiful Butterfly.
I have to admit, this is definitely NOT what I thought was going to happen. It through me off, but I absolutely LOVED it! As for the idea, b/c of the "stalker feel" of your story, I have an idea of writing a "stalker" fic. (But Bill being the stalker, instead of Tom.) If you would like (since it was your story that gave me the idea), would you like me to send it to you after it is written?
Rachael
Author's Response: Haha. I think 'fairground' will throw some people off even more! rnI'm so excited that I have inspired someone to write :) rnI would love it if you could send me your story. rnI can't wait to read it!rnrn
Date: 03/26/09 06:24 pm Title: Beautiful Butterfly.
WOW. AGAIN, DAYUM. This is all sorts of wonderful and I don't even know how to say how amazing this is.
There ARE one or two typos, which a beta (or a few looks over) would catch, but nothing major. I'll point them out for you, if you want. :)
Can't wait for Fairground!
Author's Response: Hey, when I re- read it last night I saw some errors. But I didn't have time to correct them. Pointing them out would be great. Thank you. rnAnd I am glad you like this so far.
Date: 03/26/09 06:09 pm Title: Beautiful Butterfly.
Oh, my. Tom is psycho, hahaha. I really love this, its very unique and I really like reading this. I read both Photography and this, and I can't wait for Fairground.
:) thank you for writing! really.
Author's Response: Thank you for your review.rnTom certainly is a psycho.rn
Date: 03/26/09 05:39 pm Title: Beautiful Butterfly.
It's awesome!! WOW!!
I think it's cute! In a very VERY sick way!! But extremely cute and awesoem to me!! *0*
Bill's got the Stockholm Syndrome!!
I LOVE this very FUCKING much! Can't wait for the next one!!
But...please...please do not tear them appart!! *begs*
Author's Response: Thank you for your review!rnHaha, cute in a very sick way - I like your thinking!rnBill certainly does have the Stockholm Syndrome. rn