Date: 05/03/09 02:49 pm Title: Selfish Ambition
O-oh....I love Bill when planning revenge *shiny eyes* Muahahahahaha...*cough* Great chapter!! :) I hope you continue soon!!
xx Chi ^^
Date: 04/19/09 08:54 pm Title: Selfish Ambition
Revenge is a bitch
But it's just so damn fun :)
I love this, dear.
Don't keep me waiting.
Date: 04/12/09 11:29 pm Title: Selfish Ambition
Oh no!! It wasn't Tomi fault ..
Good story! I want to know more!! .. Give me more please! :D
Date: 04/09/09 05:43 pm Title: Selfish Ambition
I WONDER TOO!
I could just SEE Bill's evil smile when he is thinking of the plan...whatever it might be hehe
Author's Response: Bill has SUCH and evil plan, but it is also an really stupid one, poor Tomi~rnThere is more to come!
Date: 04/09/09 03:43 pm Title: Selfish Ambition
Sex. That's what bill has in mind. Or at least I do... Great chapter update!
Author's Response: Bill is a bitch XD but your pretty close~rnMore to come! 8D
Date: 04/09/09 02:16 pm Title: Don't be a Bitch...Bitch!
Oh no, he's gonna get revenge for something that poor Tom didn't even do. Now I'm all stressed out.
Author's Response: Tom is a strong guy! he can handle anything Bill throws at him! >.> mostly >.>rnMore unravels in the next chapter~
Date: 04/09/09 07:46 am Title: Selfish Ambition
wow
Author's Response: ^_^" I hope thats a good wow
Date: 04/05/09 12:52 am Title: Through Mein Eyes Pt2
Dude! Update soon yeah??
Author's Response: The next part is nearly done~
Date: 04/05/09 12:50 am Title: Through Mein Eyes
Daaamn... That sucks for Bill man...
I love the way there's pictures at every chapter in this story. Great job man.
Author's Response: It's official, I am a TH and Photoshop addict >.>rnrnThere is more to come! 8D
Date: 04/04/09 11:04 am Title: Through Mein Eyes Pt2
I love this :) I hope you continue soon!!
xx Chi ^^
Author's Response: I have so much more planned! don't worry! 8D
Date: 04/04/09 10:40 am Title: Through Mein Eyes Pt2
love this chapter
Author's Response: Thankyou! 8D there is more coming~
Date: 04/03/09 02:20 pm Title: Through Mein Eyes
Oh my god you MUST continue quickly!
Addicted.
Author's Response: You know I will! there is much more planned! rnrnI hope you enjoy!
Date: 04/02/09 10:36 pm Title: Through Mein Eyes
Wow! More, Please?
Author's Response: Very soon! 8D
Date: 04/02/09 10:28 pm Title: Through Mein Eyes
;_; Poor Bill. I hope everything works out for him at the end. Keep on writing, because this is really good. :)
Author's Response: There is more coming~ but I'm not giving any of the story away :P
Date: 04/02/09 08:39 pm Title: Through Mein Eyes
awww poor bill
Author's Response: Don't worry about him, he's a big boy, he can handle himself~
Date: 03/26/09 02:43 pm Title: Don't be a Bitch...Bitch!
The relationship between the twins is fascinating... more please!
Author's Response: I'm writing more! 8D there should be a new chapter or two soon~
Date: 03/26/09 01:39 pm Title: Don't be a Bitch...Bitch!
wow that was intense and i love the ending hehe
Author's Response: And there is more to come 8D
Date: 03/26/09 12:26 pm Title: Don't be a Bitch...Bitch!
Aww, I really liked this! The plot idea is awesome since I'm sure TH's management does like to play up their contrasting personas.
I hate for the boys to fight, but if it leads to sexing... =D Also, I would love to see a fight that involved insults about Tom's shoes and Tom calling Bill a panda. ;)
Bill giving everyone the silent treatment - and then deciding he was giving his fans the silent treatment too was so funny! Oh Bill, you really are sort of a bitch. xD We all love him anyway, of course,, especially Tom! ♥
I don't like to give concrit unless it's specifically asked for, but since this is a such a small thing I figure you won't mind: when Jost knocks on the door you have *knock knock*. Putting stars around an action is more of a chat thing, and I think it would look a lot better with just a simple change like 'There was a knock on the door.' or whatever works for you. =)
Anyway, awesome fic! I had a great time reading it. ♥
Author's Response: Thankyou! I'm definately continuing on, I like the premise of the twins being forced against their nature >.> and diva Bill is just too fun.rnrnThanks for the help as well, I come from more of a roleplay background so I do sometimes get stuck on the articulation of sound, or background interfearance, I'll try to describe things instead of asterix them in the next chapter!rnrnThankyou for reading~
Date: 03/26/09 07:26 am Title: Don't be a Bitch...Bitch!
i´m just gonna say three words.
I WANT MOOOOOOOOOOOORE
Author's Response: MOST DEFINATELY! 8DrnI'm already working on the next parts~
Date: 03/26/09 06:46 am Title: Don't be a Bitch...Bitch!
oh, oh!
This was beast.
but now I'M sexually frustrated.
Dammit, where's KIA when you need her?
xxxxxxxx,
Russ!a