Date: 04/16/09 05:21 am Title: Chapter 4
Very nice and very interesting!
I like the first four chapters. I like your Bill and Tom in this, their characters are good.
Can't wait for your next update!
xx
Date: 04/16/09 04:33 am Title: Chapter 4
Amazing story.. I love it, can't wait for an update.. n_n
Date: 04/15/09 11:31 pm Title: Chapter 4
Great story!! Keep posting please!
Date: 04/10/09 02:41 pm Title: Chapter 1
oh my god! ho my god! oh my god! i love It!!!!!!!!
Date: 04/09/09 08:28 pm Title: Chapter 1
Hmmm... an interesting plot. I also like your writing, try not to rush the story though - a slow build up is always more exciting to read and shows skill;)
Date: 04/09/09 04:15 am Title: Chapter 2
small twist of twilight in the story. i love the mix keep it up
Date: 04/04/09 02:30 am Title: Chapter 2
this story is very sweet:) i love it! i really hope you continue this. You are a fantastic writer XD
Date: 04/03/09 07:49 pm Title: Chapter 2
It's an interesting start. Tho Tom acts a bit creepy... ! Good job :)
Date: 04/02/09 11:34 pm Title: Chapter 2
Oooh. Favorite chappie for sure so far!! The sweet kisses in the back of the class, the fact that Tom is going through the torture of sunlight to be with his Billa, and the sweet 'I love you's' in his ear - AAAAWWWWWE!! incredibly cute :3
Date: 04/02/09 03:42 am Title: Chapter 2
Update! What I think... I think you went
a little bit too fast. You should take this story slooooow. It should be mysterious, thrilling, erotic (since it's a vampire story ) and other things that makes us readers squeak *giggles*
Anyway... Please don't be those writers that abandon their story! So update soon!!
Date: 04/02/09 03:34 am Title: Chapter 1
OMG OMG OMG!! I love interesting vampire fic!!
This story is really awesome!!
I'm like hyperviliting (i don't know how to spell that word)
Date: 04/01/09 05:12 pm Title: Chapter 2
Oooo, face-off between Tom and Andreas! This was a great chapter...nice to learn more about why and how Tom started obsessing over Bill!
Date: 04/01/09 04:36 pm Title: Chapter 2
hey! so.. i am just imagining that andreas is a werewolve! XD i hope that u post soon another chap
xoxo
Date: 03/30/09 10:01 am Title: Chapter 1
I REALLY REALLY REALLY LIKE THIS STORY!!!! ALOT!!!! PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ UPDATE!!!!!!!! I REALLY WANNA SEE WHAT HAPPENS!!!!!
Date: 03/26/09 05:15 pm Title: Chapter 1
Hee hee. It's reminding me of Twilight. :P Nevertheless I loooooove vampires! I'mm'a definitely keep my eye on this fic. :)
Date: 03/26/09 04:06 am Title: Chapter 1
well thats interesting... i
Date: 03/26/09 01:45 am Title: Chapter 1
it was a way different story from vampire one's like you said but I really like the whole relationship is based on the dreamworld they exist together in. I can't wait to see if they actually talk and see eachother in reality. let's see I love the fluff like always from you very sweet and romantic in this. seems good so far don't really know what to add oh maybe some of tom's thoughts or point of views later or something from his perspective about what he's about. I really love that they communicate through bill's dreams. best part and suprise that's new and love the eye color chart you might have to post in each chapter so I can reference please bad memory. also like how their relationship is like unreal and real at the same time.
keep posting more I'll look at what's wrong with tom? and review.
Date: 03/26/09 12:43 am Title: Chapter 1
o0ooh~ :DD seems interesting~ :DD i can't wait for more~ :DD
Date: 03/25/09 09:00 pm Title: Chapter 1
LOVY....SO MUCH!!
MORE PLEASE!!!!