Date: 05/07/09 08:45 am Title: Chapter 7
This is so cute and adorable :DD
Date: 05/07/09 06:00 am Title: Chapter 7
Finally, the history of TomxD
Um, maybe you've written it in another chapter and I just can't remember but, where do this story take place? Which country?
Great chapter btw^^
Author's Response: Its in the first chapter in the first sentce but its in Germany hun its okay haha thank you for the review XOXOXO
Date: 05/07/09 12:51 am Title: Chapter 7
tom was arousaled they should have done something
Date: 05/06/09 11:20 pm Title: Chapter 7
Awwwwe. Love is in the air. :3
Date: 05/06/09 11:08 pm Title: Chapter 7
love it! more please!
Date: 05/06/09 09:41 pm Title: Chapter 7
Wow, I absolutely love this story. It's so adorably cute! But, I have a question, Tom is a vampire, and he lives forever, Bill isn't a vampire so...he won't live forever, right? So, will Bill be turned into a vampire?
Author's Response: Thank you and as for the questions, well as a human Bill wont live forever. And as for Bill being tunred into a Vampire, I cant disclose that at this moment. You have to wait for a while, there is 30 chapters in this story. XOXOXOXO Mary
Date: 05/02/09 03:51 pm Title: Chapter 6
write more! this is very interesting! i like it alot!
Date: 04/30/09 02:49 pm Title: Chapter 6
I like your story. I have been following it from the beginning. I like the plot and can't wait to know what will happen.
There are a few mistakes and sometimes it's maybe a little bit confusing, I mean some parts are moving maybe little bit to fast.
I'm sorry. English is not my mother tonque and it's not always easy for me to write exactly what I mean.
xx
Date: 04/30/09 05:40 am Title: Chapter 6
"Bitch I'm The Bomb Like Tick Tick.."
Sorry... I was listening to this song while I was reading this story... THANK GOODNESS YOU UPDATED!! I LOVE YOU I LOVE YOU I LOVE YOU!
Author's Response: ur totally getting a deddication for writing part of my favorite song and listening to it while reading I love you lots now OMG
Date: 04/30/09 02:58 am Title: Chapter 6
*grabs a bowl of popcorn and sits down next to Tom* I wanna' hear the story too. :)
Date: 04/30/09 01:10 am Title: Chapter 6
love this story
Date: 04/29/09 06:58 pm Title: Chapter 6
*zombie face* neeedd... moreeee...!!! O___O
Date: 04/29/09 06:12 pm Title: Chapter 6
your style is improving but it could use some work, more build up, longer chapters, faster updates, but good. Try to write the way you speak, it makes it flow better, try adding some more details as well. Good luck, I look forward to the next update.
~Harpy-Chan~
Author's Response: yah I know, and thank you for the review. I try to but I gues it does not seem to work. And it gets more detailed as it goes, just this is the beggining. Plus I have a update once a week cus the story is so long and I have a designated amount of words I want in each chapter and if I go over im happy if I dont then I feel like I did bad. But thank you for the review it means a lot to me. XOXOXO Mary
Date: 04/29/09 05:14 pm Title: Chapter 6
You're a very mean person!
Your endings *growls*
But I'm sure you're doing that on purpose...everytime something interesting is coming you cut the chapter so I have to sit here like an idiot and wait for the next:(
Update soon please!
Really liked this chapter by the way^^
Author's Response: aww hun im sorry, I dont mean too sometimes, it just happens. This time I ment to haha. Its way better if you just wait, this next chapter will be worth it.rnXOXO Mary
Date: 04/27/09 09:41 am Title: Chapter 5
Soooo sweeeeeet they are together!!
Author's Response: awww thank you I kno right? U always review it makes me happy, plus ur tha only one to review this chapter but im glad it was u XOXO
Date: 04/21/09 08:41 pm Title: Chapter 4
*new reader* I love this story xD Its so cute!
Date: 04/16/09 12:28 pm Title: Chapter 4
iloveit, iloveit, I love it =D
-careface- if its going to fast =D
its really really sweet!
Date: 04/16/09 09:40 am Title: Chapter 1
I don't think they're moving too fast either. Tom has been waiting for Bill for 300 years, and Bill has been wanting to be, and be with, a vampire, for years. Then Tom, his perfect vampire shows up, kisses him, and then disappears for 3 weeks? I'm surprised they've only gotten as far as they have. If I were Bill, I would have been all over Tom like....like a vampire on blood!
Date: 04/16/09 07:31 am Title: Chapter 4
Nah, they're living at a perfect pace. I particularly enjoyed this chapter.
Haha. Ya, you better run, Bobby!! Tomi gunna eat you!! :P
Date: 04/16/09 05:42 am Title: Chapter 4
suuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuucchhhh a lovely hot and cute vampire story ^___^=