Date: 03/26/09 03:08 pm Title: By Your Side
Aww, poor Tom.
I was kinda expecting to read that he'd stormed out of the interview and punched something when they were asking about Bill being dead and stuff.
Especially when they said about Tom stabbing Bill.
I loved this chapter, just like the first.
I'm excited for the next, especially if you update this fast.
Author's Response: Yeah, Tom is definitely the main victim of this story, even though Bill's the one in the coma. Lol. rnI reckon he might have stormed out, but he knows that he has to keep his cool now so he can get back to Bill sooner. I duno. Punching would have been fun to write though :DrnTom stabbing Bill...I don't think that could ever happen. They might fight, but I'm pretty sure knifing oversteps the boundary of acceptable a little. Lol. rnI'm probably going to release the 4th chapter tomorrow. I seem to be writing this story really fast. Maybe I just have more ideas than usual? Lol.rnHope you keep reading!
Date: 03/26/09 01:15 pm Title: By Your Side
): Realism is a bitch, but kind necessary. I'm glad you threw it into the chapter here. Bill in a coma? Haven't read that one yet... the characters seem alright and the drama isn't too dramatic. Interesting.
I hope Bill /does/ get up, but maybe not for another few chapters. If it were a real life situation, I'd hope to high heaven he'd wake up asap. But in the safety of a story.... maybe it can drag out a little. Testing Tom and the Gs. No matter how long it takes, I believe in Bill and Tom's twin-bond.
Good luck writing!
Author's Response: Thanks for your message! rnrnYeah, if I wasn't trying to keep it realistic, Bill would've fallen over then got back up again only to find Tom apologising and kissing the pain away. Aww. Lol.rnrnI think I do actually make it too dramatic...but I'm not sure how wildly Tom should react to certain situations. Someone told me that he should have punched someone at the interview and I was like...really? Well it's not as if I know how he's going to react if this happened in real life, god forbid it ever does. Haha. rnrnIf Bill was in a coma in real life, I'd want him to wake up after like, 5 minutes. Max. Lol. rnrnI was focusing mainly on the bond of family, but I think friendship really needs to be highlighted as well. Thanks again, your comments make me reflect on my writing :D
Date: 03/26/09 01:01 pm Title: By Your Side
Wow! You blowed me off my bed! This was amazingly sad and puuurfecttt! I can't believe it... wow!
Author's Response: Haha, you didn't hurt yourself did you? I'd feel a bit guilty then. rnrnThanks for reviewing! It makes me write with scary fast speed. And also keep me up until like 4 in the morning typing. Lol.
Date: 03/26/09 01:01 pm Title: By Your Side
Just beautiful. I am looking forward to the next chapter =)
Author's Response: Thanks!rnrnHope you keep reading! Let me know if it suddenly gets really crappy! :D
Date: 03/26/09 09:31 am Title: The 'Incident'
it's so beautiful and bitter -- you could almost leave it a one-shot (but I really want it to be a happy ending ^^)
Author's Response: Haha, thanks so much!rnYeah, I only noticed that it might seem like a one-shot when someone asked me if I was doing a sequel. I think it was the last line, and how it was the title so it seemed like it'd come full circle. My bad. Lol. I think adding more chapters to it will somewhat detract from its impact, but I really want to keep writing it. rnHope I don't disappoint! :D
Date: 03/25/09 11:40 pm Title: The 'Incident'
AWW keep going, please?
Author's Response: Haha, yeah, a new chapter should be up in the next few hours. If it's not rejected of course. I always sucked at paragraphing. Lol. Thanks for your message!
Date: 03/25/09 06:01 pm Title: The 'Incident'
What an f'ing cool story!!
Man you got me hooked! PLEASE update this one often!!
Author's Response: Haha, thanks!rnOuch, being hooked sounds painful. rnrnOh man, I make the worst jokes. Lol. rnrnYeah, a new chapter should be up in the next few hours if someone approves it soon. XD
Date: 03/25/09 04:31 pm Title: The 'Incident'
MORE!!! and btw, bill MOST wake up! :P
Author's Response: Lol, thanks for your review! rnA new chapter should be up in the next day or so. rnrnI agree, Bill must wake up. He's definitely not leaving Tom by himself. :D
Date: 03/25/09 04:20 pm Title: The 'Incident'
Will there be a sequel or something? This was said but its very true ... their bond is clearly unbreakable
Author's Response: Well, I actually intended this to be like a 10 chapter story. So yeah, it hasn't ended but I only just realised that it looked like it might have ended after the first chapter. I think it was the last sentence that made it seem like that. Sorry. Lol. rnThere's just something about the bond between those two that seems like nothing would ever tear them away from one another. That's just really what I'm trying to communicate here. Haha. But I think everyone knows anyway. :D Thanks for your review!
Date: 03/25/09 03:36 pm Title: The 'Incident'
*gasp* wow, i - i love it! write more pleeease??
mehr wenn du willst bitte :)
fern xx
Author's Response: Haha, thanks!rnYeah, I just posted another chapter so hopefully it'll be approved soon. rnrnYour german got me though, I was like...more when you...something, please? Had to look up willst. Hahaha.
Date: 03/25/09 02:10 pm Title: The 'Incident'
I can't wait to read more.
Seriously, I'd say it has more than potential, but that sounds patronizing, even though it does.
I hope Bill's not in the coma for long.
I'm desperate for him to come out and Tom to lavish him with affection and love.
The beginning was original, and I can only assume that the rest of the fic will be too.
Oh, and if you're looking for a beta, I'll do it for you. Though I'm not saying that you necessarily need one.
I can't wait for more.
Author's Response: Thanks! rnPotential, ey? Sounds pressuring. Haha. rnYeah, I wish that Bill would wake up too, he shouldn't make Tom wait for him. Poor guy. Lol. rnrnI hope that my story stays original, I don't like writing only to find that someone else has already written something close to it. Just seems to detract from the entire idea. rnrnThanks for your beta offer! I'd prefer to just post these whenever I finish them, but I'd be eternally grateful if you'd check through them after I've posted to let me know when I've made a mistake. rnrnLet me know if I've failed with the next chapter, haha. XD
Date: 03/25/09 01:39 pm Title: The 'Incident'
Wow, what an amazing start! With a start this amazing, the rest of the story must be fantamazing! Wow i must say! This if a fav! No doubt!
Author's Response: Haha, thanks heaps for your review! I wouldn't really call it amazing, but hell, I'm happy if you are. :DrnI hope I don't let you down in future chapters! Let me know what you think.