Date: 03/30/09 11:07 am Title: By Your Side
Awww poor Tomi. :( I don't thikn he should really blame himself, that was just bad luck not his fault..! But I can imagine that's hard... oh well, another post! :)
Author's Response: Hey again, you sent two reviews with the same message. I would've just replied to one but if I don't reply to both, it will annoy me with that unresponded reviews thing. Haha. Thanks again!
Date: 03/30/09 11:06 am Title: By Your Side
Awww poor Tomi. :( I don't thikn he should really blame himself, that was just bad luck not his fault..! But I can imagine that's hard... oh well, another post! :)
Author's Response: Lol, I think even though he shouldn't, he would be absolutely filled with grief and guilt. I mean...if he hadn't chucked the book, Bill wouldn't have fallen...it's def. partly his fault. Haha. Partly Bill's too though. And partly the table. How could you, table! Yep, got my craziness for the day, I'm done. Hahaha. I hope to update soon :D Thanks!
Date: 03/30/09 09:41 am Title: The 'Incident'
:o oh,... would stand up for a one shot as well! Nice start. :)
Author's Response: Haha, thanks! Yeah I got people asking me if I was going to do an epilogue and I was like...what?...I've only just finished the first chapter...lol. :D
Date: 03/29/09 05:14 pm Title: The 'Incident'
Yeah, I love Starfox. Got it on Game cube, but I'm stuck now, lol
And lesbian vampire killers, yes, it is basically about a group of people who kill lesbian vampires XD
Ever seen Shawn of the dead or hot fuzz? It's basically just a really random comedy. My sister saw it not too long ago X3
Author's Response: Lol, don't you hate games where you go really well, get into it and then bam! You're stuck and there's nothing you can do to progress? I hit that in Kingdom Hearts I (that hard ass game that feels impossible at some points) and just gave up for like half a year. -_-'' Lol. But then my friend came over and beat the boss first time round. I was both happy and utterly pissed. Hahaha. rnAnd, wow, how the hell do you find movies like that? Then again, I've seen Zombie Strippers on the shelves at the video store. That one's made me cringe...I don't even want to know. Haha. rnOMG, I have both Shaun of the Dead and Hot Fuzz! SotD (what a crap abbreviation) is practically my fav. movie, I could watch it forever :D
Date: 03/29/09 02:39 pm Title: Forgotten Children
Sorrowfully Beautiful. I love it =)
Author's Response: Hey, thanks! I've never written a fic where the main emotion is an underlying regret and sadness. So hopefully it's not too bad :D Well...it's not like Bill would go into a coma and Tom would yell "Freedom!" and then go off and party till he's wasted, right? Well hopefully not anyway. Haha. I think alot of their fans would try and murder him if he left poor Bill there without him :)
Date: 03/29/09 11:54 am Title: Forgotten Children
BILLLL he HAS to wake up..for Tom =/ The dream things really cool :) I enjoy that. Cant wait for more!!
Author's Response: Hey, haha, yeah. Tom is the only one Bill would wake up for, I reckon. :D I'm a strong believer in the twinbond. Lol. I should be writing more tonight, just have to plan out some things. Thanks for your review!
Date: 03/29/09 11:40 am Title: Forgotten Children
*claps* Fantastico!
Author's Response: Thanks! :D
Date: 03/29/09 11:38 am Title: Forgotten Children
Waaaaaahhh It's so great that I've stumbled upon this fic^^
Anyways, Being a masochistic bitch that I am, this fic has caught my attention the moment I've read the first chapter. Gaaaaaadd...T______T
I think Tom could help Bill through his dreams - they're identical twins and they share almost everything.
This is really an interesting fic!!^^ I'm looking forward to the next updates!^^
Author's Response: Lol! Yeah, I love the twinbond between them :D Tom and Bill would def. help each other out in any situation, I guess coma shouldn't be any different. It should probably be even more important really. Hahaha. Well, hopefully I'll get to write some more tonight. Thanks for your review! XD
Date: 03/29/09 11:37 am Title: Forgotten Children
I think that no matter what happens, he will always carry the guilt of this for the rest of his life. His reactions are quite what I expect from him, because he would definitely try to get back to Bill any way he could. Everyone know that Tom must be feeling like shit, regardless of who started it. This is his brother, his twin, no one will ever get it properly except them. He needs his space to deal with this properly, the best way he knows how.
So, I guess in answer to your question, keep writing him as you already are! :)
Author's Response: Hey, thanks for your review, it was very insightful. I didn't even start to think about him carrying the guilt forever, even if Bill ends up okay and forgives him. Wow, it's sad to think about it like that. Lol. But I'm sure that Bill would eventually make Tom let go of it, either that, or get him to shut up about it. Haha. Thanks! Your review made me feel better about how I'm writing Tom :D
Date: 03/29/09 10:50 am Title: Forgotten Children
Does this mean that when Bill wakes up he wont be able to remember Tom.
Or at least, Tom Tom? Wait, that's confusing, if he doesn't remember his twin Tom, will he be able to remember dream Tom?
I hope so.
But I'd prefer him to just wake up and be fine.
Sorry I never reviewed the last chapter, I was sleeping at a friends and I couldn't review.
I adore the dream world, if they just stayed there I think I'd be happy.
Bill's character in it just makes me smile and aww.
But so does Tom's.
Tom's reacting just fine, I think he should break down in a full on sob at one point.
Throwing himself over Bill.
But just so we can see how weak he is without Bill.
Need I say I loved this chapter?
Because I did.
A lot.
Author's Response: Well, I would explain about the memory but it might lose some of its effect if I did. Lol.rnrnLol, I think the dream world would be creepy by yourself. Faceless people wandering about and not being able to find your way home. I'd be completely freaked. Lol. Bill and Tom as people generally make me smile and aww. Even when they're arguing over something incredibly stupid, I have to smile, it's just impossible to keep a straight face. :DrnMental breakdown, eh? Hmmmm. I think it would break my heart to actually write Tom losing it over Bill. Good idea. Hahahaha. Thanks for your review! You make me smile :D Hopefully I'll find some time to write tonight.
Date: 03/28/09 04:59 am Title: The 'Incident'
XD Yeah, the alien thing just came into my head and it made a bit of sense... lol
I do exactly the same thing when I can't spell something! You know what you should get? Firefox or Safari, it checks your spelling when you're messaging someone and stuff ;) sounding out actually does work, yay!
I keep seeing The Knowing around but what it's actually about escapes me even now. I don't think it's something I'd watch...nope, I'd rather see Lesbian Vampire Killers XD I just love the name!
Suicide! WOO! Everything sounds so much better in your head...why is that? o.o
Author's Response: Haha, Firefox? What's that? Reminds me of that fox/man thing from Super Smash Bros...Starfox? No wait, I think that's a spaceship. Well at least it fits with the aliens, right? Lol. rnrnThe Knowing was pretty awesome, I have to admit. But the end just didn't fit, I reckon. It's about...uhh...a bunch of numbers that predict the future? Hmm...that idea probably sounded better in their heads too. rnrnLesbian Vampire Killers? Uhh...not one for the family, you think? Wait, are these lesbian vampires that kill? Or are they lesbian vampire hunters? Or do they only hunt lesbian vampires? Ok, wtf. Stopping now. Dude, I go a bit crazy when I'm up late...or early in this case. Hahaha.
Date: 03/27/09 11:53 pm Title: By Your Side
ahhhh jesus this is heart breaking! you're seriously tearing me up here!
Author's Response: Ahh, sorry! I don't mean to tear you up! Well maybe I do, but not alot. Lol. I'm trying to make it more sad and heart-touching, you know? Not so much the breaking. :D rnThanks for your message!
Date: 03/27/09 05:09 pm Title: On The Edge
wow, you sure know your anatomy XD
lovely!
Author's Response: Lol. Thanks! One of my subjects is biological psych so this just really seemed appropriate. Haha. Hope you keep reading!
Date: 03/27/09 04:28 pm Title: On The Edge
Just like the other 2 chapters, beautiful. And I hope Tom can bring Billa back =(
Author's Response: :D I try my best! Yeah, I always believed that if anything ever happened to one of the twins, the other would always bring them back. Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 03/27/09 03:09 pm Title: On The Edge
Wow! This was amazing! Had my heart in my throat!
Author's Response: Better your heart in your throat then one of those oropharyngeal airway things. Have you ever seen one of them? Frickin' scary. I'd rather someone just use toothpicks. Haha. Thanks for continuing to review!
Date: 03/26/09 10:03 pm Title: By Your Side
Short, but very good. Keep it up!
Author's Response: I'll try to make the chapters longer XDrnEvery chapter has a theme and I kind of seem to be trying to rush through them. I'll slow down, don't worry. Lol. Thanks for your message!
Date: 03/26/09 06:14 pm Title: By Your Side
Though the coma thing isn't the most original idea,
I think you wrote it really well
so I'm actually really enjoying this story.
(: can't wait for more.
Author's Response: I ended up deciding on the coma idea because it fit best with what I was planning. I went through the entire list of levels of consciousness to see which one went well with the plot, and eventually decided on a coma. Lol. So I know it's not original, but it's unoriginal for a reason. Haha. I'm glad you're enjoying it! It makes me smile whenever I get a review :D rnHope I don't disappoint!
Date: 03/26/09 05:12 pm Title: By Your Side
I totally agree with what you said, lol
You're keeping it realistic, realistic is good...unless there are aliens...but aliens could be real...Anyway
I like this, it's sad but not all out depressing, I'll be waiting for the update, definitley
Author's Response: Haha, I read your review and just had to laugh. Aliens, ey? I'll keep that in mind. Nuh. I'm not much of a extraterrestrial (how the shit do you spell that???) author. Lol, sadly I just copied my spelling into word to spell check it, and holy crap I spelt it right...yay for sounding it out. :DrnYou know I saw the Knowing a few days ago, and the crazy bits in that just kind of detracted from the movie for me. I'll try not to make it so farfetched XD. rnI'm trying to make it heart-touching and sad, I hope I don't make it depressing. I don't want to be responsible for a sudden rise of suicides. Hahaha. Hmm...that was less morbid in my head. rnHope you keep reading! :D
Date: 03/26/09 03:31 pm Title: By Your Side
awww nein that was sooo sad...i loved it and it didnt sound rushed either...
more soon please =P
fern xx
Author's Response: Thanks! I'll try to update as soon as possible. I really want to get this story out, it keeps bugging me to write when I should be studying. Whoops. Lol. I stayed up till 4 working on the 3rd chapter -_-''' rn
Date: 03/26/09 03:09 pm Title: By Your Side
Awwww I dont want Bill to die it would crush Tom.. but i love this story! :)
Author's Response: Lol, anyone who wants Bill to die obviously doesn't appreciate the perfect man. Hmm...that sounded less stupid in my head. rnThanks for your message! :D