Date: 04/07/09 10:03 am Title: Ready, Set, Go!
I know how this works! I watched a show with a girl in a coma for like, 20 years, and she was trying to find her way home. She had a twin who helped her, and once they made it home, she woke up from her coma.
Am I on the right track?
Author's Response: Haha, close. Actually...that might work better than what I planned....hmmmmmm. Lol. Good job! :D Thanks! Hopefully I'll update in the next few days
Date: 04/07/09 09:54 am Title: Ready, Set, Go!
Awww! So sweet!
Author's Response: Thanks! :D
Date: 04/07/09 09:16 am Title: Ready, Set, Go!
I know how the story should progress, Bill should wake up next chapter *nods seriously*.
Naa, but soon hopefully, then for the vast amounts of twincest fluff that will surely drown your readers.
I can't tell you how much I adore your Bill, he's too adorable, the same goes for Tom. They just make me want to pick them up and mother them to death. And I don't think I need to mention how in love I am with your dream world. It's beyond amazing and well adapted.
It's making me want for bill to never wake up so that they can stay there and frolik forever together.
Is that how they're gonna fall in love, in this dream world and when they come out they remember, so they give it a try here?
Author's Response: Haha, I don't think Bill's ready to wake up yet...but soon :D Lol, drown the readers, you say? Hmmm...sounds dangerous. Lol, Bill and Tom are adorable in real life, I'm just trying to recreate that in this story XD. I'm still glad that the dream world worked out so well, I was worried about it at first. Lol, Bill and Tom shall forever frolic in the streets of the dream world? Not that romantic really...a city/urban suburb? Wow, feel the love. Lol. And you're pretty close to the mark with your theory, but things aren't that simple alot of the time. :D We'll just see what happens, I haven't gotten the next bit planned out yet but I will in the next few days. Thanks so much!
Date: 04/07/09 09:10 am Title: Ready, Set, Go!
This was amazing!! I love it!!
Author's Response: Thanks, hope you enjoy the next chapter once I've finished it :D
Date: 04/07/09 07:11 am Title: The 'Incident'
Yeah I write, sometimes badly, but still.
And Riku has shoulder length silver hair not short and spikey. Your not thinking of Zexion are you?
I don't think I actually know about any Australian made movies. I think we've made a couple of good ones. Maybe the James bond movies? The cast is all English so maybe they're ours. Um...Oh, the Harry potter series I think, can't really think of any others but we've definitely made some good ones over here.
Oh Kangaroo Jack...i didn't like that movie much, i found it boring. But then, i was really young when i saw it, i found everything boring then. XD
Games and movies we get them a couple of months after they're released in america. I just got back from a trip to New York and i bought Pokemon Platinum For about $36. When it comes out here in a few months I can tell you it's gonna be at least £40. I got it cheap! ;D
Author's Response: Haha, we all write badly sometimes. If I'm trying to force out a chapter quickly without taking the time to think it through, I think it turns out pretty crap. Lol. Isn't Riku's hair like...blueish? My bad if it's not. Maybe it's both? Hahaha :D And who the crap is Zexion...I never remember anyone's names unless they're major characters...their names are just too hard to remember sometimes. Lol. James Bond is english isn't he? So is Johnny English. Man, I love that movie, he's just an idiot. Yeah, HP are English I think. You've got loads and loads of funny BBC TV series, like The Good Life, Some Mothers Do Have 'Em, umm, hey, Doctor Who? Is that English? Kangaroo Jack pretty much sucked, didn't it? I thought it was pretty boring too. Hahaha. I was like...12 when I saw it. You went to New York? The city or the state? I went there a few years ago, loved it sooooo much, but Las Vegas was my fav. I'm so sad that TH visited all these places a few years after I did...I remember watching the fountain outside that casino for like half an hour, it was amazing. But I guess it just wasn't meant to be. Hahaha. Pokemon Platinum, hey? We just started advertising that one, maybe we're not so far behind...
Date: 04/06/09 07:11 pm Title: Don't Jump
oh my!! I want more!, please?
I really like your story, It's amazing and bring me to the edge just to think that maybe, Bill lost all his memories and when he wakes up Tom is going to be nobody but a stranger in his life and start to search for this stranger of his dreams... Makes me sad.
Author's Response: Haha, thanks! I'm going to post another chapter tonight sometime, once I've finished checking through it. Actually, I've just posted it. Haha...ahh that would be terrible for Tom, for Bill to finally wake up and his brother has lost all memory of him...poor Tom. Hope you like the next chapter! :D
Date: 04/01/09 04:06 pm Title: The 'Incident'
I always hated Ansem...him and his tan...
Yeah, Riku's hair is awesome, I based one of my characters on him! X3 But Axel's is definitely the best. Then there's Marluxia... ;)
Noes XD They advertised Hot fuzz, Lesbian Vampire killers and Shaun of the dead when they came out. Do you get Advertisements for American movies? Is that a silly question to ask XD
No offense but you people think of very strange ideas for movies...lol
Truth be told I haven't seen any but the rest can't be too awe inspiring if one of the ones you remembered was about a guy in a trailer XD
I'm sorry, I'll be quiet now :3
Author's Response: Lol, didn't Ansem just confuse you? I was like...tanned skin...probably? white, flowing long girly hair...and yellow eyes? I don't get it. Lol. You write? And you made one of your characters have spiky blue hair? Haha, awesome. I had bright pink tips a while ago so that's kind of like Marluxia? Lol. But at the moment it's red tips so maybe I'm more Axel now? Hahaha. What ever happened to Axel, I haven't seen him around for a while in the game, I thought I'd really already killed him and I was like "NOOOooooo"rnYeah, Australia is pretty much the US's shadow in alot of things, we generally get their movies a year after they're first released and we get games a yr after too. Have you ever heard of the movie, Kenny? Typical Aus movie. Though I kinda liked that one. It was about a guy who has a dream to become a professional toilet provider or something. Wow, I just made it sound like the embodiment of suck, didn't I? Oh well, it's not that bad. And then there's Croc Dundee...though I'm not sure which country that was produced in. And what about that other one, Australia? Haven't seen it myself, apparently it wasn't that good. Lol. Wow, I'm suddenly remembering all these Aus movies...and now I remember why I'm so cautious of them. :D What about English movies? I lived just outside of London a few years ago and I remember seeing Kangaroo Jack and LOTR2. Hahaha.
Date: 04/01/09 04:19 am Title: Don't Jump
This is such a good story. I am really enjoying it.
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you're enjoying it :D I hope to post another chapter in a day or two
Date: 03/31/09 11:55 pm Title: Don't Jump
ahhh god this is so good but its twisting up my tummy i want little billa to wake up!
Author's Response: Aww, sorry for upsetting your tummy...it's a little bit too sad, hey? :D I'm sure Billa will wake up soon enough though, with Tomi by his side :D lol.
Date: 03/31/09 09:44 pm Title: Don't Jump
I REALLY REALLY love the dream parts. Though I got all sad at the last line. I have to say, I have no ideas for you. All I can think is, damn, I just want to sleep *grins*
Author's Response: Haha, thanks! XD. I know, I wish Bill had remembered Tom for real too...but it didn't fit in with the plot at the moment. Lol, don't we all just want to sleep :D
Date: 03/31/09 04:57 pm Title: Don't Jump
Have each chapter be a step closer to Bill remembering Tom .. bit by bit. But keep going, either way, whatever idea. I just hope that Bill does wake up .
Author's Response: Yeah, that's hopefully what I'm planning :D But I want to have some fun with Bill not remembering Tom first...hahaha. -_-' Thanks for the message!
Date: 03/31/09 12:43 pm Title: The 'Incident'
Ah yes, good ol' kingdom hearts...I love the second one, I watched my friend play the first one.
I remember there was a time when I was totally obsessed with Axel...I loved the hair... |3
I sort of do that, but instead of my friend doing it, after I leave a game for ages I'm some how able to do the level I couldn't do, it's weird!
And they advertise these movies don't they? XD I mean I live in England and these movies are english so I'd see them wouldn't I? :3
Author's Response: I have both KH's games and omg the first one is like impossible sometimes. You have to kill Ansem like 3 times in a row or else you lose the game. Hahaha. It pissed me off soooo bad. :D Ahh, Axel is so completely kl. His hair just kicks ass, right? I love Riku's hair too, though. And Sora's :D. Wait, what movies are they advertising? The Zombie Stripper ones? Haha. Well I live in Aus so we have loads and loads of bogan movies, it's so crap. Like I really want to watch a movie about a guy who lives in a trailer and his dream is to open his own fish n chip shop *eye roll*. Hahaha.
Date: 03/31/09 11:55 am Title: Don't Jump
tom must show him the way out of there! like...the place tom always "starts" in the dream, there can be an portal there!!! :D tom leads him to it and the bill can wake up! :D
Author's Response: Haha, thanks! A portal eh? I didn't even think of that one...hmmm. Lol. :D Great idea
Date: 03/31/09 10:40 am Title: Don't Jump
Orrr come on!
I was proper happy, until those last six words!
If it wasn't for Tom's reaction, I'd have been like, oryt, yeah, that was sweet of Bill.
But now I'm just proper devastated for Tom.
Poor bastard.
There is going to be a happy ending to this, isn't there?
You've not left the character death warning out because they're going to live their life in the dream world after Tom's pulled the plug on Bill and topped himself, have you.
I'd like that, but then again, I wouldn't.
I'm well glad the dreams are continuing, they're proper mint, original too.
They're what sets this fic apart from others.
Author's Response: Lol, I can't even remember what I typed anymore to unhappify (it's a real word, i'm sure!) (lol) you. How come I never write on seperate lines in author reviews? It's annoying me. Hahaha. What do you mean Tom's reaction made Bill's action less sweet (well, that's what I gathered lol)? As in, because Bill was lying, Tom's reaction just seems a little sad? Poor Tom, I reckon. :D Yeah, I'm kind of known for not liking to write unhappy endings. -_-'' I just don't think I should put so much time and effort into something only to have it end with a despair-filled ending. Although, them living together in the dream world wouldn't be so bad XD. Nuh, there's a different ending in mind for this story. I just hope people like it. Lol, and I don't really want to write a suicide story, either. Suicide isn't really something I condone, you know? I don't really mind if other people like it, but I don't want to beautify something like that...dying means you're dead. Lol. I'm glad you like the dreams, I was worried that people would be like 'Make him just wake up, the dreams are stupid'. Hahaha. I got home early from uni today 'cause it sucked and I just wanted to go home, lol, so that means I might update again either tonight or tomorrow night.:D
Date: 03/31/09 10:17 am Title: Don't Jump
AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW! Bill, even in your confused dreams, you STILL try to please your brother! <333
Please wake up soooon, before Tomi loses his mind with these dreams, only to face the harsh reality as you lie almost lifeless on that bed. :-((
Author's Response: Haha, isn't Bill just the cutest? I just kept writing and then suddenly Bill was trying to make Tom feel better about him not knowing him. Lol. Poor Tomi...it is kind of harsh...to be with your twin in your dreams only to wake up and they're lying there unconscious...well they'd both better get their butt into gear. Haha. Thanks for the review!
Date: 03/31/09 09:54 am Title: Don't Jump
AWWWW!
Author's Response: Haha, thanks :D It was a bit of an Awww chapter, wasn't it. Lol.
Date: 03/31/09 07:16 am Title: The 'Incident'
Yeah, Bill does the voice in the german dubbed version and Nena is there as well. The german version you can watch it over on youtube, since that's where I saw it and I LOVED IT. I want to own it so bad!
And yes , I will make sure to poke when necessary. ;-)
Author's Response: Oh, does Bill do the voice of the main guy? He has while spiked up hair. I'm pretty sure Nena was the princess...rnrnYou know, if you like, you might just message me, so I don't keep getting free review thingies. Hahaha. :D
Date: 03/30/09 11:54 pm Title: Forgotten Children
i think Tom is reacting the way he should, well no that sounded wrong but yeah the portrayal of his emotion seems to be pretty good to me :) its so very sad
Author's Response: Haha, thanks for your review! :D rnI'm glad that Tom is somewhat in character (well...the character that I've seen in real life?), I'm just guessing he'd react just like anyone else, only alot worse since it's his other half, you know? Lol. It is kinda sad, yeah...but life has its ups and downs. Hahaha. This particular down just started with a stupid joke and a phonebook. :D
Date: 03/30/09 08:35 pm Title: The 'Incident'
Hehehe, oops!
You're very welcome! Feel free to poke me for whatever you need if you get stuck along the way, because I so totally love your fic.
Author's Response: Thanks, haha. You know that movie Arthur and the Invisibles? I heard somewhere that Bill voice acted in that movie and so I rented it out, only to find, to my utter frustration and dismay, that there was no German audio on the disc. Hahaha. I'm such an idiot. I'm not even sure if it was him now, but I'm pretty certain that Nena was in that movie...rnMake sure to bug me if I don't update in like a week and I'm just being lazy, 'cause sometimes I just do nothing and don't write for a week 'cause I'm playing a game that doesn't go anywhere, or I'm dawdling around, reading an old book. Hahaha :D I get writer's block as well (doesn't everyone?) (maybe not superman?) so be prepared if I just randomly message XD
Date: 03/30/09 08:10 pm Title: The 'Incident'
Hehehe, you're welcome!
And yeah, Bill will forgive him this, because he would be the first one to realize that they are both mortal and either could go in a second, without things being good between them. Bill strikes me as thme more centered of the two and I think in his own way, yes, he was offended by what Tom said, but it doesn't really matter because Bill would forgive Tom anything, as long as he stays by his side.
Tom is very protective of his brother and if he's the one that fucked up, I see him feeling guilty and only Bill is the ultimate one that would be able to give him the absolution he will need to be comfortable around his brother again and find that peace his soul will seek.
And you're doing great with Tom! Keep at it! <333
Author's Response: Oh wow, I officially love your reviews :D rnTom and Bill are twins and (Wow, I bet you didn't know that right? *Rolls eyes at self*) I think that no matter what happens, there's always going to be that bond between them. I don't know what it's like to have a twin, but I have a brother that I'm close to so I guess they're even closer than that. :D rnTom always offends Bill, but I know what you mean, Bill would have to forgive Tom someday or else he might lose him :D which nobody, and assumably the twins, want.rnIf I'd clobbered my best friend with a phonebook and she went into a coma, I wouldn't really move for at least a month. And then everything would pile up so much that I'd have no choice but to only come to visit once a day, which would make me feel even more guilty. But hopefully Tom will have other people to deal with everything...hmm....that's a good point. Will they be able to make everything stop while Bill and Tom are...absent? Lol...I should think about that. Thanks for your review! It made me think about things which I might have forgotten. Hahaha. And omg, my bro just walked in and saw my response and was like 'what are you doing?', and I'm like...'nothing'. But I reckon he knows now, he must have seen the title :O. Nuh, it's all good. Thanks again!