Date: 04/16/09 02:05 pm Title: Chapter 1
It's sweet. Simple. Clearly well written! But it's a snippet in a window of a story. It's nice but void of almost anything other then the moment. For what it is it's good. For what it could be it's a little disapointing. I'd like to see what else you can do...*smirks*
Author's Response: OMG! You have no idea how much it means for you to reveiw my story! I love your fanfiction!rnrn*cough*rnrnAnyway, you know, you're right.rnI am working on a chaptered fic right now, though. It'll be up soon!
Date: 03/27/09 04:55 pm Title: Chapter 1
I'm going to be a little harsh (sorry!)
It's an okay piece of work. The plot is very good, but I think it could've been better. I'm afraid I can't pinpoint exactly what could've been done better, but I just think that it could be better. I'll let think about that, and sorry if I was a little harsh
Author's Response: Yes, I know. Danke fur die advice, though! I looked at it, but, like you, I couldn't pinpoint exactly where or what. If I do, however, I will change it! Danke!
Author's Response: Yes, I know. Danke fur die advice, though! I looked at it, but, like you, I couldn't pinpoint exactly where or what. If I do, however, I will change it! Danke!
Date: 03/24/09 11:53 am Title: Chapter 1
Awww..that was some serious fluff. It was utterly adorable, beautiful, sweet....etc. It was just totally awesome. I loved it. You did a great job. Well done. :)
Author's Response: Thanks! It means alot to me!
Date: 03/24/09 02:32 am Title: Chapter 1
awww..*damn fluffwhore kitty...*
Author's Response: Danke!!!!! XD
Date: 03/24/09 12:36 am Title: Chapter 1
Oh that was beautiful! I'm adding it to my favorite stories. You're a great writer, you should write more!
Author's Response: *Gasp* Favorites? *Faints* I'm honored! Danke!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 03/23/09 10:54 pm Title: Chapter 1
That was sooo cute, You did an awesome job. I am so serious. I loved it.
Author's Response: Awwww!!!!! Thanks!!!!!