Date: 04/25/09 03:57 pm Title: Chapter 7 watching you sleep and windows
I liked the last part it brought a little bit of humor to the story.
Author's Response: thanks :) yes i thought it needed lightening up a little bit :P
Date: 04/20/09 06:14 pm Title: Chapter 6cleaning up and a happy phone call
Bill is so sweet.
Author's Response: isnt he? XD
Date: 03/31/09 11:47 pm Title: Chapter 5midnight ice cream antics
Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwh it's gorgeous
Date: 03/31/09 11:41 pm Title: Chapter 4look out mannequins toms on the loose!
Looove it :D
Author's Response: thank you very much darling! why dont you post something of yours on here???
Date: 03/23/09 02:12 am Title: Chapter 3go take a shower we are going to town.
lovely. I really liked it. Great job so far.
Author's Response: thank you very much :) please keep reading!
Date: 03/21/09 09:46 pm Title: Chapter 2the mansion. Andreas comes to visit, Tom makes waffles
Wonderful chapter! I'm really enjoying it. I can't wait to see where this goes. I would have liked more description of Bill and Tom's feelings but, other than that, it was wonderful
Author's Response: oh thanks so much! i will take that into mind! thanks for reviewing :)
Date: 03/21/09 01:47 am Title: Chapter 1. something bad is going to happen
YOU ARE AWESOME.
Ah, it's so sad...
BRING IT ON part two please
hahahah
everyone else, this is a great story, now read :)
Date: 03/21/09 01:24 am Title: Chapter 1. something bad is going to happen
I like this, now I want some more. Awesome start by the way. Oh and I gots a question, um what happened to the twins dad?? I'm confuzzled here!
Author's Response: thanks so much!!! i have almost finished part two :) keep reading :)rnwell more will be explained in the next part so dont worry!
Date: 03/21/09 01:16 am Title: Chapter 1. something bad is going to happen
Write more. It's amazing so far. I love it.
Author's Response: thanks so much :)