Date: 03/08/15 11:07 pm Title: Chapter 1
This was beautifully written
Date: 10/17/10 07:10 am Title: Chapter 1
oh wow, that was stunningly beautiful! God, i feel shivers running around all over me. It's been so long since i've read a first person narrative twincest and honestly i didn't think i was missing much. But my God that was gorgeous! Full of absolute raw emotion. Jesus man, i really am blown away by that! Incredible :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much. This fic sort of came out of nowhere for me but is one that I hold really close to my heart. I'm so happy you liked it.
Date: 09/14/10 05:58 pm Title: Chapter 1
All right, I have read some steaming hot bondage fic, sexual seduction , now this angsty masterpiece, what is next....comedy. No, but seriously, you got it girl, seriously.
I love this fic way more than I probably should have. I am an angst whore deep inside, what can I say? This fiction transported me straight away back to my second beloved fandom in which fan fiction is very often written in similar dark and gutting manner.
Unapologetic way you describe the state of matters between Bill and Tom, the absolute hopelessness of the whole situation is delivered with such force and power.
Balance, balance and balance again. That always comes to my mind when thinking of your writing. You seem to balance on a razorblade´s edge with such finesse and skillfulness.
Beautiful work.
Author's Response: Ok, it's been outrageously long but I'm finally sitting down to respond to reviews. I wish I could tell you how much it means to me to be able to read all your thoughts. I know it probably doesn't seem that way because it's taken me... er, four months? to properly thank you, but sometimes I just have no idea what to say and feel inadequate writing only "thanks." Your comments on this fic really hit on so much of what I wanted to convey while writing it, and that is probably the most rewarding feeling for me as a writer. It's of course wonderful when people enjoy what I've written, but it is really special when I get the sense that they understand the fic the way I hoped they would. Thank you so much.
Date: 08/09/10 04:20 pm Title: Chapter 1
ohh...sadness...i almost want to cry...good jo1b
Author's Response: Thank you :)
Date: 06/10/10 07:24 am Title: Chapter 1
... I'm out of words. I really don't know what to say. But I think I liked it...
Author's Response: Thank you :)
Date: 10/21/09 04:49 pm Title: Chapter 1
Hmmmm, I'd say this is a pretty depressing fic. ........... OMG that was random xD Sorry, I loved it!! It's real O.O *the feeling, I may hope that this isn't reality...*
xx Chi ^^
Author's Response: Lol, it is a rather depressing fic, I agree. I'm glad you liked it anyway - thank you!
Date: 07/24/09 04:36 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oh holy hell. This was fantastic! I loved it all. I especially loved the line, "I swallowed, thinking of how you’d once adored pretty things, and made the V of my thumb and forefinger into your favorite necklace." Utterly delicious imagery, my dear.
Author's Response: Thank you so much - this story is really close to my heart and it means a lot that you enjoyed it :)
Date: 06/29/09 10:28 pm Title: Chapter 1
Damn. Quite dark. If it were a short film I think it might actually take lace in Gotham or Sin City. Thats the kind of cinematic image you put in my head with this, and I rather liked it.
Author's Response: Thank you so much - that's exactly the type of setting that I wanted the readers to place the characters in. Glad you enjoyed it :)
Date: 06/28/09 12:40 am Title: Chapter 1
So dark. But it was so perfect.
Author's Response: Thank you very much :)
Date: 06/21/09 12:11 am Title: Chapter 1
so how old are the twins in this?
Author's Response: It's sort of left open to the reader to decide for him/herself... there's no right or wrong answer :)
Date: 06/17/09 02:44 am Title: Chapter 1
i love it.
the general idea is a bit depressing, but i love how unique it is, separate from anything i've ever read. sad, but lovely
Author's Response: Thank you very much :) It's very flattering that you found it unique, and that you liked it even though it was rather despressing.
Date: 06/11/09 05:10 pm Title: Chapter 1
That was... interesting. And I loved it. The tiny hints of masochism were great; I loved how it wasn't BAM and in your face, it was there just enough to get your attention and keep you on the edge of your seat.
Very hot, if only in an easy, simplistic way. I love your style of writing. (:
Author's Response: Thank you! Writing this was a really different experience for me - I generally don't write things with such dark themes, but the story line just popped into my head so I played around with it. I tried to tell the story in a subtle way, and it makes me feel really great that you thought I succeeded. Thank you very much for your compliments :)
Date: 06/11/09 12:18 pm Title: Chapter 1
This was so fucking good. The way it flowed, the way it felt, the way it ended.
Author's Response: I'm so glad that you liked it - thank you very much!
Date: 06/10/09 08:49 pm Title: Chapter 1
"that would be meaningless and absurd."--Very clever ;]
I'm not really sure what to say about the story, other than I read it, and it was different from most everything I've read, and it gave me things to think about. And also, my name is Clare too :]
Author's Response: lol I'm glad that you caught the joke...I found it really amusing and wasn't sure if many people would catch it :). Thank you very much for reading - it makes me feel really good that you found the fic unique and that it gave you something to think about.
Date: 06/10/09 04:14 am Title: Chapter 1
Just. Wow.
I really can't describe how this made me feel. The descriptions, the atmosphere, I'm actually feeling a little suffocated. I just wanted to say that some lines from this story are going to stay with me, definitely. Especially this one: "I swallowed, thinking of how you’d once adored pretty things, and made the V of my thumb and forefinger into your favorite necklace." I don't know why this one in particular. It confused me at first, I had to read it a few times to really understand, and when I did... just wow.
The last line made me literally get up from my chair. Do you think I'm weird?
Author's Response: No, I don't think you're weird, I think you're absolutely wonderful :). You have no idea how happy your review made me...this story is really close to my heart, and it was one of those scenes/relationships that just weighed in my mind until I wrote it down. I wasn't sure if I got across the heaviness and hopelessness that I wanted to portray, but your review makes me feel like I succeeded. Thank you so much.
Date: 05/23/09 11:37 pm Title: Chapter 1
Exquisite
Author's Response: Thank you :)
Date: 03/30/09 12:02 pm Title: Chapter 1
By the way ,i'm from a country in Europe-Bulgaira,and i was wondering if i can translate this in Bulgarian for a TH-fan bulgarian site.Of course,you'll have the credits. :)
Author's Response: Oh my gosh - I would be more than honored. Feel completely free to translate :)
Date: 03/30/09 12:00 pm Title: Chapter 1
Urm... i really love this one .So dark and ..i'm a bit ashamed of myself ,but i cried,imagining this is reality.
You are a reeeealy poweful wrighter!
Author's Response: Thank you so, so much. I generally don't write like this, but the premise was just floating around in my head so I tried writing it down. I can't tell you how happy it makes me that the story had such an effect on you - thank you!
Date: 03/21/09 02:27 pm Title: Chapter 1
Powerful.
Author's Response: Thanks :)
Date: 03/21/09 11:38 am Title: Chapter 1
awww that was so sad but beautifully written.
Author's Response: Thank you!