Date: 05/13/09 07:20 am Title: Chapter 1
Okay that is a deep way of putting things. Man there is so much high exspectations in that world as well. So far as I can see you deserve way more reviews then you have now. So I am going to do my part and review each chapter.
Author's Response: Aww thank you honey. I'm not sure if people on here are into hardcore vampires and angels or if they just prefer that Twilight fluff xD
Date: 05/13/09 07:02 am Title: Prologue
Wow this seems to be a ooc fic. I think you have that as a warning though. lol. I am not a fan of Bushido(sp) so i am kinda on toms side at the moment.
Date: 04/18/09 05:41 pm Title: Chapter 10
Man, this story is aweesome, I can't believe it only has 7 reviews?! O_o
Date: 04/11/09 06:50 pm Title: Chapter 9
yeah Bill gets to see the city he is so innocent and niave that the little things make him happy or sad it's like seeing the world through a babies perspective great job at the realistic way of showing he knows nothing of this earth world. and the quilt was sad he remembered his mother and the secret pendent is going to bit him in the end. love that Bushido and Bill got some alone time.
Date: 04/06/09 04:55 pm Title: Chapter 8
did you repost this chapter?
Author's Response: Aw no I forgot to post chapter 6... So all is fixed used to go from 5 to 7
Date: 03/24/09 04:44 pm Title: Chapter 4
I'm still liking it! Please keep going!
Date: 03/22/09 04:12 pm Title: Chapter 2
I'm really enjoying this so far. You have a really good storyline going on here. I can't wait to see where this will go next. It's awesome so far. I love it. :)
Date: 03/21/09 09:39 pm Title: Chapter 2
I really enjoyed reading this story so far. You had a great idea and I’m looking forward to read how the plot will progress :) .
Date: 03/21/09 07:55 pm Title: Prologue
I like this story, it has potential, but there are a lot of errors, and they take away from a stories affect when they're all over the place, so my suggestion to you is to get a beta reader to help clean it up.
Author's Response: Okay thanks...my beta is currently away right now but thanks for the tip
Date: 03/20/09 05:59 pm Title: Chapter 1
I don't understand why this doesn't have more reviews. I'm enjoying it thus far. Poor, poor Bill.
Author's Response: Oh thank you! My first reviewer!rnI know guess people don't really like this so far?.... oh well deal I'm still uploading the rest