Date: 04/07/09 07:28 pm Title: Chapter 5
Seventeen forever - metro station (sadly someone named it before me :/)
i also remember dignity - hilary duff!! hahaha
i'm LOVING it keep it coming!
Author's Response: thanks! i quit putting in songs around the seventh chapter, i always write these things around 2 in the morning and my brain just couldn't think of any more songs, lol
Date: 04/01/09 09:20 pm Title: Chapter 8
awww that was sweet!!!
Author's Response:
=]
Date: 04/01/09 07:24 pm Title: Chapter 8
Awww! Datz just Cute!
Bill is so Sweet!
I want one of him! -LoL-
-- I loved it.
I cant wait for more.
You MUST write more, and upate as soon as possible!
Author's Response: lol. thanks. i like him too! i'll try. i make alot of errors and i'm on my thrid draft and still there is a ton. plus i have to get this one kid to edit it, which really sucks cuz hes a junior guy and i am so embarrassed when he reads it. gah. but i know i need to let him at it because he really good. urgh. but yea he also takes forevere. for just the first page he took like 20 minutes, no joke sorry i'm rambling it just might take me longer than normal to update waiting for this kid to get done and fixing all the errors he finds. lol. i just had to get that out, sorry
Date: 04/01/09 01:31 pm Title: Chapter 7
I love Bill in this story too, he is sooooo cute, don't change him, he is adorable. Love the story, please keep it coming, I'm gonna track it.
Author's Response: awwww. thanks. i really like him like this too. i based his personality mainy on the videos of his dance party and when he got him plane jumbee back
Date: 04/01/09 02:29 am Title: Chapter 7
Say yes! Lol
Author's Response: haha! i have the next one! you'll love it i promise
Date: 03/25/09 07:27 pm Title: Chapter 6
Ehh! It was Adorable!
-- I loved it.
-LoL- Okii. I'll be waiting for next Chappie! Please update SOON!
Author's Response: thanks i really love al of your reviews! i'll try. right mow i'm editing and trying to fix all the mistakes i made in the chapters
Date: 03/25/09 10:25 am Title: Chapter 6
ARRRRRR so sweet i love it! Bill is definatley whipped! keep it coming!
Author's Response:
lol. thanks. the spelling and grammar is soooo bad in this chapter. None of you said anything! i took it to school and my friends made fun of me for it! Gah. i have to get someone to proof read these things before i post them
Date: 03/23/09 11:48 pm Title: Chapter 1
Lol yea true.
Author's Response: lol
Date: 03/23/09 09:38 pm Title: Chapter 1
lmao. I kno I was j/k hehe.
Author's Response:
oh thank gawd. lol
i was really worrying there. i don't want people to think of her like that. i really can't stand the sterotpyical verison of a person like that
Date: 03/23/09 05:47 pm Title: Chapter 5
I think I got the song! Seventeen forvere-Metro station! Wee! I really like how the story is unwinding hun!
Author's Response:
good job! i'm sorry but someone named it before you. =[
thanks tho. i really appreshiate the time you take to read my stories and review. i enjoy the feedback
Date: 03/23/09 05:04 pm Title: Chapter 5
keep it coming
Author's Response: i'll try
Date: 03/23/09 04:16 pm Title: Chapter 5
seventeen forever - metro station. :)
and btw, GREAT chapter. :D
post more soon, please.
but honestly, i HAVE no clue about what she looks like. :S
i just picture black hair and a slim face.
Author's Response:
good job on the song. Sadly someone else named it before you! =[
lol. i also picture a slim face, but not the hair. i'm gunna tell everyone what i think she looks like in the next chapter
Date: 03/23/09 03:48 pm Title: Chapter 5
Seventeen Forever by Metro Station :)
Author's Response: good job! you got it first!
Date: 03/23/09 02:14 am Title: Chapter 5
She should have a nice ass! Caramel skin, long curly hair. Lol
Author's Response: lol. my verison is totally different. i'll tell you what i think she looks like to me in the next chap!
Date: 03/22/09 05:35 pm Title: Chapter 4
keep it comin !
Author's Response: XP
Date: 03/22/09 10:11 am Title: Chapter 4
Oh more more!
Author's Response:
^o^
Date: 03/22/09 09:56 am Title: Chapter 2
Oh crap that was so funny.
Author's Response: thanks i try.
Date: 03/22/09 09:50 am Title: Chapter 4
HA! i definitely know this one.
it's 'you spin me right round' by dead or alive, or dope, or marilyn manson, or flo-rida. take your pick.
it's like... my favorite song ever. :)
Author's Response: good job. yea it is, tho i perfer dead or alive, i like the orginonals most of the time, execpt for marilyn manson's tainted love. Thats my favorite type of that song!
Date: 03/22/09 09:43 am Title: Chapter 4
keep it coming
Author's Response: bah
Date: 03/22/09 09:40 am Title: Chapter 3
“TOM! Shut up and drive. We’re going to her house.”
hahaha, i love those commercials.
i'm such an idiot for not seeing that. -______-
Author's Response:
ah. i can see where some people would think that is it, yes. sorry
lol. its okay, its just that i watch way too much tv and love all 8o's music.