Date: 02/05/10 09:15 pm Title: I'll Jump For You
awh, that's so sad, but i loved it!!! you really described their feelings very well!! it was great! i loved the flasback when they were 13, that was cute and then the end i go a little teary when tom said 'then i'll jump for you,'
i really enjoyed it =]
Date: 03/18/09 05:55 pm Title: I'll Jump For You
omg that was WAY too sad omg
Author's Response: ummmm sorry? =D
Date: 03/18/09 05:08 pm Title: I'll Jump For You
Heartbreaking...wow, just heartbreaking. I think my heart shattered into a thousand little pieces whilst reading this. It was beautiful. I thoroughly enjoyed it, even if I did have tears in my eyes by the end. It was brilliant. Great job. :)
Oh..and rock on to you. I love commas too. I'm pretty sure I over-use them a heck of a lot too. Even if you did, this was awesome though. :)
Author's Response: oh my god, wow! thank you!!rnand high five for the commas =D
Date: 03/18/09 05:07 pm Title: I'll Jump For You
oh my God that was amazing
I cried my eyes out.
Fantastic
Author's Response: wow! thank you so much =D