Date: 04/08/10 09:18 pm Title: Am I really invisible to you?
wonderful oneshot!
I LOVE EVERY SINGLE WORD IN THIS FANFIC! EVERYTHING!!!
this is wonderful, absolute pure gold. You're an artist, a wonderful artist that paints pictures with her words.
love you.
Date: 08/28/09 02:09 pm Title: Am I really invisible to you?
D: This made me tear up. Beautiful imagery, the beginning gave me chills which lasted all the way through.
You're amazing!
Author's Response: thank you.
Date: 05/03/09 07:12 pm Title: Am I really invisible to you?
wow. this was probably one of the most beautiful things i think i will ever read in my entire life.
thank you for sharing this beauty with us.
Author's Response: thank you, i felt compelled to write it.
Date: 04/25/09 12:13 pm Title: Am I really invisible to you?
very well written
Author's Response: :D
Date: 04/24/09 06:23 pm Title: Am I really invisible to you?
wow. that was amazing. i cant believe i never thought about this.
bill must feel a whole mix of differeent emotions when he's with tom.
man, great work.
Author's Response: thank you. hahaha, i wouldn't have thought of this unless either, but somehow, i guess i did. :P thanks, again.
Date: 03/23/09 04:45 pm Title: Am I really invisible to you?
omg that was like omfgitwasauhmazinqimfuckinqspechless it
was wow and more ;D
Author's Response: lol, thanks. :)
Date: 03/20/09 10:29 am Title: Am I really invisible to you?
wow, that left me speechless.
it was just THAT good. :)
Author's Response: thanks hun. :)
Date: 03/19/09 09:12 am Title: Am I really invisible to you?
That was.. Wow.
I'm speachless.
I have never read something like that.
Good job ;]
Author's Response: awe, thanks. :)
Date: 03/18/09 08:07 pm Title: Am I really invisible to you?
In the year and a half I've been here, I have not read anything like that. I saw the summary and thought it'd be something nice to try. Something new that I've never done before and I was right. This is absolutely mind blowing.
While I was reading this I was thinking to myself, Why don't people understand girlfriends or boyfriends are just going to leave? Why do friends or even siblings have to push you away? This story tells my live right now. Seriously. Other than the incest part. Hehe. But I do love this twc.
Honestly, I don't know what more to say but I can say, I think this is the longest review I've ever left.
♥ I loved this, really.
Author's Response: wow. your review just blew me away. thank you. and yeah, it kinda has something to do with my life, too. that's where i got all the emotion from. :) and thanks, i'm happy knowing that i am now the owner of your longest review. :)
Date: 03/18/09 04:10 pm Title: Am I really invisible to you?
wow.
I'm speachless and utterly jealous I can't write like that.
This should go on MUCH MUCH longer. You don't even know.
Please. I beg.
Author's Response: i DO NOT think that my writing is any good at all. so thank you for the compliment. :) and i might continue it in tom's perspective, if i ever get the chance.
Date: 03/18/09 02:55 pm Title: Am I really invisible to you?
How sad! Mu heart broke for Bill. I really do wonder how Bill feels when Tom is with all these girls. Anyways good job!
Author's Response: i know! me too. :) thanks.
Date: 03/18/09 02:52 pm Title: Am I really invisible to you?
This was so beautiful. The way you described everything was so unique and expressive. It broke my heart, but I really loved this fic!
Author's Response: awe, thank you. *fixes heart* there, all better now. :)
Date: 03/18/09 02:49 pm Title: Am I really invisible to you?
Oh, this was depressing. Way to go.
:(
Author's Response: thank you...
Date: 03/18/09 01:28 pm Title: Am I really invisible to you?
*sheds a tear* woah. that is definitely some intense feelings. (sad thing is i feel like that CURRENTLY,
no i'm not in a incestuous/twincestuous relationship....let's just blame it on liking a friend who doesn't see the real me. hm.
but anyways, walking out of my fog of depression, this was really good, and it makes me wanna put a beat down on the girl, but especially on Tom, because he's so blind, even though that's supposed to be his twin.
hmmm, i wish there could be a sequel or something that would resolve (or deepen) things. but that's because i'm a angst whore xP.
anyways, good job, and i can't wait to read more from you ^_^
Author's Response: awee, i feel the same way too. and the person i like completely ignores me, like i don't exist. anyway, thanks for your comment. :) i won't write a sequel to this story because i feel like it deserves to be left as a one shot, alone and solitary. but i will write more of these deep one shot's. :)