Date: 11/06/24 08:30 pm Title: I'll Kill You With My Eyeliner, Bitch
I am a Chinese fan who came a bit late. Discovering this website is the happiest thing for me in recent years. I used to use bookmarking as commenting. I must say that I have read and bookmarked this story. Reading this story is undoubtedly a pleasure! Today I plan to leave a comment. Thank you for your story. You are an amazing writer.
Date: 08/09/09 01:18 am Title: I'll Kill You With My Eyeliner, Bitch
I love jealous Bill. I really really love jealous Bill. This is hilarious!!
Date: 07/15/09 04:30 pm Title: I'll Kill You With My Eyeliner, Bitch
This is the first in the series, right? Well, again your plot is wonderful - and may I say your grammar is exemplary?
For this, I would recommend using bold or italics instead of caps. I know that technically they're not actually incorrect (kinda) but nor are they correct. I just don't like the way they look in a paragraph - it's quite unattractive. Oh, and you're missing a comma in your summary.
Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review! And yes, it's the first in a series. There's a second one out, and I'm slowly working on the 3rd installment. Major thanks about the grammar! I try really hard. My high school english teacher really impressed grammar onto us. :D All the advice is lovely. I just saw another review from you on another story. I love reviews like this. It really helps; and, I know what you mean about the caps. I'm not sure why I used them instead of bold or italics o.O Anyway, thanks so much! Oh, and the comma? Huh...must check that! :D
Date: 04/28/09 03:27 pm Title: I'll Kill You With My Eyeliner, Bitch
I could just ask if he’d like some marshmallows a la Candy. XD LMFAO!!!
Man, tbc?
This was funny!xD
Date: 04/21/09 10:39 am Title: I'll Kill You With My Eyeliner, Bitch
HAHAHAHAHAHA thats awesome!
Date: 04/02/09 01:50 pm Title: I'll Kill You With My Eyeliner, Bitch
roflmao.cant stop laughing at the wackiness.
Date: 04/01/09 09:31 pm Title: I'll Kill You With My Eyeliner, Bitch
Ha! That was great!
Date: 03/30/09 12:07 am Title: I'll Kill You With My Eyeliner, Bitch
Ha ha ha, I love it. 'And I'll kill that bitch too' just love it.
Date: 03/21/09 04:52 pm Title: I'll Kill You With My Eyeliner, Bitch
HEll HATH NO FURY LIKE A BILL'S SCORN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
muahaha!
god i hate the name candy too
Date: 03/21/09 02:08 pm Title: I'll Kill You With My Eyeliner, Bitch
hahahaha i fukin love this story its just too hilarious!!!! i llove bitchy bill
Date: 03/21/09 12:39 am Title: I'll Kill You With My Eyeliner, Bitch
Oh My God!!!! YouTube Video!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Ha ha, Loved it!. This was brilliant,and so funny. You did an amazing job!
Date: 03/19/09 08:54 pm Title: I'll Kill You With My Eyeliner, Bitch
I love that song, heard it before I saw the TH vid, and thought of Bill the second "I'll kill you with my eyeliner" was sung :D hehe
Date: 03/19/09 12:34 am Title: I'll Kill You With My Eyeliner, Bitch
Love it!! Bill's thoughts were quite hilarious.
Date: 03/18/09 09:51 pm Title: I'll Kill You With My Eyeliner, Bitch
I LOVE YOU. Marry me.
Date: 03/18/09 08:26 pm Title: I'll Kill You With My Eyeliner, Bitch
Oh god…*weezes* I can’t breathe! I can’t breathe! I love that video to pieces and the fact that you made a fic for it…*shakes head* Priceless, completely priceless. I love you so much for this, you know that right? :D
Date: 03/18/09 08:26 pm Title: I'll Kill You With My Eyeliner, Bitch
Haha, all the time I was reading this I was wondering if the author was ripping off the youtube video... and then I saw the link credit lol
Fun fic!
Date: 03/18/09 07:18 pm Title: I'll Kill You With My Eyeliner, Bitch
hahahahhaha i love that video so much, but this this was operfecttion, it made me laughed so many times=DDD
great job=D
Date: 03/18/09 06:33 pm Title: I'll Kill You With My Eyeliner, Bitch
HaaHaa!! I love that retarded video.
Shenanigans!!
Date: 03/18/09 04:12 pm Title: I'll Kill You With My Eyeliner, Bitch
That was so funny!! Whoo!! Especially the "I'll kill you!" part...it made me laugh, and it made me think of Jeff Dunham's pupped, Achmed, who constantly says "I kill you!", and it only made me laugh even harder.
I'm still laughing. Bill is too crazy and cute!! And Tom... XD
Seriuosly, I love you. So much! ^^ *Hugs* Thanks for writing this! And I agree, it does practically beg for a sequel. Perhaps, Candy makes a surprise visit? *hint hint* :D
Date: 03/18/09 03:17 pm Title: I'll Kill You With My Eyeliner, Bitch
haha This is really funny, I love jeulous Bill!!
And that vid was halarious :D