Reviewer: jesseforever69 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/25/12 04:07 am Title: Chapter 1

this sounds like a really good story!
i hope u can hurry and post the rest!!

Reviewer: i_is_anonymous Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/25/09 02:21 pm Title: Chapter 1

There were many sluts wandering around but he had already picked out his prey, a pretty little black haired fox dancing on her own in the corner, her eyes wide with innocence, her lips full and beckoning, and an eerily familiarity surrounding her. Tom knew that this one was the one for tonight, and maybe for his whole vacation. – lol uh-oh

"Change it! Change it!" Bill laughed at the hilarity of it. He couldn't believe he had changed it to some random ass porn on HBO. Daring to uncover his eyes to grab the remote and see the title of the movie, Bill laughed louder now, an uncharacteristic bellow of laughter escaping his throat. Big Busty Bimbos 2 was not exactly a movie to watch with your brother. Or, was it? - lol

Whatever was so attractive about this stupid porno, Bill didn't know, but he was appalled to feel the familiar tightening in his groin. Bill's eyes were wider than Tom's could ever be, no matter how identical they were. As Tom watched the porn, Bill watched Tom watch the porn, both boys getting harder and harder. – lol

His eyes closed and he sighed, letting a hand slip down to grab at his erection. Images of Tom's flushed face downstairs engulfed his mind and he felt himself get even harder.
Bill groaned.
He was fucked. – lol basically!

Tom giggled like a little girl as she pulled his dick out and blew on it playfully. Tom gripped her hair tight as she lowered her mouth over him. He moaned and started grunting out random words, struggling to string sentences together. Tom always had a lot to say when someone was orally pleasing him. - lol

"I'm fucking...fucking Tom Kaulitz. Fuck, I'm so famous." - *cracks up*

pulling her behind him like an eager puppy with a new toy. Tom was about to get laid. Tom was about to have sex! - *giggles*

He knew everyone would be jealous...of her. Tom was a celebrity. - *snorts, rolls eyes* wow big ego!

For the first time that night, Tom took a good look at the girl. She wore a mini skirt and a seemingly flesh colored shirt, her chest tight against the material. – lol like the porn

Tom was ready to push through that curtain, to deflower her. The thought made him squirm. He hoped she was a virgin, even though she sure didn't look the part. - *eye roll* wow Tom’s a piece of work.

Tom stepped closer to her and he breathed on her face, his breath stale with alcohol and lust. Her eyes danced in his as she grabbed his cheeks and shoved her pierced tongue down his throat - *gasp* it’s Bill isn’t it?!

Now-a-days, the mean bullies were the paparazzi, and every snapshot they took was like a punch in the face. The life of a rockstar, of a celebrity. Bill could never get used to it. Somehow, Tom had. – nice analogy!

The thought of Tom pushing into a random whore later that night made Bill squirm, but not out of disgust.
Bill wanted to be that whore. – awh

Tom moaned, ripping off her shirt and moaning as he saw her tiny pink nipples. True, she didn't have as fantastic tits as he had thought she did at the club, but it wasn't as if he was gonna fuck her breasts. Licking at her non-existent breasts for a few seconds – nice!

"I'm gonna fuck you so hard." He whispered against her ass and she shivered, his nimble fingers tugging on her panties and revealing her beautiful hole. In his drunken state, he didn't realize that it was certainly not a hole he was familiar with. Fortunately, Tom didn't notice something else that was resting between the girl's legs, something very crucial. She gulped. – too drunk to notice nice!

Bill inspected his face. He looked ridiculous. How would this even work? He looked like a fool! Unless Tom was more drunk than Bill had ever known him to be ever before than he would surely realize what was going on. Bill couldn't pull this off. He knew he couldn't! – lol surprise!

All he could do now was wait until someone found him, and hopefully that someone would be Tom. – he will!

He grunted but stopped thrusting when he heard a few sniffles from the girl in front of him. He knew those sniffles. He knew them!
"B-Bill?" Tom whispered, risking to gently lay his lips against the back of the girl's neck, brushing her hair aside to see a tattoo of their band symbol standing out against Bill's pale, sweaty skin. – yes well that would be noticeable!

"P-please. Don't h-hate me." Bill pleaded, resting his head against their mother's bedroom wall, trying to focus on everything but the extreme pain he was feeling from where Tom was inside of him without any type of lube or preparation. Bill had been a virgin. – eeee with no lube?! OUCH!

Tom cursed, moving back and carefully pulling out of his brother, disgusted to see that he was still hard. He may be drunk, but he knew the taboo of what he had just done. He had fucked his baby brother. He had deflowered his Bill. He had ruined them. – well no not exactly since Bill set you up!

He was sore and stiff and scared. He felt cold and abandoned. He had ruined them. He had instigated all of this. He had been the one to seduce his own brother. – there we go!

Tom stood in the same place as he had been when the girl, or rather, Bill, had left the room. The alcohol was clouding his mind but he still knew, underneath it all, that he had just fucked his little brother. He had just stuck his dick in Bill's virgin hole and taken something from him that no brother should ever take. Even worse, Tom thought that Bill had enjoyed it, at least until he himself had ruined it and said Bill's name. - lol

Tom was so famously irresistible, even his brother wanted him. – lol pretty much!

Reviewer: Mikaiyawa Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/18/09 02:03 pm Title: Chapter 1

O.o  oh brother.. poor Bill... somebody needs to thinp Tomi over the head

Reviewer: hopelessblonde Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/19/09 04:31 pm Title: Chapter 1

Haha I was right then. XD
I love that song

Reviewer: Valecita Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/19/09 02:53 pm Title: Chapter 1

Wow, amazing! I love the way you described their emotions. It made me feel so desperately for Bill. How he doubted himself and then felt terrible for what had happened just because he had been in such a state of lust. Just wow, looking forward to reading more!

Reviewer: emme Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/18/09 06:54 pm Title: Chapter 1

poor bill!
I like this fic!

Reviewer: Destiny95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/18/09 05:06 pm Title: Chapter 1

Oh wow.. O_O xD .. Draamaaa, me like.. xD

Reviewer: Bekah Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/18/09 04:26 pm Title: Chapter 1

Ooh la la! ^_^

Leanaaaa. Veryy good ^__^!

The girl who made your banner is well sexy! ;D I think... I know her! o:

ANYWAYS!

LEANA.

MARRY ME!!.... again ;)

Reviewer: Silvia Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/18/09 10:36 am Title: Chapter 1

O.O wow... it had been a great read until the last few lines... Tom, hurry the fuck up and go pick him up! O.O outrageous, leaving him on the streets! Aww, why does me want a sequel? :( harsh angst ends sweetly :)

Reviewer: thywillbedone Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/18/09 04:58 am Title: Chapter 1

You bet your ass it is! WOOT