I like how Bill calls it "close time"...that's an understatement to say the least! ;)

Author's Response: I know right XD. But Bill isn't accepting it all yet. I'm sure it will come in time ^^

The ending of this chapter made me laugh..Poor Bill couldn't sit properly..Haha keep up the good work my dear.

Author's Response: me too ti was funny lol. Poor Bill *hearts* Thanks Throx ^^

It was cute!! I am curious who the older boys were ... keep going =) Looking forward to a new chapter =)

Author's Response: Thank you! Come back Saturday for it ^^ *heart*

I love a pissed, protective Tom! This was a great progression in the story and I really can't wait for the next chapter! And just so you know, I never thought you were demanding or greedy when it came to reviews. It's the least us readers could do to thank you for all the time and work you put into this.

Author's Response: Me too! Because they're older so many more things can happen it's exciting lol.
Thank you very much. I just wanted to make sure my readers didn't think I was being mean ^^

YOU R JUST THE BEST! I have had people say they’re going to dedicate a story but you actually did it. And it is a wonderful surprise to find that you dedicate the whole sequel to me. I know I take forever to write my reviews and sometimes I think they take longer because I have to think before I write than brainstorm because I have all these thoughts going through my head after reading. I also think your write sometimes my reviews can be considered an book maybe you can call it cliff notes or maybe school format has rubbed off on me. And I use analytical review of your story. But seriously I didn’t know that my opinions mattered so much to you. I felt that you really appreciated my reviews and you actually had your own opinion back so I always tried my best to keep up my reviews in your story. I have a problem with finishing or staying for a whole story with my reviews. And I will never stop reviewing I made a promise to you and I intend to keep it. Maybe I will be late but I will definitely finish the reviews of each chapter and really try to finish them before the next chapter comes up. I really ecstatic that my reviews mean so much and I never knew that it keeps you motivated to write more. And you really understand me it seems you are so on point about what I get out of your story. YOUR WELCOME A HUNDRED TIME OVER KYRU KAULITZ!!!

Your chapter note is right they definitely have a love that is pure and sweet that people don’t understand and are envious of that bond.

Well the start of your story and chapter was hilarious with them playing games in class and it would be sweet little Bill that would get them caught because he doesn’t have the knack for misbehaving like tom does. And you definitely have them still kind of the same not really changing. Bill still the angel while Tom takes the roll of deviant child well. You capture their different characteristics beautifully and display them greatly.

Oh I knew that Andreas would come into play later in their life. I think his character is an adorable little lost puppy. He’s so in love with Bill yet he can never have him. And Bill uses this to his full advantage to make Tom jealous. He kind of seems like he tolerates his presence just for amusement but I think way down he loves him as a friend. And Tom reactions make me giggle so possessive of his Billa and can’t endure a little competition for Bill’s time and affection. Andreas is so desperate for the affection or presence of Bill that it kind of cute and funny at the same time bring plenty of depth into the story. Throughout the whole cafeteria scene I could so picture Tom like that giving evil looks to Andreas and moping while the whole time thinking how can I get it through his thick dumb blond brain Bill’s not interested because he’s taken by me! The way you described Tom’s actions and thoughts through the whole scene was very sincere I think they would act like that at this age.

And loving the style evolution to more older Kaulitz twins looks. And using the fundamental use of their piercing for your story. They probably make better you of them than the real Kaulitz boys.

The best line in this chapter to describe the friends of each other’s was hilariously remember able and kind of true.
“Isn’t it so much nicer when there isn’t a blonde bugging us.”

“Shut up! Andreas is a good friend. At least the ‘freak about his hair’ isn’t here either.”

I love those lines true jealous showing here from both boys. Seems like Tom’s not the only jealous and possessive one.

Georg is in here too. He always seem like a better friend with Tom than with bill. Just saying they seem to have a closer Bro’s kind of relationship. And Andreas seems like more of a Bill friend. I glad that they have different friends to confide in.

I see that they just fall into a comfortable role around each other too. And Bill still deludes himself with it’s just to feel close to each other as you put it brainwashing. And Tom’s gotten more aggressive in his pursuit of happiness. Bill’s still bashful it’s kind of cute I always picture him being exhibitionist myself but in your story he should be more innocent it goes with his need to keep things in a “closeness” but not sexual way relationship with his brother. Still keeping a part of this still innocent. Wow they have definitely had some more knowledge about intercourse. Bill’s actually getting pleasure from it as well which means it’s only a matter of time that horny little Tom will get all of Bill that he craves. Tom’s getting a little more brave, rough and loud. I so thought they were going to get caught at the end with Simone walking in on them to bad she’s a nice mom when she wants a knocks instead of just barging in. well Tom can definitely think on his toes man the lie that come out of his mouth are effortless.

I thought this was kind of sweet yet perverted and I thought this is so Tom.

“I tell yea, if I knew I’d see this every morning getting ready for school I’d have no problem getting up.”

Well I really love that you still have them as just brothers. Their relationship is like on the borderline of closeness of brothers to more like couple it just a matter of time before it teeters off. Oh I think you really are great at writing their story I swear why original and baby step to the inevitable.

Ok trying a new method of writing a review for you. Usually I read and write your review on my HTC phone. It’s has internet explore not mobile internet and word mobile. So I can write you a review like on the road at school anytime. But I decide that maybe it would be faster if I wrote on my desktop computer at home I could get it down faster. But I notice it makes me write more. So I have a question for you. Would you rather me write on my Pocket PC phone or on computer? Oh and took so long because had to watch some show sorry.

And endnote I think that people should write stories on this website for the fun of it not for how many people love to read it or how many reviews. You should write for yourself but appreciate the reviews you get because they are heartfelt and help you along. I hate when people don’t finish their stories because it didn’t get enough interest. As I said before you have a great mind and you don’t rush the story and take your time to write everyone a response just don’t get buggered because your story doesn’t get lots of reviews. I think it’s the quality and quantity of the reviews you get not the amount just a thought. Even if you have one review you should keep going for that person or just to finish your story and not become a quieter because it seems like no one cares. Seen a lot of great stories get trashed because the author didn’t like the amount of love for it.

Author's Response: THANK YOU! Really? Wow you must get that a lot because you’re so nice ^^. But unlike them I do what I say ;). I felt you really deserved it cause no one told you to do such nice reviews or take that time out of your day. I couldn’t think of any other way to thank you except saying ‘thank you’ lol and I didn’t feel like that was enough. Besides you earned it so this sequel is for you!
Don’t worry about ‘taking forever’ to write reviews you’re doing just fine and it’s not like I’m thinking ‘review right now!’ haha, so don’t ever worry really ^^. Besides I understand having all this stuff you want to say then ordering it to make sense and so on. But really thank you so much for reviewing all the time and I can’t wait to read what you have to say for the next chapters to come *heart* I don’t want you to think the long reviews are what makes me go. It’s what you say and how you express what you think and felt. Those are the reviews I love! But yes, your reviews were very helpful in giving me a push here and there to continue. I’m very lazy and tend to stop… this is the longest story I’ve ever written. Don’t get me wrong I LOVE writing but I’m the kind of person that needs a kick in the butt every once in awhile haha.

I thought the opening was different. Instead of being at home it opens in the middle of school and it’s instantly a new situation. It’s crazy how you pick up on everything. Now that I think of it, it is more likely Bill would get caught since he’s not as skilled at being devious, lol. Thank you for such compliments!

I wasn’t sure if I wanted Andreas or anyone else brought in but that’d be boring/stupid if they didn’t have any friends XD. Plus they form a new kind of bump in the whole situation. I have a feeling Andreas is going to get in the way but we’ll have to see. Also I don’t think it’s clear the exact feeling Andreas has for Bill. I’m not sure yet if want Andreas to fall in love with Bill or just be very clingy lol. Either way it makes Tom kind of mad ;). I’m glad I’m on the right track with their attitudes and age.

LOL I’m glad you liked those two lines about Andreas and Georg! I thought it was pretty funny and kind of shows how they both find each others friend ‘odd’ and ‘weird’. I’m really glad you enjoyed that ^^.

I like Bill being bashful for my own reason. Bill is developing an attitude where he is discovering his power over people. But I don’t want Bill to totally be like that he has to have a flaw. So I find that that is the PERFECT flaw. Him still being shy. It seems only one person can pull that out of him and that one person is Tom :). Clearly seen in the whole closet scene. It’s like Bill is the leader when at school or around friends but when the twins are home alone Tom takes the lead and Bill instinctively backs down. I LOVE IT XD!

Well Simone knocked but opened the door immediately so I wouldn’t call it too nice. She’s so nosey and I think she’s starting to feel something isn’t right. I’m still not sure how I want her role to go so it will be a surprise even for me! Tom thinking up such a funny excuse was great too. It really felt realistic hah. But to lie so quickly and great comes because of their mother mostly. BINGO another effect parents have on their children. If she wasn’t so questioning and sneaky they wouldn’t feel the need to lie so much 8). But thank you very much for all your lovely compliments ^^!!! So very nice of you!!

Honestly If your review was a story or just a small paragraph it wouldn’t matter. I’d respond and love it all the same*heart* whatever makes you comfortable. If you’d like to write when you’re out that’s good too or if you’d like to wait till you got home I am fine with that too ^^. I want what ever you love to do more.

I am going to state this in my next chapter; I am not doing this for the highest fav’s or the most reviews. I want reviews so I know what my readers think and if they do like it. That’s why your reviews are so helpful. I may be able to see people reading it but I’m totally lost if I have no idea who’s reading it and how it makes them for or what they think. And I asked for favorite’s cause of the tracking system. I keep track of my readers and send them things through favorites. I can’t track my trackers lol. I actually care more for reviews. And if I wanted reviews just to make my story look good I wouldn’t take time out of my life to reply to each and every one of them ^^. I want my readers to know I appreciate their words and I always thank them kindly; in replies and in chapter end notes. I do write for my self. Like I said my story is pre written before it’s put it up. It is a privilege, I believe, that I put it up for others to enjoy. So all ask for is a review nothing too big hah. But I will say if it was just you reviewing I’d continue because you are so deep in your reviews and show you care. If it was just a review “Love it! Pls continue” I would probably stop because you may love it but it’s not really convincing to me you want it to continue. I’d probably continue it eventually for myself but no one else. But like I said I’ll state this clearer in my next chapter end notes *smiles* THANKS FOR YOUR REVIEW!!! I just replied to this in school using Microsoft word lmao.

hahaha...This is good can't wait for more.

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! Come back thursday for chapter 2 ^^!!

That is an awesome start, You still got it hun. Please update soon, I wanna read some more. And you had me laughing when Simone nearly caught them. I loved it.

Author's Response: Thank you very much dubblebubble! It was pretty funny Tom practically throwing his brother in the closet lol. I'll update thursday thank you for reading.