Date: 05/17/09 12:38 am Title: Catalyst
oh fuck, yum. more of this, nau plz.
Author's Response: i am writing as FAST as i can, more SOON and i promise it will be worth the wait!!!!!
Date: 05/16/09 11:03 pm Title: Catalyst
ooh i luvz thiz==]=]=] update soon plz thx soso much=]
Date: 05/16/09 09:09 pm Title: Catalyst
Intense, the whole thing from start to finish. The sexual tension between the two of them is thinck enought to cut with a knife. Mmm, good stuff. I would deffinately like more, please.
REVIEW ANSWER: Mostly, I go to my sister with my problems. She helps me by laying everything out, and seeing things in a different way than I do. It also helps when she keeps the mood light, and makes things seem funnier and sillier than I normally do. I don't always listen to everything she says, but it helps to talk about it.
Author's Response: You will LIEK the next chapter. <3 I promise. Thx for reviewing and answering my stupid question, it means a lot and I love hearing what real people do. :)
Date: 05/16/09 06:56 pm Title: Catalyst
WWWOOOOOOOOOOO!!!! THEY FINALLY KISSED!!
Date: 05/16/09 04:53 pm Title: Catalyst
hehehe :) that's sweet :) they finally got together :) lol, anyway, I so can't tell that you're faking your way through the whole thing. But maybe someone who dances professionally can, I don't do it porfessionally, so it is sort of like, well if you say it is that way... lol :) anyway :)
um...I go to my friends, and they normally either diss 'em to hell and back, or tease me. So they're not really the best at advice. if they don't like the person, they say ditch 'em. :) isn't that great? lol :)
Gosh, walking in on Andi and Emma...awkward!!! But it was sort of funny :) lol :) love it :)
Author's Response: OMG, same with my friends. All my boyfriends have had to pass muster with my BFF, which is intimidating for the poor boys. :) But it's funny to watch them squirm. And writing the Andi and Emma part actually kind of made me go *AWKWARD TURTLE* on myself!!!
Date: 05/16/09 04:33 pm Title: Arrival
Well maybe you should have thought about that before you wrote such an addictive story! ;D
Date: 05/16/09 04:32 pm Title: Arrival
Yeah, my mum can be a little closed minded sometimes but when it comes to things like that she's like 'Just give me a little hint before you do anything with a boy 0^0' And I'm just like...um...okaaay... >.> I haven't exactly had a chance to do anything yet and I'm still contemplating whether I should or not... XD
Date: 05/16/09 12:36 pm Title: Catalyst
I really liked the paragraph where all the excuses were written in for Tom's kiss.
'It was the music. I didn’t mean to, I’m sorry. But he wasn’t sorry, he was hungry for more of Bill. He was sorry that he’d stopped kissing Bill. I didn’t know what I was doing. I wasn’t thinking straight.'
Love the flirting that's going on in here, and I'm excited for the hot sex? 8D
I haven't had boy trouble, but my friends do. Their best friend(s) tell them to take it slow/make the first move/wait for him to make the first move. I noticed that they're usually too impatient to wait, and too shy to make the first move.
So nothing comes from that.
If given the situation, I'd probably let him approach me. Any advice I'm given that takes me away from my comfort zone is a no no.
Author's Response: Tom likes to make excuses to himself, it's funny. :) If he weren't out of the closet he would be making even more, and people would be dropping like flies from the hillariousness. :)take it slow/make the first move/wait for him to make the first move...WHAT DO WE DOOOOOO?!?!? Hurry up and wait?!?!?!?? Lol. I like your way.
Date: 05/16/09 11:41 am Title: Catalyst
Hey! i loved the seduction part, Bill is used to that, is a safe zone! :) i totally understand that. Actually i go to my friends with my boy/girl troubles... and i listen i swear that i do, but normally i end up doing what i want, even if that gives me problems :(
Author's Response: Bill knows what he's doing! :) That's cool, that you're following your own advice. becuase i think the best way to learn is to make your own mistakes, and not someone else's. I totally feel the problems!!!!! :)
Date: 05/16/09 11:15 am Title: Catalyst
oh yes. smoking hot. cant wait for the sex :p
Date: 05/16/09 09:25 am Title: Catalyst
I tend to go to....no one. I have no boy trouble. Ever. And when I do, I handle it on my own. It's that unimportant.
I really like this chapter. I want to know more about Bill's past, but I love this chapter.
Author's Response: "There is no future, there is no past. I live this moment as my last!!!" (sorry, RENT quote) That's what Bill would say to you. :) He would sing it, too, probably. But nevertheless, you WILL learn more about Bill, I promise. :) THanks so much forreviewing!rnoh BTW you're SOOOOOOO lucky you have no boy trouble. It plagues me CONSTANTLY!!!!!
Date: 05/16/09 08:38 am Title: Catalyst
And this chapter was awesome btw, I forgot to say. Plz write faster, I don't think I can wait that long! XD
Author's Response: I am writing as FAST as i can! If I try to type faster, my fingers will fall off. :)
Date: 05/16/09 08:37 am Title: Catalyst
Oh, was the story 'Prove It'? by any chance?
I can't say I really go to anyone about boy trouble...although I like to have a go about certain irritating boys (not boyfriends or anything) to my best friend. She can relate. ;)
I think I actually talk more about crushes and stuff with my mum, and she just listens. When I think about it, it seems kind of awkward i guess but she's a good listener ^^
Author's Response: You're sooooo lucky your mom understands. Mine would be like, "Don't get involved with boys until you're thirty!" And I'm like, what about NOW?!?!?!?
Date: 05/16/09 08:29 am Title: Catalyst
I go to my bestfriend, since she knows me inside-out. I also used to go to another good friend, who is a boy, but then after a while he fell in love with me even though he knew I liked another guy, my friend even kissed me xD So I don't really talk to him about stuff like that anymore, I don't want to hurt his feelings. But yeah, I follow the advices, they usually work out okay but then it turns out the guy is a total dick xD
Aaaan a review about the chapter: I really liked it, I like how Tom had to struggle with finding the right words and then he couldn't say them infront of Bill, I can relate to that xD
I also like what Tom said when he opened the door, it seemed so... I dunno, like something that actually could happen, it's like a little detail a lot of authors don't add in their stories. I really liked this chapter, hopefully I won't have to wait as long as I did for this chapter before the next one is posted D:
Well anywho, this chapter was great, I'm looking forward to seeing from you soon : )
Author's Response: I hate it when that happens!! I once had a friend who i could have SWORN was gay. Like, I would have staked my life on it. But one day he's like, "Jill, I really like you, let's be more than friends." And I was like "WHAAAAAAAT?!?!?!" Anyway, he got pissed at me and won't talk to me anymore. He even blocked me on facebook. Anyway, thanks so much for reviewing! I try to make things as realistic as possible so I'm glad it rings true for you. :)
Date: 05/16/09 06:55 am Title: Catalyst
YAY ^^ I am finally happy Their Kissed *Dance for Joy* Awww :( i am very good at writing Sex scene but i have to many Exam's :(
Date: 05/16/09 05:08 am Title: Catalyst
:) cute tom couldn't resist!
Date: 05/16/09 05:06 am Title: Catalyst
I loved it!!!! This is one of my favorite stories ever. I'm not sure if I want you to update more often so I can read it more than once a month or longer, or less often so it lasts. It's beautiful. The imagery of them as dancers is in itself one of the best story premises ever.
And the question! I don't go to anyone! Because I don't have boy/girl trouble. Because I don't date. I should be dating. I'm attractive enough and social enough. But I don't know... I'm also self-absorbed and uncompromising. Too much so to really throw myself out there. But if I had boy trouble, I would talk to my older sister. I don't know if she would give me advice or just a listening ear. I might consider her words if she advised me, but mostly I follow my own counsel, I would just want to talk to her.
Author's Response: I just *squeeeee*'ed, because no one has told me my imagery is good before!!! :) Thank you! Also, you are lucky you don't date. becuase when it's awesome, it's awesome, and when it sucks, it sucks HARD. (like bill and tom LOL)
Date: 05/16/09 03:45 am Title: Catalyst
aaaaaa i like the sexual tension between them *licks her lips*
can't wait for more
and for your question : i try to not listen to anyone ,i do what i want and follow my heart and my instincts
because only u know what's best for u
Author's Response: Yay! Glad you like. More ASAP. Thanks for your answer and review! <3
Date: 05/16/09 01:27 am Title: Catalyst
when it comes to boy/girl troubles...depending on the troubles depends on the friend I go to. I don't necessairly follow their advice given to me but I do keep it in mind when dealing witht the situation at hand.
*squee* Yay! They've kissed!!!!!!
Author's Response: :) That makes one of us. I'm bad at following advice. Thanks for reviewing!!
Date: 05/16/09 01:20 am Title: Catalyst
I dunno, I know xJellyRollx does questions for her reviews...
I'd go to CHEZA CATASTROPHE! Who I loves~
So, wait, Bill didn't like Nicola telling him he was beautiful? (assuming he did tell him) And yay for hot sex, lol!
Author's Response: THATS IT!!! jelly roll. I couldn't remember, I knew it was food... My Bill character doesn't like being told he's beautiful, cuz he knows... :)