Date: 06/29/09 02:41 pm Title: Reward.
This chapter made me squee incoherently! Well I had to keep it silent because I'm in a library. But I was mentally squeeing incoherently.
So beautiful and wonderful. Can't wait for the prom chapter, your last descriptions of Bill in a dress were so stunningly rich with heartbreakingly gorgeous imagery and visual perfection.
Date: 06/27/09 08:40 pm Title: Reward.
“Your junk’s gonna taste like pie for a week,” :P JUNO!!!! lol
you dont have to worry, you are a very good smut writer :)
Date: 06/27/09 08:58 am Title: Reward.
XD *you'll have to make me* * I can do that*
OMG, if you put Bill in a dress I WILL love you forever and ever and ever, andf even after that.
Okay, that may be a little over the top, but you know.
Date: 06/26/09 07:55 pm Title: Reward.
LOL, totally got the Juno reference! XD LOL, pie.
AND YAY. I was mentioned!!! *hugs jillian*
So, so? When do we get some pointe-shoe-fucking action??? Hmm? Hmm? XD
Author's Response: I think, the next chapter will be the pointe shoe chapter. But it's going to take a while. Unless you help me. :) <3
Date: 06/26/09 06:46 pm Title: Reward.
Stupid or awkward?!?!? come on it was a great smut when you were talking about tom and his back i jad my jaw on the floor and had this stupid face!... anyway the juno reference, isn't it in the part of doy you wanna fuck me again oall it an anomaly? (i don't know :( damn it and i love that movie, i saw it like teen times)
Author's Response: Yay! I'm glad you like my smut. :) I had a jones for Shirtless!Tom and so...there you go. The Juno ref is actually the "it will make your junk taste like pie" line. When Juno goes to the clinic and the girl at the desk offers her boysenberry flavor condoms and says "my boyfriend and i use them every time...they make his junk smell like pie". :)
Date: 06/26/09 04:04 pm Title: Reward.
plzplpzlplzplzplzplz update soon thx=]
Date: 06/26/09 03:33 pm Title: Reward.
FINALLY!!
:P
I loooved this chapter, and you're NOT the worlds worst smut writer :)
Juno reference-“Your junk’s gonna taste like pie for a week” I noticed that when I was reading it, it madeth me laugh.
xxx
Author's Response: Yess! You caught the Juno! Thanks for reviewing. <3
Date: 06/26/09 12:56 pm Title: Reward.
hmm i'm happy!!!this was incredibly hot and sweet...*big grin*
love this...your smut was really god..you don't have to worry!
thank you!and please update as soon as you can!
Date: 06/26/09 12:12 pm Title: Reward.
I. LOVED. IT. MOOOORE!!!
Date: 06/26/09 11:43 am Title: Reward.
Awww! That was steamingly hot and amazing!
Date: 06/26/09 10:05 am Title: Reward.
OMG!!!! I am totally stealing like line, it just jumped out at me when I read it, and now I shall put it down for one of my favorite lines in here :)
andi-bug: if it weren’t for the gutter my mind would be homeless LOL
Mwahahahaha!!! I love it :) I didn't think the notes were all that funny, like pathetic, but not overly funny till...
“Glitter herpes!”
omg, that started cracking me up, and that they both kept laughing about it, I just kept laughing. Laughing was totally contagious!!!! in an awesome amazing way :) so yeah :) I did love this chapter :)
She’s gonna give you glitter herpes, Bill, so keep your pants on in the art rooms…!”
Mwahahaha!!! I'm still laughing about it :) lol so not sure if that is a good thing or a bad :) this was great for such a long wait! *squeezes* and a very fun chapter! hehehe, in the shower scene I was still laughing about glitter herpes. I think I need to be kind of serious to reread it, but oh well!!! :) mind in gutter or it had no place to go!!!! *squeezes* favorite line I think I have ever read :) *skips away*
Author's Response: I laughed all night when I wrote "glitter herpes". it's actually based on a true story! one of my ex-boyfriends turned out to be gay (now i'm kind of his fag hag LOL) and another ex of his wrote him a bunch of hate notes because she thought he was using her for a cover. It was HILLARIOUS. And I'm glad you like it too!!!! Steal it all you want. tell your friends. LOVE LOVE LOVE and I'm writing as fast as possible, so more ASAP. <3
Date: 06/26/09 09:36 am Title: Reward.
“Your junk’s gonna taste like pie for a week,”
Ha ha ha! I love Juno :-)
not as much as I love this story though........:-D
Author's Response: PIE BALLS!!!!! You got it! <3 LOVE LOVE LOVE.
Date: 06/26/09 07:40 am Title: Reward.
Waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhh!! YOU UPDATED!! YOU UPDATED!! *squeals and twirls* WOOT WOOT!! *throws confetti*
I LOVE this chapter! Hahaha!!XD Smut. I find it hard to write too lol..XD But reading a lot of smutty stuffs around THF really helps a lot!!XD
Tom's just sweet here. Heehee..XD He really likes Bill a lot then. LOLOL..XD Sooo cute! Like it when he stammers!!XD
And ANDI!! LOLOL..XD Crazy..XD
Author's Response: So glad you like!!! <3 Thanks for reviewing. More soon!
Date: 06/26/09 07:31 am Title: Reward.
I really enjoyed this chapter. I dunno, just something about it really made me smile the whole time.
Someone really needs to BETCH slap Celeste, and for the good of this website and the little universe you have created, I voulunteer for it. Enthusiastically. I will stand here with my hand raised, waving it around like an idiot, until you tell me I can, so if my hand turns blue from lack of blood and falls off, it's your fault. OK?
Seriously, though, loved the chapter, and I think it was worth the wait. And even your smut wasn't that horrible. It actually wasn't smut, if you think about it. It was a tasteful way of letting the reader know that they went at it without supplying all the sordid details.
Update soon, OK? Please, because this story rocks.
Author's Response: PLEASE SLAP HER. I don't want your hand to fall off and she also really needs to be hit. Tom won't do it because he's a gentleman and Bill won't touch her because she has glitter herpes, so it's up to you to smack some sense into that beezie. :) And I'm glad you liked my "smut" ! <3 I'm writing as fast as I can, so...maybe two or three weeks.
Date: 06/26/09 07:02 am Title: Reward.
Hahaha this was a funny chapter.
The smut's fine, no worries.
I was about to say what an awesome line this was : "If it weren't for the gutter, my mind would be homeless." then I saw the A/N.
I'll definitely quote you.
Date: 06/26/09 05:25 am Title: Reward.
YAAAY! SMUT!! AND IT WAS GOOOOOD!
I will be quoting you because that is a very good comeback and my friends are always telling us to get our minds out of the gutter. w00t!
This chapter was kind of sweet, cause they didn't know what to say to each other and it was cute X3
Date: 06/26/09 03:49 am Title: Reward.
im guessing the anomoly thing is from juno? cant really remember XD
Author's Response: Nope, it's the "your junk will taste like pie for a week" line. remember when she goes to the clinic and the girl at the desk is like, "here's some free condoms, they are boysenberry flavor, my boyfriend and i use them every time, they make his junk smell like pie" I LOL at that. But it's ok that you don't have a nerdy encyclopedic memory for movies like me. :)
Date: 06/26/09 03:29 am Title: Reward.
Oh no, the smut was good! *nods* I enjoyed the whole chapter, and really loved the awkward at the end. It was perfect. I'm still loving this story. :)
Date: 06/26/09 03:18 am Title: Reward.
omg your smut was awesome and totally hot - who doesn't love hot shower smut! =)
Date: 06/26/09 01:39 am Title: Reward.
Oh, yay! I've missed this story so much. I'm so happy to see an update, haha. I happen to think your smut was very good.
:)