Date: 07/02/09 09:38 pm Title: Star Gazing
i like the plot of the story but could you put more of bill and christian the back story so i know how they were together to get the idea or just the scene were he tells bill he is leaving him and i would like to here more from you the writing is great and the characthers are staying ture their persons so yeah and i like to see more dancing from bill and tom and maybe tom catches bill dancing alone and is move by his beauty though dance
Author's Response: dont worry there's gonna plenty more of the bill and christian background storyy. andd i havent forgot that this is a dance story. (; i got something all worked out. thanks for the feedback! :D
Date: 06/26/09 02:17 am Title: Star Gazing
come on i like it already plz hurry ;]
Date: 06/25/09 09:26 pm Title: Star Gazing
omg i love this story!! Keep writing please ^^
Date: 06/24/09 09:57 pm Title: Welcome to Hell!
well my mom doesn't like bill :( she likes tom!!! she say that he's very sexy(tom)..its kinda weird but okay!! and yes, im really startin to LOVE it!!
Date: 06/24/09 02:07 pm Title: Star Gazing
Poor Bill! Stupid guy who was a dick to him. *evil glare*
Date: 06/24/09 01:14 pm Title: Star Gazing
ugh love it but make the chapters a little longer and try to update more often
Date: 06/24/09 05:40 am Title: Star Gazing
Awwww... Poor Tomi is hurt dude. I'M SO HAPPY YOU UPDATED!! WEEEE!
Date: 06/24/09 04:47 am Title: Welcome to Hell!
Have i reviewed this before? i cant remember, but regardless here is another dose of "wow its such a great fic" just in case i have not already said it.
I love your characters and I cant wait for them to meet one another again. I really like their different backgrounds and seeing their motivations as we learn more about them =)
Thanks!
Riv
Date: 06/23/09 11:26 pm Title: Star Gazing
I want more, it was too short!
Date: 06/23/09 11:24 pm Title: Star Gazing
plzplz update soon thx=]=]
Date: 06/23/09 11:20 pm Title: Star Gazing
damn it's been so long lol jk
but its really starting to get good.the part bout bill in love with christian,that was so sad! i love bill....O.o that was random!!! lol
Author's Response: hah thankkks. (: and really? who DOESNT love Bill? hahah and a little random never hurt anyone. (;
Date: 06/19/09 04:49 pm Title: Bad Boys Get Timeouts
ooooh. goodie. WRITE MORE, please?
Date: 06/09/09 02:59 pm Title: Bad Boys Get Timeouts
Pleaseeeeee another chapterr!! I need to knoww what happenns!!!!! :)
Date: 06/08/09 01:16 am Title: Bad Boys Get Timeouts
First of all I'd like to say I'm in love with this story! I think the concept is cool and you have a good writing style. Your characters are really realistic and I don't think I would have ever thought of having Bushido and Tom related. I can't wait for your next update!
Date: 05/27/09 05:22 pm Title: Bad Boys Get Timeouts
great story.....i love it!
Date: 05/23/09 04:48 pm Title: Bad Boys Get Timeouts
LOOOOVEE IT!! lol update plllz
Date: 05/22/09 08:14 pm Title: Bad Boys Get Timeouts
Ooooooo i love this vhapter! Its such an amazing story i cant wait for the next chapter =3
Date: 05/21/09 10:31 pm Title: Bad Boys Get Timeouts
update sooon,..okzokzokzokzokzokzokzpzplzplzplzplzplzplzplzplz thx=]=]
Date: 05/21/09 02:19 pm Title: Bad Boys Get Timeouts
uuuhhh....... jijijiji
Date: 05/21/09 01:31 pm Title: Bad Boys Get Timeouts
I like this fics! give me more
