Date: 03/18/09 10:02 am Title: [Chapter One: "Drive"]
Wauw! This is good! And i definitly like where this is going! ;)
I love the movie and I'm going to love this fic!
Author's Response: Grin. Thankyou, I love Tokyo Drift as well. I sort of flipped out when this idea hit me; my beta-reader and best friend just gave me that "You've got to be kidding me look". I'm glad you like it and I hope others will too!
Date: 03/18/09 05:51 am Title: [Chapter One: "Drive"]
Gosh, how amazingly parallel and they don't even know it yet. I really do like this and haven't read a fic like it before. Please post more soon!
Author's Response: Lol. Thanks! I strive to make things interesting!
Date: 03/18/09 04:28 am Title: [Chapter One: "Drive"]
I confess. I've read the prologue and wasn't exactly thrilled. Admittedly, it was well written but it didn't seem like it would be that different from all those other Bill-and-Tom-get-divided-by-evil-parents stories!
But now, I'm glad that I kept on reading! I absolutely loved this chapter! The parallel was great and gives your story a very interesting perspective! I'm very curious how this will continue and you've got me hooked now!
Author's Response: Thankyou for being honest with me. Lol. I confess--in return--that when I first posted the prologue, I had worries that it wouldn't be that striking. So, that's why I posted chapter one as quickly as I did; it gives the readers a better perspective on what this stories going to be like than the prologue. rnrnI'm grateful for reviewers like you, who are honest and say exactly what they mean. Thank you very much and I hope you'll continue reading!
Date: 03/17/09 10:48 pm Title: [Chapter One: "Drive"]
OHMYGODLOVE. I LOVE THIS. It's just... ARG.
Okay. This, and Afeard Dystopia of Dolls and Distaste, are now my two favorite stories on this site. This is just so... ARG. I cannot even say how totally full of awesome win this is. AWESOME. WIN. Seriously.
Author's Response: I'm so happy you approve! I don't think I've ever had anyone other than my lover tell me my stories are full of win. Thank you, lots. Please stick around and wait for the next chapter. It'll come out in time. It's already written, I just don't know when I'll post it. *grin*
Date: 03/17/09 10:18 pm Title: [Prologue: "Divide"]
Lolz. Whisper dirty to me...*nip nip suck*
Author's Response: Lolz.rn
Date: 03/17/09 10:12 pm Title: [Prologue: "Divide"]
And I saw this first.
No matter who comments on it before my slow ass.
I love you and your adrenaline-junkie version of the twins. And hooray for you giving up on your once-nefarious plans for Samy and Bushido. Lol.
Shhhhhh..... *hugs*
-Das Dale.
Author's Response: *looks around*...>Ssssh, you can't talk about Samy and Bushido yet--because the others don't know about them. *giggle*...But if you come closer...*pulls in closer*...let me whisper in your ear...rnrnrn*sex sexy smex*rnrn*grin*rnrn
Date: 03/17/09 09:27 pm Title: [Chapter One: "Drive"]
my god, this is beast!
Author's Response: Lolz, why thank you! Ahaha.
Date: 03/16/09 07:50 pm Title: [Prologue: "Divide"]
And I saw it first. Because I'm the girlfriend.
Lol. Just dropping by as I said I would. I just woke up from an unfruitful nap, my back still hurts, and my brain is too foggy to retrieve the praise I initially gave you for this story.
But you know how I feel about it, even if the song makes me twitch and whatnot. It's one of those Numa Numa moments that I don't hate, yet try to avoid lest I sing the song all day and my brain breaks more.
I love you; This is fanfuckingtastic. I'm sure you already heard it, if rephrased. Lol.
-Dale.
Author's Response: I'm making it a point to respond to every review, so even if I did see you just a few hours ago--and even if I've already heard, received and blushed from your praise--I'm going to answer here anyway.rnrnI love you, lots.rnrnAnd, as always, this whole venture is dedicated, in part, to you.
Date: 03/16/09 05:34 pm Title: [Prologue: "Divide"]
Wow. Just wow. This is amazingly written, and it looks like it's going to be very different from other stories on this site. If this keeps up, I wouldn't be surprised to see this featured. And I NEVER say that about a story. As for me, I'm gonna favorite it right now. XD
Author's Response: *blush*...Thank you, really! I'm really happy you feel so strongly about my story. *bows head*....I hope I don't let you and my other reviewers down!
Date: 03/16/09 03:25 pm Title: [Prologue: "Divide"]
You sure do know how to make a girl cry...
more soon?
Author's Response: I'm glad I got the image across. Emotional scenes aren't really my forte. I've already written the first real chapter and I hope to upload it soon. Add me to your favorites so you don't miss it! rnrn
Date: 03/16/09 01:15 pm Title: [Prologue: "Divide"]
i really like the slow development of this!
it's very realistic and emotional.
can't wait for the next chapter :)
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you liked it. I'm trying to keep it all realistic without being too vague, but then there's all the emotion and the time changes. Bare with me, please! And thank you for your review.
Date: 03/16/09 12:44 pm Title: [Prologue: "Divide"]
FUCKING GREAT!!! I HAVE TO GO FIX MY MAKE UP NOW!!! I AM CRYING!!!!
great chapter!
Author's Response: I'm glad you felt the emotion. *smile*...I was trying very hard to convey the drama without turning this into the biggest cry-fest of life.