Date: 07/12/10 10:29 pm Title: Chapter 1
your damn good but you could try to write more than one chappie for this one
Date: 04/20/10 11:23 pm Title: Chapter 1
This was super, incredibly hot. I can't even put it into words, it is absolutely wonderful.
Date: 10/19/09 10:51 pm Title: Chapter 1
I have no idea why I haven't seen and read this yet, but I really love it. As disgustingly cheesy as it was at times, it was wonderful. I like it.
Date: 03/18/09 03:04 pm Title: Chapter 1
awww!!
that's sooooo cute!! ^^ it's been a really long time since i've read any good bilstav! =0 but i'm glad u posted some ;)
i don't feel the need to give u any criticism actually.. atleast i didn't notice anything while reading =P (and i'm a person to get anoyed about the little things.. so.. =P)
really well written!! =D
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm really picky and anal about fics too(especially my own) so im glad yu couldnt find anything majorly wrong with it! Thanks for reading and the geil review!rnOh and the part where you said "it's been a really long time since i've read any good bilstav!" Made me all giggly!
Date: 03/17/09 06:10 pm Title: Chapter 1
*Lovely journal entry.
*Seems to me they're both insecure, Bill about his looks, and Gustav about being Gustav apparently.
*sweet, sensitive, caring, an awesome drummer, sexy as hell, and a good listener
I love that description of Gustav :)
*Ummm…. Can I kiss you again?” Awwww!
*That kissing, touching and grinding was HOT and sweet too.
And the ''I love yous'' are just adorable.
Lovely fic!
Author's Response: OMG! Thank you sooo much for your review. It literally made me blush and squeal! Seriously made my day! Thanks for reading!
Date: 03/16/09 06:20 am Title: Chapter 1
*is now mush*
Author's Response: lol. Im glad i could change your body consistancy with this story!!!! that was my goal! Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 03/15/09 10:29 pm Title: Chapter 1
Mmm mmmm. Yummmmy. *licks lips*
Author's Response: haha thank you! I was hoping it was yummy!
Date: 03/15/09 10:25 pm Title: Chapter 1
I. love. Billstav! There should be more fic of his pairing on here! I love it!
Author's Response: Me Too! That's all I've written so far. I'm hoping on fixing the lack of Billstav around here so keep your eyes peeled! Thanks soooo much for the review!
Date: 03/15/09 09:31 pm Title: Chapter 1
for a first attempt it was amazing, tho its just me and since im a bog Bill/Tom fan Gustav saying Billa was a little weird but it fit and it was sweet. I loved it hearts hearts hearts
Author's Response: Thanks i was kinda worried about the smuttiness. And i agree with the "billa" thing. I was wondering if i should change that but then i decided against it. Thanks sooo much for reviewing!
Date: 03/15/09 09:00 pm Title: Chapter 1
AAAAAAAAAAAWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE
God(a.k.a. madatnumbers)
I love you.
Author's Response: AAAAAAAAWWWWWWWWEEEEEEEE!!!! No, I love you! Thanks sooo much for the awesome review! Made my freaking week!