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Reviewer: VampSenn Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/16/09 04:26 pm Title: Chapter 2 - Andreas
Date: 03/16/09 04:26 pm Title: Chapter 2 - Andreas
Wow. Drama! You're a good author ;) This is a good story, but just a tip---you might want to work on putting paragraph breaks in better places. :) Not criticizing, just a lil helpful advice. Hey, do you want a banner?? I have a strange talent for them lols
Author's Response: thanks! And thanks for the tip :) Yes please, that would be great lol!
Reviewer: BillzRawringDino Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/16/09 02:21 pm Title: Chapter 2 - Andreas
Date: 03/16/09 02:21 pm Title: Chapter 2 - Andreas
omg!
Reviewer: BillzRawringDino Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/16/09 02:17 pm Title: Chapter 1
Date: 03/16/09 02:17 pm Title: Chapter 1
I love it! If bill had left me for Tom I'd have kicked Tom's Butt!!! Then Bill's.
Author's Response: hehe! true :P
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