Date: 06/15/09 06:48 am Title: Chapter 10
This is such a unique story and I love reading it. And yay Tom is coming back. :D
Author's Response: of course he is. He's not going anywhere anytime soon.
Date: 06/15/09 06:30 am Title: Chapter 10
Happy Birthday! :)
I still don't see why this story isn't more popular. Maybe the banner or summary doesn't attract a lot of attention? Because it's definitely not your writing, I'm sure a lot of people would love this story if they would just click on it!
Well, I'm glad I found it, I love this little world you created! I can't wait for Bill to go back to earth and see Tom again :D
Thanks for updating, I'm looking forward to the next chapter :3
Author's Response: thank you for the kind words of praise, my dear. I don't really care if people don't read it, truth be told, because I have a few fans (i can't BELIEVE that, really!) who read my stuff because they like my style and even though they don't leave reviews i know they're there. I changed my summary once, but if you have a better idea, please let me know and i'll gladly change it again. I'm not good at summaries. The banner, however, will stay. rnrnI don't want to be in the mainstream just to get more people to read what i write :P
Date: 06/02/09 04:58 pm Title: Chapter 9
Wonderful story! Very well written in a way that is pleasant to read and such an original idea! It is really a mystery why you haven't received many reviews for this yet, it certainly deserves more! My mind got lost in this world you created from the moment I began reading. Stories which really drag me in and make me feel like I'm actually there are my favourite, and this is one of them! It's very descriptive, but not too descriptive (which many stories are and end up boring me) so that I can picture everything perfectly. And the pictures you draw for some chapters are a nice treat :)
I thoroughly enjoyed reading up to this chapter, but now I want more! ;)
Author's Response: Thank you very much for the lovely review. I'm honored you like my story since i love yours XD
Date: 06/02/09 12:36 pm Title: Chapter 9
oh no !! =[
Author's Response: it'll all be better in a few chapters time :P
Date: 05/26/09 12:29 pm Title: Chapter 8
I love the way you write; it's just perfect =].
I can't wait for another chapter ^^
Author's Response: Thank you very much dear :)
Date: 05/19/09 01:48 pm Title: Chapter 3
Cool way of presenting Christianity, and at the same time you told us what time period you're operating in: 70 AD.
Author's Response: thank you. I thought that in its early days it would be considered a fad by those still praying to multiple Gods and they maybe thought it would die out eventually. :)
Date: 05/19/09 09:16 am Title: Chapter 7
I'm even braving the Billshido for you. Now that's a compliment believe it or not, lol. *waits patiently for Tom and Bill* LOL.
Author's Response: lol. thank you very much :) i apreciate the effort :D
Date: 05/15/09 03:45 pm Title: Chapter 1
susan wright. It's a sex-fantasy kind of thing >_>
but it's great as hell xD
Author's Response: lol. I'm glad i remind you of a sex fantasy with my story.rnI'll look for her if we have her here.
Date: 05/15/09 01:06 pm Title: Chapter 6
God damn, lol. This story.. wow lol. It sort of reminds me of a book called To Serve and Submit, one of my very favorites, which is probably why I absolutely love this story so far. Please update soon? I love where you're going with this one.
much love =]
Author's Response: thank you very much :) Never heard of the book. who's the author?
Date: 05/12/09 08:23 pm Title: Chapter 6
Oh Tom, the things you both could have learned. Perfect opportunity just handed over to Bushido? I want to cry, lol. I love this story!
Author's Response: thank you very much. Tom will forever be doomed not to know what's good in this life XD
Date: 05/12/09 09:53 am Title: Chapter 6
It's a really fun story, and well written, but I'm suggesting to rewrite the summary (only if you wish of course) as I think it will attract more attension. I was lost in my own world reading so far and I'm hoping too see more...soon. *jumpes up and down while waiting*
Author's Response: could you suggest a better summary please? i suck at those.
Date: 04/24/09 11:35 am Title: Chapter 1
♥ love it.
Author's Response: thank you :D
Date: 04/22/09 11:02 am Title: Chapter 1
"You never know where it hurts." - I loved that line!
And I love this story. I look forward to more, though the wife is scaring me a little bit. But I adore your quiet Tom. :)
Where are the reviews on this thing? I think it's great so far. Please keep it up.
Author's Response: eh, they'll be comming in their own pace :P. But thanks for yours anyway :). Don't be scared of her. She's just lonely
Date: 04/22/09 06:45 am Title: Chapter 3
Again this is one of those stories which are so underloved. I think the genre puts people off and I admit I was a bit hesitant at first as well but I'm sooo glad I didn't miss this. The plot is interesting and the story itself is very well written. Your writing exercises sure paid off! Can't wait for the next update!
Author's Response: thank you very much :)
Date: 04/15/09 07:11 pm Title: Chapter 2
This is going to be an interesting one! I'm hooked so far and look forward to more. :D
Author's Response: Thank you :)rn
Date: 03/14/09 11:54 am Title: Chapter 1
Oh wow! Totally sucked me in!! Keep the chapters coming! :-)
Author's Response: thanks. i'll do my best :)