Date: 09/29/24 11:47 pm Title: I Love You For Whoever You Would Have Been
I am a Chinese fan who came a bit late. Discovering this website is the happiest thing for me in recent years. I used to use bookmarking as commenting. I must say that I have read and bookmarked this story. Reading this story is undoubtedly a pleasure! Today I plan to leave a comment. Thank you for your story. You are an amazing writer.
Date: 11/26/10 11:14 am Title: I Love You For Whoever You Would Have Been
I hadn't even read your fic and I was already crying, and then I listened to the song and then read this while listening to the song. That was so beautifully written and I loved it except for the fact I can't stop crying.
Date: 06/30/10 10:01 pm Title: I Love You For Whoever You Would Have Been
i love the last line of your story
Date: 06/30/10 01:22 pm Title: I Love You For Whoever You Would Have Been
*sob* so pretty
Date: 04/26/09 12:44 am Title: I Love You For Whoever You Would Have Been
For something so short, I never expected it to have such an impact. Beautifully written, and good job on the message. I am pro-choice, but it does put things a little more into perspective. You took a VERY controversial issue and put it out there in the best way possible; still leaving it up for theperson to decide for themselves. Thank you.
Author's Response: I'm gald you recieved it the way it was intended. Sometimes the point can get lost when you're writing about a controversial issue. And thank YOU for reading and reviewing!
Date: 03/16/09 03:53 pm Title: I Love You For Whoever You Would Have Been
Awwww, heartbreaking. :( Surely it goes straight to my favs. Touching, really, and it must be a lot for me to have a lump in my throat. :'(
Author's Response: Oh wow, thank you so much!
Date: 03/14/09 01:34 pm Title: I Love You For Whoever You Would Have Been
Very, very beautiful!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Date: 03/14/09 12:21 am Title: I Love You For Whoever You Would Have Been
*Tries really hard not to cry* That was so moving, I don't even know what else I can say.
Author's Response: Thanks so much! =)
Date: 03/13/09 08:21 pm Title: I Love You For Whoever You Would Have Been
i dont normally read mpreg but that was cute!!
loved it
well done
:)
fern xx
Author's Response: Thanks! =)
Date: 03/13/09 03:00 pm Title: I Love You For Whoever You Would Have Been
.. Um .. Um .. Wow .. I'm at a lose for words. I started to tear up reading this. It brought back a lot of memories for me personally. I am a single mom and 2 yrs ago I was contemplating that same decision. But I didn't have it in me to go through with it. I am indifferent to abortion honestly. I am not for nor am I against. But any who:
I really loved this. I was completely absorbed by it. Its a beautiful story =D
-Rachael-
Author's Response: That's exactly how I am. I lost a baby to an MC 2 years ago so I know I could never have an abortion. But I'm not against it, nor do I advocate it. And thanks so much for reviewing!
Date: 03/13/09 01:26 pm Title: I Love You For Whoever You Would Have Been
You're right, the content of the story is controversial has always been and probably will always be. I've done many projects for school about pro-life and pro-choice so I understand the subject. But, I loved this story. It was heartbreaking and beautiful. And the descion Bill had to make was awful but he was right with his arguements, the baby could be born with a genetic defect considering the boys are brothers. But this story was writting beautifully and I think you handled the subject with great care. I felt a little like crying. Great job!
Author's Response: Thank you so much!
Date: 03/13/09 12:54 pm Title: I Love You For Whoever You Would Have Been
This is so sad! :( :( :( you had alot of guts to write about such a contreversial issue Ive never read your fictions before as its you 1st one you should totally write more! :) xxx
Author's Response: Thank you! I have a few other things that I'm working on that hopefully I will have ready to publish soon. =)
Date: 03/13/09 12:21 pm Title: I Love You For Whoever You Would Have Been
You totally made me tear up. And I guess it doesn't help that it's raining, cloudy, and gloomy outside :(
I love the way this was written. So realistic and heartbreaking. Sad, but great nontheless.
Author's Response: Thank you!
Date: 03/13/09 08:47 am Title: I Love You For Whoever You Would Have Been
This broke my heart into a million pieces. This was so poignant and realistic. I'm really glad you decided to post this story...it's something that needs to be read.
Author's Response: Thank you! I thought so too. =)
Date: 03/13/09 08:21 am Title: I Love You For Whoever You Would Have Been
oh my god! I'm crying... srsl. THis was so well written, so fantastic that it made me cry! I will never give abortion, no matter what, and i hate people who have the abortions, but reading this, made me think that some of them do regret that they did it.
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad I could allow you to see things from a different perspective.
Date: 03/13/09 06:53 am Title: I Love You For Whoever You Would Have Been
*Blinks back tears* Oh, god, that was just really heartbreaking. Beautifully written, I loved it.
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Date: 03/13/09 05:27 am Title: I Love You For Whoever You Would Have Been
It's always a challenge to write about controversial subjects, and people don't always do it well. But I think you've done a great job here.
It's very realistic and Bill's emotions are heartbreaking and so believable.
All in all, an excellent job - though very sad :(
One tiny point ( don't hate me lol ). When Bill arrived at the clinic I don't think the woman who spoke to him would have automatically assumed he ws pregnant. As guys don't generally get pregnant, lol. I guess she would have assumed that it was his girlfriend having it done or something.
But that was just a small observation. I really like this and I think you wrote it perfectly.
Author's Response: Hmm...I didn't even think of that. Absolutely no offense taken, I appreciate your feedback. =)
Date: 03/13/09 04:10 am Title: I Love You For Whoever You Would Have Been
Aw!!!! This was so sad! Poor baby! However I loved this. The emotional feeling. Excellent job!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Date: 03/13/09 02:37 am Title: I Love You For Whoever You Would Have Been
This was very powerful. You wrote Bill's charachter so realistically. And despite being sad and making my heart ache, I'm happy Tom was and is there to give him hope. Good work :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much. That is such a big compliment. =)
Date: 03/13/09 02:35 am Title: I Love You For Whoever You Would Have Been
Wow. Personally I'm against it but this story was beautifully written.
It definitely should have come with a tear jerker warning because I'm definitely in tears now.
pffft hormones -_-
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad that, even though you don't agree, you were able to read and see one of the other sides of the "controversy".