Date: 04/06/09 09:50 pm Title: So Beautiful In Her Dismay
Yeah, Bill better keep his promise. You know the idea of Aya having parents that were only children was what I wrote in one of my chapters for Nat.
Great, minds think a like.
Author's Response: Yeah I guess they do huh?
Date: 04/06/09 04:44 pm Title: The Possablities Are Never Considered
Wow, this story is realy good! I do have to say that I like the fact that your plot is original. I have read a lot of Tokio Hotel storys on here, and a lot of them seem realy simmilar, but i havent read i story yet like yours. Keep on writing!
Author's Response: Really?! I never noticed. Thanks! Next chapter is coming soon! I am writing it as I type this in fact! :P Thanks for the review!!!
Date: 04/06/09 01:35 pm Title: The Possablities Are Never Considered
Oh no, I never expected that to happen.
But, no worries Billa is coming to the rescue.
Du du de dun
Author's Response: Yep Billa is coming to Aya's aid! Yeah it was sad, huh? Right after everything looked like it was gonna be just peachy! Thanks for the review Risu!
Date: 04/06/09 11:12 am Title: The Possablities Are Never Considered
Pretty violent, never expected it to get this bad! Need to read more!
Author's Response: haha this is why most of my friends say that I have a screwed up mind. Haha will update soon!
Date: 03/30/09 04:56 pm Title: Happy Birthday
This chapter is sweet.
I can't wait to read what's to come.
Author's Response: Thanks Risu!
Date: 03/16/09 08:05 am Title: In My Arms You Lie.
Yay Aya's alive.
I can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response: haha, thanks Risu!
Date: 03/16/09 06:46 am Title: In My Arms You Lie.
happy she didn't die! what point would have had the story then? now what's gonna happen?
Author's Response: Well just so you know, There was a point when I was gonna kill her off. Read the rest of the story to find out what happens next! :P Thanks for the review
Date: 03/16/09 02:43 am Title: In My Arms You Lie.
no you wouldnt take the main character away. great chapter update please
Author's Response: thats what you think! Thanks for the review!
Date: 03/15/09 12:02 am Title: Je Dois Partir
omg update please
Author's Response: I am going to try and update soon!
Date: 03/14/09 11:18 pm Title: Je Dois Partir
Awwww *sniffle* I would do the same thing she did. *hugs you* please don't have a heart attack! This is really good so far! Hope you update soon :D
Author's Response: I don't think anyone I know WOULDN'T do what she did. Fine then I won't have a heart-attack then. THANK YOUS!
Date: 03/14/09 12:21 pm Title: Je Dois Partir
Wow! I hope she turns out ok. I'm glad she was able to save Bill, but I want for her to be ok too. Waiting for another chapter. Update soon.
Author's Response: I hope she turns out okay too...>:D
Date: 03/14/09 10:38 am Title: Je Dois Partir
Wow! Thats nice.
Really Nice!
You need to continue - I love it.
Update Soon - I cant wait.
Author's Response: People getting shot is nice?! wow my friend you have a sick sense of humor..(and I wrote this so what does that make me?!?!) thanks for the review I will try and update soon!
Date: 03/14/09 09:12 am Title: Je Dois Partir
I love this story.
Update quickly.
Pretty please.
Author's Response: awww thanks Risu! I love your story too! I am going to try an update quickly!
Date: 03/14/09 07:30 am Title: Je Dois Partir
Oh nooooes!!!!! More, please
Author's Response: lol, I will try and update soon! Maybe even tonight!
Date: 03/13/09 01:37 pm Title: Plans
Wow nice start. keep it up. You might want to develop the plot a little more, but you can wait until your next story to work on that kind of stuff. It seems like you want this one to move quickly. Dragging it out may take too long. Your lead character is strong so show her cunningness a little more. She is the brave one. Nice job and update soon:)
Author's Response: Awwww Thanks! Sorry I didn't responde sooner, but I was away!