Date: 06/30/09 11:59 am Title: Right from the Very Start
AWWW YAY! BiLL L0VES HER
Date: 06/30/09 11:58 am Title: Right from the Very Start
Well, as for this chapter.
It was good, but I think Aya became a Mary-Sue a bit.
Just a little bit.
You can change it quickly though.
What I learned from writing my stories is to not bring up so much pain.
Other than that this chappie was amazing.
Date: 06/26/09 03:00 am Title: Dress Impressive
FINALLY!!!!
After a two months wait. I really like this chapter.
However, I have critism for you, my dear.
Make your chapters more detailed.
Ok, well my story only has two chapters left. And they probably won't be up fow awhile because my beta reader is really busy with her exams.
Author's Response: well the next chapter is going to be way more detailed, and probably a lot longer! Plus, if I write chpt. 12 right there is gonna be some drama too!
Date: 06/26/09 12:45 am Title: Dress Impressive
Awww that was cute:)
Author's Response: really? I thought it kinda sucked! lol. Danke for the review, it makeds me feel better!rn
Date: 04/23/09 05:59 pm Title: Because I am here, For You.
i really like this story plz keep writing!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: I am two months late in replying to this, But I am replying none the less! (I'm an idiot. :p)rnrnI don't think I can stop writing this story!!!!! Danke for the review.
Date: 04/23/09 04:10 pm Title: So Beautiful In Her Dismay
I LIKE THIS STORY ITZ ADDICTIVE GOOD JOB =]]]]]
Author's Response: wow, I never thought this was good enough to be addictive, but apparently I was wrong. Thanks a lot!
Date: 04/23/09 12:06 am Title: Because I am here, For You.
:O
Mama L's a bitch!
Author's Response: It gets better don't worry! Thanks for the review.
Date: 04/19/09 11:35 pm Title: Plans
I'm very satisfied, lol.
Thank you :)
Date: 04/19/09 10:31 pm Title: We Bend Before We Break.
can you PLEASE just like write me in the story so that i can slap georgs mom??
lol.
Author's Response: Okay lemme think of another scenario: "Through all the yelling, one of the other tenets in the apartment building decided to see what the problem was, and walked straight into Georg's apartment. "Is this another one of your whores, Georg?" and the girl who had come to check got upset and pimp-slapped the woman who had made the comment in the first place right in the face. She also recognized the voice and decided that she was the cause of all the yelling and slapped her a few more times before walking out." How was that?
Date: 04/19/09 10:20 pm Title: We Bend Before We Break.
ohh the poor thing!
Author's Response: yeah poor Ayamair. But everything is gonna get better...hopefully.
Date: 04/19/09 10:16 pm Title: We Bend Before We Break.
Oh My God, I didn't want it to end there. Update more please.
AND GEORG'S MOM IS A BITCH. I wanted to slap her so bad.
Aya is not a whore. Damn, Georg's mom should die in a ditch.
Well, Aya is going to Bill's house. That's much better than Georg's son of a bitch parents.
Update soon though. Please I want to read more so bad.
Author's Response: yeah I made Georg's mom an uptight bitch. and Aya's gonna have someone one on one time with Bill if I write the next chapter right. Thanks for the review Risu!
Date: 04/19/09 10:07 pm Title: We Bend Before We Break.
wow can someone slap the bitch of a grandma for me. better yetjust have some random chick named Talyn come up outta no where and slap the grandma and walk off. please. it would make me feel better
Author's Response: umm...how's this? : Georg ran off to go find Aya, and left his parents standing there in shock about the way their son had acted towards them. All of a sudden, the apartment door bursted open and in walked a very pissed off girl names Tayln who bitch-slapped Aya's new grandmother then walked out. The End.
Date: 04/19/09 09:54 pm Title: We Bend Before We Break.
can i smack georgs mom?
like.
now?
lmao.
ahh so meann >.
Author's Response: No you are not allowed to kill Aya's new family....even though it is a good idea...ooo... Thanks for the review!
Date: 04/18/09 10:59 am Title: Disenchanted
Wow, Georg now has a daughter. Lol, what would his mother think.
Author's Response: haha yeah what would she think....Thanks for the review Risu!
Date: 04/18/09 04:22 am Title: Disenchanted
yay freakin yay i fucking love ur story. i knew people couldnt adopt sisters and brothers but its ur story and if other people can have people that fly and vampires then why couldnt u have adopts sisters. also lol fun to know Georg has a daughter. lol his moms going to freak
Author's Response: I am glade you liked the story so much. Thanks for the review.
Date: 04/16/09 05:13 am Title: And Now You Wish You Meant Something to Somebody Else
YAY!!! YOU UPDATED XD Loved it hun, keep it up! XD
Author's Response: Thanks for the review, I am glade you liked it.
Date: 04/15/09 12:08 am Title: And Now You Wish You Meant Something to Somebody Else
aww!!
Georg adopted her!!!
thats so cute!
Author's Response: haha thanks!
Date: 04/14/09 07:43 pm Title: And Now You Wish You Meant Something to Somebody Else
Yay Aya has Tokio Hotel as a family. I wish I had them as a family. That'd be so awesome.
I really liked this chapter, but it ended too soon.
UPDATE SOON!!!!
Author's Response: I couldn't really think of anything else to type at that moment, it just seemed right to end it there. Thanks for the review!!
Date: 04/07/09 11:03 am Title: So Beautiful In Her Dismay
aw that horrid. i love this story please update soon.
Author's Response: awww thanks you.
Date: 04/07/09 12:56 am Title: So Beautiful In Her Dismay
The poor thing! And you weren' kidding with the fast update! Thanks hun! ^^
Author's Response: yeah, poor Aya....hehe thanks for the review!