Date: 01/21/10 01:19 pm Title: Chapter 6: Inevitable
cool but wied thats a good combination in my book
Date: 07/07/09 01:33 am Title: Chapter 6: Inevitable
i love this story its really hot
Date: 06/26/09 10:47 am Title: Chapter 6: Inevitable
I still love this story with all my heart
Author's Response: Just seeing this review made me want to post the next chapter already. I love all your stuff too!
Date: 06/21/09 10:34 am Title: Chapter 6: Inevitable
Holy Jesus fucking Christ!! Now if this doesn't put you in need of a new pair of panties I don't kno what else will. Daaayyum that was fucking hawt hawt HAWT!!!!!!!!
Date: 06/21/09 02:03 am Title: Chapter 6: Inevitable
A plan huh? I’m intrigued!
“Because…” Bill faltered, daring to look up at Bushido, “there’s another way to solve the problem.” – you haven’t said anything yet but I’m hoping and guessing for a threesome or maybe Bu watching the twins *grins*
“I bet you two are sensitive in the same places,” Bushido muttered, nipping at the skin underneath Tom's ear, and sure enough, Tom reacted in the way he had expected and gave him more room to work. - *grins*
Bushido slipped down Tom's body, licking and kissing every inch of skin he passed, choosing to lock eyes with Bill since Tom's were clenched shut. He grinned at the younger twin before languidly licking a stripe up Tom's cock, eliciting a hiss and a moan from him. His eyes were on Bill the entire time he sucked Tom, noticing how Bill whimpered whenever Tom held back a moan and whenever Tom moaned or thrashed, Bill's eyes would briefly flutter closed. It left Bushido wondering how the two would react to things if they were together. – *fans self* oh god so hot!
You can pull it out, Bill,” Bushido chuckled, slicking up his fingers. “I bet this’ll be over soon.” – lol
No one’s gonna find out about what happened back there, so don’t worry. And as an added bonus, that was also kinda your initiation for Bill's immunity; no one can fuck with you now unless you want to fuck with them, that is, if you guys are ever joining us again. – what? Why would bu give up bill and tom like that? *groans*
Date: 06/21/09 01:48 am Title: Chapter 5: Envy
Bill moaned into Tom's mouth, straddling his twin and sliding his hands up Tom's shirt. He was so needy, clinging to Tom and grinding their hips together, Tom just went with it. – I love this image!
“Not entirely…” he admitted, smiling when Bill's lips met his own again. Even though Tom's brain was screaming for him to stop, for him to pull away and kick Bill out of his room, but every other part of him was loving it and begging for more. – lol he’s a sucker for Bill just like everyone else!
“I want you,” Bill panted when Tom pulled away to lavish attention upon his neck. “So bad, Tomi. I need you in me.” – uuuuhhhh so hot!
“Please, Tomi,” Bill begged – uuuhhh I love please!
“Satisfied?” Tom asked, letting a second finger slip inside of his brother.
“Mmm,” Bill purred, shaking his head, his smile growing, “not entirely.” Tom grinned, slapping Bill's thigh lightly in response before he crooked his fingers inside his brother, searching for that special spot he knew would drive Bill mad. Bill's muscles clenched around Tom's fingers and his back arched off the bed once his prostate was found; he opened his eyes, his pupils dilated slightly with lust as he licked his lips and gave his brother an intense look. – very hot!!!!!
“Shit, Bill,” Tom hissed as he pulled out of his brother, rolling onto his side. “I can’t ever have a normal day anymore, can I?” Bill smiled by his side, curling up against him.
“You know I get what I want, Tomi,” he replied, wrapping his legs around one of Tom's. - *chuckles* nice!
Tom had a plan in his mind, a plan that could never fail. He was going to get back at Bill in the only way he knew how: making him jealous. Bill was used to being Tom's center of attention, no matter what was going on. Tom had it all in his head, how he would bring a very special guest with him to The Club that night, how he would put on a nice show for his dear, baby brother. - *giggles* who’s left? *grins*
“Don’t be silly,” Dexter said, unbuckling his seatbelt and leaning over the console, licking his lips when he came face to face with Tom. “You know I like it rough.” – he’s kind of gay isn’t he? Lol
Tom smirked when he saw what a wanton slut Bill had turned to in his rage, and when Dexter beckoned him, he hit the boy hard in the jaw. Dexter reeled back, bringing his hand to his face and letting out a pained, yet pleasured moan. He waved Tom over again, moaning when Tom did like he asked and got rough with him. He was thrown to the floor, his skin scraping against the concrete; Tom's feet connected with his back and sides and Dexter accepted it all. When Tom had finally yanked him up to stand, Dexter trembled with want. - *shakes head* submissive!
“Baby,” Bushido groaned behind him, grabbing his hips and pulling him back against his crotch. “I’m so hard right now—“
“I don’t care!” Bill spat, whipping around and slapping Bushido hard against the face, whimpering when the man gripped his wrist.
“Watch yourself,” Bushido warned. “Just because that brother of yours is hot shit now doesn’t mean you can be a bitch.” Bill whispered out an apology, looking at the floor in shame. - *grins* that’s right Bu take charge!
“What the fuck is wrong with you?” Bushido hissed, giving up on trying to get Bill off. …
“I think…” he said slowly, bowing his head when Bushido tried to meet his eyes, “I want someone…new.” He closed his eyes, seeing Bushido puff up in anger.
“Is that so?” he said loudly, walking away from Bill's naked self and turning his attention to the crowd. “The lady says he wants someone new. Any volunteers?” - *gasp and giggle* lol you’re so screwed Bill!
“It seems that your brother wants you instead of me now. You’re dead meat, Kaulitz,” Bushido said simply, sneering at Tom while he stood there, confused. “Well everyone, we’re going to have an extra-special night tomorrow. Me versus the sweet old Tom Kaulitz, the brother of the lady.- *giggles* uh-oh!
“Tom did something stupid last night, as always,” Bill muttered, pushing his plate away and leaning back in his chair. “You’re going to get yourself killed, dumbass.” Tom glared at his brother, dropping his fork down onto his plate with a loud clatter.
“I didn’t agree to it, you slut. You want me dead.” Bill scoffed, flipping his plate over in Tom's general direction.
“I’m a slut? You’re one to talk. What was that whole Dexter thing last night, huh?” – lol at the breakfast table? In front of their parents?
“Oh, Bill never told you about what he does at night with Bushido?” Tom asked, smiling at the way Bill slowly shook his head.
“We don’t care about their private life, Tom,” Gordon said, his grip on Tom slackening when Tom quit fighting.
“It’s not all that private, you know,” Tom said, his smile increasing when Bill's nostrils flared. “They do it in front of everyone. Did you know that? Bill dresses in fucking drag and sucks his boyfriend’s cock in front of the whole town.” - *gasps and giggles* OMG your such a fucking ass hole lol!!!
“We can just tell him we’re still grounded,” Tom said, kicking at the sheets to bunch them up and pulling them over Bill and himself.
“He’ll have a cow. The Club’s been closed for a week since I haven’t been there,” Bill chuckled, snuggling up against his brother. “But I don’t care if you don’t.” – lol and then they ended up in bed together? lol
Date: 06/21/09 01:26 am Title: Chapter 4: Hard Candy
Tom lay in bed, listening to the slow sound and making no move to answer it. He didn’t want to see Bill at all; he felt like a guilty child, and he was just waiting for his punishment. – I hate that feeling!
Tom felt dirty; he was disgusted with himself. He had gone and done the unthinkable with his little brother, the boy he had kept away from guys like himself. Tom knew he loved his brother, but not so much that he had to go and sleep with him. It was more or less lust that had brought Tom and Bill together, and now it was driving them apart… - awh poor Tomi, just suck it up and keep fucking your brother!
“You stupid fuck,” Bill spat, rising from the bed and glaring at his brother. – lol I guess I was wrong!
Do you know how bad I wanted to tell Georg that he couldn’t fight with you? He could’ve easily turned you into ground beef. The Club is no place for you to be, Tom. – lol look who’s talking pretty boy?!
“Okay, Tom, I see how you are. You feel left out, is all, right?” he turned to face Tom, his eyebrow raised questioningly. “Fine, I’ll hang out with you tomorrow as long as you promise to never come back to The Club.” – ha ha dork!
“Bill, I wouldn’t stop coming if you paid me for it. - *grins* so funny
“Lady’s choice,” Bill announced stonily before walking around the edge of the ring and looking into the crowd. When he passed by Tom, he grabbed his arm, pulling him out into the ring and frowning at him. “What did I tell you last night?” he whispered harshly, pushing Tom into the middle of the ring. “Who wants a piece of this fine ass?” - *cracks up* ha ha ha you’re throwing your brother to the wolves!
“Get rough with him for me, Gustav,” Bill purred, helping the man out of his jeans, “I want to see some blood tonight.” – oh harsh! Trying to teach your brother a lesson? I don’t think it will work!
It seemed like everyone that worked in The Club also participated in it because as soon as he stepped into the medic’s office, the man got rough with him. Before Tom could even shut the door behind himself, the medic threw him against the wall and gave him a bruising kiss.
“I saw you out there last night,” he said, holding Tom against the wall. “You don’t know how bad I wished it was me sucking your dick.” – OMG so hot!
“Why’re you ignoring me?” Bill asked. “What did I do?”
“I’m not ignoring you, I’m just trying to think,” Tom explained lamely – awh! Poor Bill!
“Did I mess you up that bad? We won’t do it again if you’re going to be emotionally scarred or whatever…” Bill said quietly, standing in the middle of Tom's room while his brother sat on the bed.
“You didn’t mess me up, Bill,” Tom snorted, “it’s just that we can’t do this. Not only will Bushido make mince meat out of me, but he’ll never let me live it down, you know that. Before you know it, Mom and Dad will know and they’ll send us to some asylum and we’ll never be able to see each other again.”
“So you’re ashamed of me, of what we did? I don’t care about what Bushido, Mom, or Dad think, Tom,” Bill said, sitting next to Tom on his bed, “you know I love you.”
Tom sighed and nodded, making no move to push his brother away when their lips met. If they kept on like this, trouble would surely follow. – this entire bit is spectacular! *bites lip* it’s awesome!
Date: 06/21/09 01:07 am Title: Chapter 3: Exposed
"Bill." This was Bill's fault, too, now that Tom thought about it. If he hadn't been acting like such a little minx, Tom wouldn't have been so eager to get him into bed. – ha ha Bill is a MINX!
Tom was doing just fine in existing there until he had made a big mistake and “teased” one of the regulars too much. It was Georg that he messed around with until Bushido recited the rules and Bill came out. For days, Georg had been begging Tom to be his partner, to let him inside. – he talked to people too much, made himself stand out too much, that’s his mistake!
Tom had expected for Bill to scream, slap him, yell at him, to do anything but laugh like he did and take a step back. "Well, well, well," Bill smirked, crossing his arms over his chest as his eyes roamed over his twin. "Look who's here."- *giggles* that’s awesome!
“Georg, I really don’t want to do this,” he said, backing away from the man when he moved to unzip his jacket. “You’ll maul me if we fight, Georg. I thought we were pals.”
“Oh, we are,” Georg said, grabbing one of Tom’s shoulders and pulling him close as he unzipped the jacket and then undid his fly, “and I told you not to worry; I’ll be gentle.” - *giggles* Tom you’re going to take it up the ass *grins and giggles*
Tom swallowed hard, his breath hitching when he saw that Bill was in the same position as himself; his brother stood against a wall, his hands attached to Bushido’s head as he sucked his cock with abandon. Tom felt a rush of arousal travel through him as he watched his brother pant and moan, alternating between guiding Bushido with his hands to pulling his own hair. The sight made Tom shudder, his own hands shooting down to pull Georg’s hair as he came down the man’s throat. Across the room, he saw the same happening to his twin, and in that moment, he knew he was addicted to The Club… - mmmmmhhh me too! So hot!
Date: 06/21/09 12:52 am Title: Chapter 2: Memoirs
This was all Bushido's fault, Bushido's fault for making him jealous, for making him curious, for making him sleep with his twin. – lol don’t blame Bu, you’re the one who stuck his dick in his brother!
Lol I love number nine, no fucking Bill!
He even whistled when his brother came out, catcalling him as he twirled around in his lingerie and teased the crowd. He cooed at them, asking who wanted to go first, who wanted to strip him, who wanted to get inside him. The men were howling like animals by the time Bill had finally chosen a man to start the night off. – hot!!!!
“Hmm? The one in the jacket?” Bill asked, resting his chin on Georg’s shoulder as he peered out into the crowd.
“Yeah, that one, with the blond hair,” he chuckled, letting Bill slip off his shoulder and summon his victim. Tom was fucked, he knew it; he was going to be beat up and then fucked by a stranger and Bill was going to know it was him. – ha ha!!!!! *giggles*
He heard Bill's footsteps nearing him, his brother’s sweet hum as he got closer and closer…
“Aw, sweetheart, don’t be scared,” Bill cooed. Tom opened an eye, expecting to see his brother standing in front of him with a smirk on his face, but instead, he was standing in front of another individual. – so close!
Gustav could feel his lip swelling and blood from his nose rolling across his face. He swallowed hard, thinking he was going to receive more of a punishment before Georg slid down his body and began stroking his cock. Tom and the rest of the crowd cheered, clapping because they finally got to see some real action. – hoooooooooottttt! Mmmhhh!!!!
Date: 06/21/09 12:38 am Title: Chapter 1: Remembrance
“Fuck, I still feel it,” Bill moaned, turning onto his side and throwing his arm over Tom's chest. “Who knew having sex with you would be so good?” Tom swallowed hard, feeling one of Bill's smooth legs slide against his own as his swollen lips attached themselves to his neck. “God, if I had known you were that good, I would’ve left Bushido long ago.” – mmmmhhh that’s so hot!
He went inside with him, surprised to find that the building turned out to be much more. In the basement of the building was a room full of shirtless men, and as soon as Tom entered it, his nostrils were filled with the smell of sweat and sex. – lol awesome!!!
They fought each other for a few more moments until their mouths met and Tom's jaw dropped at the sight. The punching and kicking ceased, their hands holding each other as the man on top slid between the other man’s legs. It was like a car crash; Tom couldn’t look away, especially not after the crowd began throwing condoms out into the ring. When the man that was on top finally grabbed one and put it on before roughly slamming into the man beneath him and drawing out a ragged moan. – OMG ssssssssssssoooooooooooooo funny sexy sexy fight club the man on top gets to be the top? Lol
Once again, Tom found himself unable to turn away, not even when Bushido hefted Bill up and wrapped the teen’s legs around his waist, or even when Bushido's fingers entered him, but once Bill was bent over, Tom left. From then on, Tom had followed them every day, until he himself was forced into the ring. - *bites lip* who fuck him…or who did he fuck? O_O
Date: 06/20/09 03:57 pm Title: Chapter 1: Remembrance
I CAN'T WAIT. WHY WAS I NAPPING WHEN SUCH HOTNESS WAS POSTED?!
Oh yeah, work was brutal like usual. hehe
Date: 06/20/09 03:53 pm Title: Chapter 6: Inevitable
HOLY SHIT.
O____________________________________________________________________O
That scene ALONE tempts me to read Tom/Bushido. The hate sex would be amazing...
And shit, this was so worth waiting for. Bill deserves a good long fuck from Tom for that one, with a gratuitous rimming on the side.
*reads again*
Author's Response: XD I was excited for you to read it. Next chapter will be epic, I promise.
Date: 06/20/09 03:48 pm Title: Chapter 6: Inevitable
update sooon plz thx=]
Author's Response: I'll try
Date: 06/20/09 03:42 pm Title: Chapter 6: Inevitable
wooooowww lol
That.. was seriously .. serious, haha.
*fans self* you are forgiven.
Much love ^^
Author's Response: thank youuu ;D
Date: 06/13/09 03:14 am Title: Chapter 5: Envy
Love.. thats all i can say at the moment. Absolute loooove.
Date: 04/01/09 01:51 pm Title: Chapter 5: Envy
IT'S AWESOME!!!!!!I love it. PLEASE write more:)
Author's Response: working on it ;D
Date: 04/01/09 02:28 am Title: Chapter 5: Envy
awesome. still waiting for toms deflowering. but its reallly good. i want more.
Author's Response: it's coming
Date: 03/31/09 10:41 pm Title: Chapter 5: Envy
Wow... well, knowing the twins, I knind of expected it. And I was a good girl! I read your baby just like I said I would!! Aren't you proud of me? =)
Author's Response: I am ;D
Date: 03/31/09 07:09 am Title: Chapter 5: Envy
Ow ow ow owwwww!! *whistles* fuckin' hell I love this fic.
Erm ... I might like it a little too much. Excuse me everyone. *rushes to the bathroom*
HAWT!!
Author's Response: XDD thanks
Date: 03/30/09 10:42 pm Title: Chapter 1: Remembrance
Shit, I gotta subscribe to that, stat!