Date: 05/16/09 10:30 pm Title: Chapter 10
omg..make it better....plz..make them happy and in luv=[//update sooon plz thx=]=]
Date: 05/16/09 08:53 pm Title: Chapter 10
“It matters to me because Gordon is my father and you ..
Gordon is Bill's father ?
I guess I have it all wrong, right ?
Author's Response: LOL... I'm sorry to confuse you with that part. I knew someone would react to that ahaha..XD Bill said it that way because Gordon is his father-figure. He is one of those people who took care of him, of Gustav and Lillian back when they were growing up.^^ They're very close so most likely Bill looks up to him as a father..^^ Thanks for the review my dear!^^*huggZz*
Date: 05/16/09 05:14 pm Title: Chapter 10
OMG, SHUT UP TOM! *headdesk*
Date: 05/16/09 04:43 pm Title: Chapter 10
Oh :'( that is so sad... he's leaving, and Billa is crying, and Tom was being mean, and I don't even want to think of what poor Gillian's reaction will be :'( Lol, I loved how you got some sort of timeline back in place though, by saying how it is fall :) nice :) hehehe :) I loved this, even though it was so sad, it was just the thing I needed :) amazing job, I saw two typos,
“He often talks about about you, did you know that?”
I think its just one about, and then
He so want to tackle the dread head and beat some sense into him,
I think is wanted not want, but I could be wrong :) it wasn't anything that made me go, "what the hell is this person talking about?" they were just sort of there :) I loved it though :) and I think you got a new banner, and I'm in love with it :)
Oh gosh, I just want to be there when Gillian finds out to hug her. Is Bill going to lie to her and say like, "Tom just needs to go on a buisness trip? Or visting family." Or something like that? Gosh, anyway it happens, I'm going to feel for the girl. hehehehe, don't want to bitch-slap you. If you made it impossibly happy after Tom just got an appartment, then maybe I would like to, but I don't :) good job :) love it!!!!! :)
Author's Response: Waaaaaahh ahahaha Thank you for pointing out mistakes lmao!!XD I'll go change them later^^ And yeah! I got a new banner!!XD Kudos to my friend Aery for that. I actually bugged her to make me a new one heeeeXDrn
rnAhm... I already got bitch-slapped wahahaha so thank you for not bitch-slapping meXD I'm already writing the next chapter and it's quite stressful actually because of the drama.. But I promise to post it asap!! THANK YOU for the review my dear!!!^^ *mwahhuggZz*
Date: 05/16/09 04:27 pm Title: Chapter 10
I hate you...God I hate you! You...Just...I...UGH!!!!!!! I am on the verge of tears right now! So much angst and...Fuck me man! I don't know what to say... You're such a good writer!!! But I still hate!!! Great chapter...
Author's Response: You hate me. But it's better than ignoring me.. Aw, don't cry!!*grabs tissue and hands it out to Bwlover* Please don't be mad! I'm sure Bill and Tom will patch things up soon enough... Will you love me again if I update early? *doe eyes* Heeeee...XD Thank you so much for the revieeeewww!!*mwahhuggZz*
Date: 05/16/09 03:17 pm Title: Chapter 10
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My freaking toasted cheese!!... .>.>;; this hurt it hurt. why??? is there going to be happieness soon? Tom is a pain in the ass >.< well this chapter really too much freaking pain...
Date: 05/16/09 09:33 am Title: Chapter 10
THAT... THAT... OH MY GOD.
THAT*S A FREAKING NEW LEVEL OF IDIOCY. I JUST WANNA BEAT SOME SENSE INTO HIM! HOW CAN TOM BE SO STUPID?
Date: 05/16/09 09:08 am Title: Chapter 10
Don't you say it's shitty crap! I should bitchslap you for saying it is! Goodness.
I love this story, and this chapter pulled at my heart strings. Was surprised that Selene turned up!
But oh noes at the argument. ): They'll work it out right? D:
xxx
Author's Response: *receives bitchslap* Ooooooooowwww!!*rubs face* Lol...XD Yeah, Selene showed up... At least she didn't cause trouble, ne? NOW..The argument. I was really having doubts about the choice I made, but then I thought this option would make more sense for the next chapter's drama lol..XD Yes, next chapter is another fluffy drama...XD Don't worry they'll work things out.^^ THANK YOU very much for the review!!^^*mwahhuggZz* -hands out Tomi cookies-
Date: 05/05/09 09:37 pm Title: Chapter 9
Stupid boys.
I love this fic. It's amazing, and seems completely plausible, only more so if it were different people...
I was enraptured the entire time! Update soon, please!
Author's Response: Correct! Stupid boys! Hmph!! LOL..XD So glad you loved this fic..^^ THANK YOU!!! And thank you very much for the review!!^^ *mwahhuggZz* I'll try to update as soon as I can.^^
Date: 05/05/09 11:07 am Title: Chapter 9
Wow, that was the best chapter yet... it was just amazing =) Stupid Tomi >.< and Gillian couldn't get any cuter xD
Author's Response: Love Gillian!! BABY!!*coos* And yeah.. Stupid Tomi forever... Ugh.. Weee... Thanks so much for the review my dear!!^^ *mwahhuggZz*
Date: 05/05/09 01:31 am Title: Chapter 9
-stares blinking back tears- that broke my heart please FIX IT! Tom needs to Tell Bill before its too late and I think that Georg needs to but in =D but yeah.. I want more love this story so much
Author's Response: Georg will have to grill Tom, ne? Stupid Tomi... Thank you very much for taking your time to review!!*mwahhuggZz*^^
Date: 05/04/09 09:38 pm Title: Chapter 9
Oh no :'( My heart stopped when I read the last part. Omg!!! no!!! I don't want Tomi to leave... And, and, Gillian doesn't want Dada Tomi to leave either!!!!
There are little itsy bitsy typos here and there, but nothign really major, and the timeline is sort of nonexistant, which I don't really mind, except I sort of want Christmas, and Gillian's birthday. :) hehehe :) selfish me...
I do love it, and my stomach dropped when I read that last part. Well first it did a happy backflip, when Tom realized that he did love Bill, and i thoguht he was calling Georg to tell him that he was right, and then the moving thing. And then my stomach dropped, and yeah... I love it though!!! So want to see what happens next :) and i want to know why Bill had a gun, especially in an easy spot for Gillian to reach, and all that jazz. More about Bill's past too... I want to know it ALL! :)
Author's Response: I'm so glaad you pointed things out. I'm really pissed off with my stupid spelling issues!! My Word can't detect the errors!! It's really frustrating, I don't know how to fix it!!@_@ The timeline too!! Goodness!! It was supposed to start around summer, ja? But I keep forgetting how weeks have passed every after chapter! It was only right after reading chapter 8 that I realized my mistake..T^T Stupid me..*slaps face*T^T And now I missed SEPTEMBER *hint, hint* because it's Fall season already!! Argh!! We'll have snow, and Christmas -that I'm pretty sure. HeeeXD Anyways... TOM is a big shit. Bill is a big Shit too. Gillian is the only one who makes sense. Adults are just damn complicated ne, little Gillian?*coos^^* LMAO... ABOUT THE GUN!! Ahahaha... Someone else will have to explain that to TOM. LMAO!!XD But it's only Bill who knows about the gun..^^ And yes.. There's a chapter about Bill's past too...@_@ But I'm still figuring out if I'd do the original plan (which will make the fic a bit looooonger), or still change a few stuffs. But it's definitely going to be there^^ SO!!! After the long speech, I finally get to THANK YOU!! THANK YOU VERY MUCH for the review!! *mwahhuggZz* It really helps me a lot lol..XD
Date: 05/04/09 06:22 pm Title: Chapter 9
aww this almost made me kry=[ update soon plz thx
Date: 05/04/09 06:03 pm Title: Chapter 9
*vitamins for you*
Oh you're making me cry with this chapter! I actually have tears coming out of my eyes! I love this story even though it makes me cry! I'm so glad I found this story! Awsome story1
Author's Response: Ooooohhh *grabs tissue* here you go dear^^ I'm so glad you loved this story!! And thank you for the review! It really motivates me to continue writing... Thank you very much!! *mwahhuggZz*^^
Date: 05/04/09 05:34 pm Title: Chapter 9
GODDAMNIT TOM!!! STOP BEUNG A PUSSY AND FIGHT FOR YOUR MAN!!! Kay, I feel better...Sorry but Tom is just so ughh!!! and I want to kill Andi >.> The only one with a lick of sense is Gillian, and Bill is denial too man!!! I think this is the ONLY story that gets me mad...Great job!!! ^.^
Author's Response: LOL!! Uhmm.. Thanks, I guessXD I love your reaction though..XD I was kinda like that too when Tom was starting to back out. I mean, come on!! If some guy can steal someone else's wife, what more if it's just a boyfriend/girlfriend relationship??!?! LMAO.. I know it sounds BAD, but Tom isn't EXACTLY stealing ANYONE. No.XD And YES!! Gillian is the only one who makes sense of them all. Love that kid.^^ Adults are just... Complicated. DAMN complicated.. Sheeesh...
Date: 05/04/09 04:20 pm Title: Chapter 9
omg!! Tom is moving ToT ...so sad, but maybe is better in that way cos Tom suffer a lot to see Bill with Andreas ¡_¡
Don't let him go Bill!!!
Hope to read the next chap soon ;)
Author's Response: Yes, Tom suffers... And yes, Tom has a lot of reasons (or excuses, lol) on moving out of the house.. Sigh...T^T I can't promise anything yet, since it's a kinda busy week. But I'll upload as soon as I can^^ THANK YOU very much for the review!!^^ *mwahhuggZz*
Date: 05/04/09 02:10 pm Title: Chapter 9
Uh oh.
THAT FREAKING MORON! THAT COMLETELY STUPID IDIOT!
Okay, khm, good to get that out of my system.
Please, please tell me they'll get together soon. I can't bear to see Tom suffering!
And he should really see, that Bill has opened up to HIM and NOT Andreas. That moron...
*huff*
Author's Response: I hope you're calm now while reading this. I don't want my head split *hides under Patrick's rock* LOL..XD I can't promise anything at the moment except for a bit more drama... DON'T HIT ME YET!! *undercover* I know, I know..@_@ Tom is killing me right now with his stupidity along with BIll's. Stupid people in love makes stupid mistakes. Love makes us stupid after all..-___- anyways, back to writing lol..XD Thanks for the review dear!! *mwahhuggZz*
Date: 05/03/09 12:41 am Title: Chapter 8
"Lucky" is one of the sweetest songs I've ever heard in my life.
I love this story. It's fun and wild, and I enjoy reading it every moment! Please continue!
Author's Response: Was that the name of the song I mentioned?? Ahahaha...XD Glad you liked this!^^ THANK YOU VERY MUCH!!^^ *mwahhugZz*
Date: 05/02/09 11:52 am Title: Chapter 8
The notebook, I watched it 3 weeks ago! And I just feel like slapping some sense into Tom, he's so olivious >.< I hope your tunmmy feels better soon =)
Author's Response: Aw, Thanks!! Tummy feels a bit better now:O The Notebook is LOVE. Lol..XD And everyone wants to slap Tom right now ahaha..XD Thank you for reading and for the review dearie! *mwahhuggZz*
Date: 05/01/09 06:32 pm Title: Chapter 1
Me either!!!